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Horrific Romanc

Book By: Darknessinside
Romance


Thsi is about a not so happy couple View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Submitted: Jul 6, 2008    Reads: 38    Comments: 8    Likes: 1   


Chapter 4
The note
The next morning Vince wakes up to a loud crash. He looked outside to see several men in Black Trenchcoats getting into a car. He goes downstairs and finds a note. The note says "He must not be seen, We give u a choice, You can leave and live a little longer or stayprepare to get a burning feeling. VInce goes to reach for the phone but then hears another boom. He smells smoke. His house has been lit on fireby some sort of bomb. He tries to get throught the front door but it is stuckk. He dials 911 and asks for the fire department. The fire department is on it's way but the flames stil rage on. Vince is now huddled in a corner as he watches the flames run rampant through his house. He starts to pray to God. He hears sirens. The flames are in his face by this point cornered no where to move. He begins to feel his clothes light on fire when a fire man comes and extinguishs the fire infornt of him. He grabs vince and drags him out. And the profe of the men who did this to him is up in flames with his house. Meanwhile Ted and Lisa are eating breakfeats and talking casoully. Then Ted's cell phone rings. He answeres " hello". The voice says "he who must not be seen is up in flames." Ted replies "excellent im off the rest of the day." He tells his wife today is gonna be all about her. Lisa asks if they can go shopping today. Ted replies "sure." after breakfest they head off to the mall.


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Comments:

Man, Vince has really bad luck. First he has to wear pants, now he is burned alive. Poor guy.

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

he lived lol

Oh no Vince died?

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

fire man saved him

Here's an idea for Chapter 5.....Our buddy Vince faked death and really lived through the fire. At the mall, he confronts Ted and Lisa. Ted is shot and has to be taken to the hospital. Vince asks Lisa why he has to wear pants all the time. Our friend Teddy comes back in Chapter 6.

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

lol good idea but vince lived anyway fire man saved him

Fine, but Ted thinks he's dead. The mall scene would be fantastic.

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

yea ted think's he si dead
cuz the grave diggers thought they burned him alive

Ricky
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that was the worst novel and ending i have ever read. get a life

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

it isn't over yet doushe bag don't sa anything if u have nothing nice to say thx to u im cutting myslef nowi hope u die of cancer to the face

THAT! WAS NICE! I feel sorry for the guy though. I'm craving for more!

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

thx lol

Ricky you douchebag, go kill yourself. Anyway, someone slacking the next chapter?

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

i know the next chaper is done i just need to publish it

Wow,huh...Poor Vince...I hate Ted,lol...

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

u hate ted awwww o well ted is suppose to be hated i guess vince is your fav



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