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I Love You.........

Novel By: Angel Stories
Romance


Love hurt but if you find somebody who fell the same way you just want to say I Love you............. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 22, 2008    Reads: 61    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


I am sorry if it not that good but it was one of my first novels so I am sorry if it’s not so good

 

I Love You…

 

Chapter One

 

(A Kiss from An Angel…)

 

 

Where are my glasses

 

A boy: here

 

Thanks

 

That voice is so wonderful it make my heart bound so much

 

The boy: I love your cute face.

 

The boy kissed me his kiss felled like an angel kiss it was my first kiss that wonderful

Lips it makes me fell like I died and gone to heaven

 

In addition, he said: I love you

 

I put my glass on and when I look, I saw him running

 

The End

 

 

Claps

 

The teacher: greet work Joshua you can sit now

 

Joshua: ok.

 

Ring…………………

 

Joshua wait

 

Joshua: Kevin what wrong??????

 

Kevin: good story.

 

Joshua smalls genteelly and say: thanks but don’t make a scene.

 

Kevin: sorry don’t forget you will come to my house tomorrow.

 

Joshua: I won’t forget ever.

 

Kevin blush a little

 

Joshua: what wrong your face is red?

 

Joshua gets to close to Kevin

 

Kevin face turn red run and says: bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Joshua has a confused look on his face: bye?????????

 

Joshua look at his watch: Oh my I forget

 

He start running he stop after he reach the airport thank god I am not late

 

A woman called: Joshua!!!!!!!!!!

 

Joshua: mom

 

He run and hugged her

 

Joshua: your home I love you.

 

Joshua mom: you’re sweating why?

 

Joshua: because I ran from school to come here.

 

Joshua mom: but…

 

But nothing Joshua said you are the most important thing right now

 

Joshua mom: idiot like your father come let go home

 

Mom Joshua said while his eye almost filled with tear

 

Don’t cry your cute face will become red.

 

I love you mommy

 

Ok let stop this talks and go home I stop a taxi and you get the bags you know how my bags look like?

 

Joshua: Yes.

 

Joshua Mom: Ok go get them

 

Joshua: Roger sir

 

Joshua Mom: Ha-ha cute

 

Joshua:What's  funny

 

Joshua Mom: Nothing.

 

Joshua looks for his mother bags he found them.

 

When he tries to left them he can’t and said it heavy how mom can left these

Embrsing my own mother is stronger then me.

 

Can I help you? a boy said

 

Joshua looks at him and said to him self (gorgeous)

 

The boy looked gorgeous with his light blonde hair that looked silver in the sunset light and his big blue eyes.

 

The boy: let me help you.

 

Joshua: thanks but….

 

The boy: I can’t take but for an answer you have to help the one that need help right.

 

Joshua small sweetly and said: ok but I carry the half.

 

The boy: ok you carry this bag.

 

Joshua: It a small bag.

 

The boy: I don’t want you to break your gentle hand.

 

He kissed Joshua hand like a knight kissing the princess hand.

Joshua face turns to red and he remove his hand away and said what do you thank

You are doing?

 

The boy: nothing by the way my name is Angel.

 

Joshua: my... name…is…. Joshua (ah!!!!!!!!!! I can’t believed he did that what an idiot)

 

Angel: are you ok common where do you want me to go?

 

Joshua: fellow me.

 

Joshua and Angel reach to the taxi that Joshua mom stops.

Joshua mom: wow you carry all this heavy bags by your self.

 

Joshua: by myself a boy helped me huh where is he?

 

Joshua looked left and right and didn’t see Angel where is he

 

Common Joshua mom said

 

Joshua: ok.

 

When they reach home he ran to his bedroom.

 

Joshua mom: weird?

 

Joshua jump to the bed and said to him self (who is he why did he leave and why my

Heart hurt and beating so much god tell me please tell me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

 

 

 

 

Chapter One

 

End


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Comments:

Kathy
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I didn't really get this story ... you probably need to edit it a lot more. But I liked the story that you were trying to tell. Keep the good work up!

Posted: Aug 16, 2008



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