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Submitted: Jul 8, 2008 Reads: 44 Comments: 6 Likes: 1
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Lol ou.. you and your tortures
Posted: Jul 8, 2008
It's a great chapter....good English! Some of the details are vile, though. LOL Great work!
Posted: Jul 8, 2008
good job! i could see them bein tortured in my head!
~Lemon
Posted: Jul 8, 2008
Omg!!Such a terrible punishment.That hurts a lot probably,lol...
Cant wait to read next chapter!!
:)
Posted: Jul 12, 2008
Hey,I was wondering can you tell me when you write next chapter?
Posted: Jul 16, 2008
This was a good story! Keep me posted when u have more!
Posted: Jul 22, 2008
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