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Horrific Romanc

Book By: Darknessinside
Romance


Thsi is about a not so happy couple View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Submitted: Jul 6, 2008    Reads: 51    Comments: 6    Likes: 1   


Chapter 2
Ted's meeting
           Ted pulled up to a graveyard. It was dark and there was  little commotoion except for a few men dressed in dark black trench coats. There was also a man tied to a tree. He was blindfolded and gaged.The men and trenchcoats asked Ted " Who is he who must not be seen". Ted answered " He is the one". Then he poitned to the man. The grave diggers untied and threw him to the hole. They then began to burry him alive. You could ere the man grunting as he tried to screen but couldn't because of the gag. Then the gravediggers chanted in response to his grunts " Your screams cannot be heard. You must not be seen. You will be burried alive. Just like the rest of man kind." Ted was also chanting. Finaly when the man was completley under the soil. They placed  a tombstone above him. It said "He who is unseen. He who cannot scream." Ted got back in hos car and drove to get something to eat then he was heading home.


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Comments:

Wow, I tell you to write a romance and instead I get destruction of the human race. However, the work is good. I know you don't want to, but keep working on English and capitalization.

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

lol and NO
but next chapter is romance

This is turning a little... freaky.. although I can start to get a hint for an ending

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

he he thx i hope like it

dude u shoulda been a nostradamus songwriter "End of the human race" nice story lol EVERY1 WRITE MURDER MYSTERYS BUT ME

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

lol this not a muredr mysterio it actually gonna turn into a romance gone wrong or that is the plot i mtrin to get t just the graver diggers kill those unworthy of hman race

OMG that was so freaky! That poor man was burried alive! Really cool, I can't wait to read more. Not as many typos in this chapter, so you are improving! Yay! ^^

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

lol thx i tpye to fast and chapter 5 ill be commin out soon

WOW! Intense, but I loved it. Call me crazy but that was kinda cool. Keep tyiping up some new awesome stories!

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

thx it not done yet lol yea i just thought of the idea

Wow,scary.

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

yup lol



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