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Submitted: Jul 6, 2008 Reads: 51 Comments: 6 Likes: 1
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Wow, I tell you to write a romance and instead I get destruction of the human race. However, the work is good. I know you don't want to, but keep working on English and capitalization.
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
This is turning a little... freaky.. although I can start to get a hint for an ending
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
dude u shoulda been a nostradamus songwriter "End of the human race" nice story lol EVERY1 WRITE MURDER MYSTERYS BUT ME
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
OMG that was so freaky! That poor man was burried alive! Really cool, I can't wait to read more. Not as many typos in this chapter, so you are improving! Yay! ^^
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
WOW! Intense, but I loved it. Call me crazy but that was kinda cool. Keep tyiping up some new awesome stories!
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
Wow,scary.
Posted: Jul 12, 2008
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