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Woman(Lullaby)

By: KamiKaze no Onryou
Romance


This is a my remake of John Lennon's song on his 1980-81 album, Double Fantasy. This lullaby/Poem is, like Lennon did, for my girlfriend. I don't see this as an ode to other women like his song because mine just focuses on my girlfriend, though I think at some stanzas it does. Well, anyways I hope you enjoy it. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 22, 2008    Reads: 28    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


Woman,
Please lend me your ears,
And I'll sing you a lullaby.

Woman,
Give me your heart.
So I can give you my love.

Woman,
Please give me your mind,
So you can tell me,
What's right.
And what's wrong.

And woman,
Don't ever stop being yourself.
My heart can't take that.

Please tell me,
Oh please tell me woman,
That you love me.
Because I love you!

Woman!
Please be there for me!
I'll be there for you!
I'll never stop loving you!

Woman...
You'll always be in my heart!


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Comments:

loved your story unbeliveable you are talented,please read my new story "the black sword" please wright a comment please.........hope you like it

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, for the great comment! And I will be glad to read your story!



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