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Mistress Past Her Prime Leaves Door Open

By: liveandlearn
Romance


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Submitted: Sep 15, 2008    Reads: 50    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


"When you walk out this door I don't cease to exist." I cried, shivering in my dime-store negligee.

The neighbors mustn't see me standing here, I thought, sagging in places plastic surgeons mark in permanent ink.

He turned, unforgettable eyes piercing my hastily-constructed armor. "Yes you do. To me you do." I closed the door.


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Comments:

This is very well-written, very nice. I like the metaphorical theme to it as well.

Posted: Sep 15, 2008

Hmmm. Interesting. It captures the feelings and emotions of the moment quite well. Nicely done.

Posted: Sep 15, 2008



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