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My Hopeless Heartache

Miscellaneous By: Argetlam
Romance



This is a song I wrote after my heartbreak with Frankie...(to find out who Frankie is, see my bio/summary) :) Suggestions as to better title would be much appreciated, and suggestions as to changes in the actual song are welcome. :) Just don't be mean about it please. My writing is very important to me. Feedback...not comebacks please. Thank you!


Submitted:Dec 16, 2011    Reads: 23    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


Can't you see the tears I'm crying

Can't you heal the hurt I'm feeling

What happened between us that made you want to leave me

What else can I do to relieve my agony

(chorus)

I've tried so hard to find true love

And just when I succeed

You walk away and leave me

And my broken heart to bleed

(end of chorus)

I thought we had something precious

I thought you cared

Now my life's an empty chorus

I can't bear to see you with all those other damsels

Because you are the only knight for me

I've tried so hard to find true love

And just when I succeed

You walk away and leave me

And my broken heart to bleed

You walk away and leave me

And my broken heart to bleed





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