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Tiffany...

By: kissme13
Romance


Something I wrote one day stuck in orlando bored out of my mind. its juss about my attraction and magnetic pull to someone in important in my life right now. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 22, 2008    Reads: 16    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


I walk the street at dusk with no real place to go no specific destination in mind as I walk the cars seem to move too slow the lights are dim there is no noise audible to my ear even as I pass a young group of kids their laughter does not reach my ears my feet seem to walk with a purpose I know not of I turn a corner and there she is sitting in front of a building and suddenly it dawns on me like waves crashing to shore. The sound of the summer city night Is now full blast and I blink as if I see with the eyes of newborn baby she is as clear as day I dare not take another step for fear that this is a dream and when I wake she will not be there she is the path my feet unknowingly lead to she is the reason my eyes see with new light she is the reason I can hear the wind lightly ruffling the leaves she is the reason my heart has not slowed  and the butterflies continue to dance inside my stomach I speak the name of this heavenly creature as softly as the wind…. Tiffany….


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It has good imagery and good use of metaphor. If you like romance writing please read some of my poems.

Posted: Sep 22, 2008



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