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Mosquito

By: ejem
Romance


This is just what I wrote when looking at an artwork by Minchi called "Mosquito". The art is amazing and i recommend you look at it! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 30, 2008    Reads: 33    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


His body fell to its knees as her sweet flavour passed through his nose. Hungrily he licked the air that rested on his lips for the luscious taste. Heavy were his eyes as sugar white skin pressed against his flushed chest. Ripples of rapture sweep through the red water pulsing underneath his shell of splendour. Muscles squeeze, they swell with all their strength. She pushes her thorn into his spirit; moans erupt within his heaving chest, flooding his mouth with honey and showering their ears with deep burning cries. Mahogany lashes flutter while she continues to taste him; her longing begins to control her. She grasps onto the thin tangerine cuffs of his blouse, pressing her peach cushions against his buttery flesh. His back curls underneath the pressure of her mouth and his heart murmurs “Amor” and her heart murmurs “Amor”.

By Eliza Morton

Artist: Minchi

Painting: Mosquito


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Comments:

very descriptive. there's a lot of passion in your words. great picture and interpretation.

Posted: May 30, 2008

Author Comment:

awww wow thankyou that means alot :)

hi! el. WOW. this artwork is worthy of ur romantic words. an extremely vivid imagery. loved it. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

:D thanks alot! :D



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