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Submitted: Jul 6, 2008 Reads: 38 Comments: 8 Likes: 1
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Man, Vince has really bad luck. First he has to wear pants, now he is burned alive. Poor guy.
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
Oh no Vince died?
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
Here's an idea for Chapter 5.....Our buddy Vince faked death and really lived through the fire. At the mall, he confronts Ted and Lisa. Ted is shot and has to be taken to the hospital. Vince asks Lisa why he has to wear pants all the time. Our friend Teddy comes back in Chapter 6.
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
Fine, but Ted thinks he's dead. The mall scene would be fantastic.
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
that was the worst novel and ending i have ever read. get a life
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
THAT! WAS NICE! I feel sorry for the guy though. I'm craving for more!
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
Ricky you douchebag, go kill yourself. Anyway, someone slacking the next chapter?
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
Wow,huh...Poor Vince...I hate Ted,lol...
Posted: Jul 12, 2008
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