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Horrific Romanc

Book By: Darknessinside
Romance


Thsi is about a not so happy couple View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Submitted: Jul 8, 2008    Reads: 44    Comments: 6    Likes: 1   


Chapter 6
Failures' Funeral
Well after Ted hung up the phone he went back to the table to catch vince talking to Lisa. Ted hid untill Vince left then went over to Lisa. They finsihed their lunch and then Lisa forced Ted to go shopping for another hour. The they headed home. Later that day Vince was at his mother's house alone. The grave diggers who failed tried again to avoid their funerals. They all had machine guns, and fired rapidly and randomly through all the windows in th house. They then went inside to see vince lying on the floor and then he slowly got up. They were out of ammo so they bolted. When they were running they were mauled by the other grave diggers. When they woke up the four of them were tied together and gagged. Their faces were visable to the other grave diggers for the first time. Ted was the only grave digger who didn't where a black vail over his face. One of the men had a terrible scar accross his face. The rest of the men looked like normal people. Ted told them "For your failure you shall perish."you would've been buried honorly but you ran. So u will be killed under worst punishment the grave diggers walked up and said their incantaion except they replaced he who should not be seen with failures. They approached the men stabbed them all in both of their arms. The then poured alchol all over them to increase the pain. They continued to bleeed as they grave diggers stabbed them in more places. They were bleeding all over the gorund. Then they were throne into the pit and burrired. While hey were being buried they were still bleeding histericly while the alchol burned their wounds ad eyes. You could hear their muffled moans of pian, agony, and terror. Soon they were burried and you heard no more.


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Comments:

Lol ou.. you and your tortures

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

lol i proffread this time lol and i love tortures

It's a great chapter....good English! Some of the details are vile, though. LOL Great work!

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

thx i porffread for once

good job! i could see them bein tortured in my head!
~Lemon

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

lol i am pretty descriptivein horror secese neve rin other scenes lol

Omg!!Such a terrible punishment.That hurts a lot probably,lol...
Cant wait to read next chapter!!
:)

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

heyy yea it does

Hey,I was wondering can you tell me when you write next chapter?

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

sry ive been busy lately but the next chapter will be up soon

This was a good story! Keep me posted when u have more!

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

sure def



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