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"COLOUR OF CHANGE"

Novel By: Azmat Shah
Romance


O.k I really need help on this, i need to know what you guys think. This story is basically centered on a marriage of convenience(Yeah i know, it been done to death but hear me out)
Well the herione is a pakistani, someone with eastern ethos and sensibilities while the not so dashing prince is half English, and someone who despises his "Paki" roots and is understandably skeptical about marrying someone from a country that's often painted as the extremist Las Vegas of the world, but the family patriarch(Adams Grandfather) manipulates both the main protagonists, and what ensues is a clash of not only ideals but of civilizations. I wanted to write something that read like a romantic comedy, only it'll last a lot longer than a few hours.
I wrote this book cuz i want to show everyone that no matter how different we are, not matter how insurmountable our difficulties may be, we can still find love and understanding, For a lasting Love comes from compromise and understanding, and open mindedness.

O.K NWFP stands for north west frontier province, its a northern province of Pakistan which is home to the most beautiful mountains in the world. Did you know that 14 of the 30 tallest peaks of the world are in N.W.F.P. Its a beautiful province and the indigenous population is pathan, a people who are known as much for their valor as they are for their hospitality. Unfortunately in the west its only portrayed as a terrorist hub.

Lahore is the capital of Punjab Province, which is the most affluent in Pakistan and boasts the most complex and old irrigation system in the world. It is also special because of its fertile lands, its the agricultural hub of Pakistan. The local people are Punjabi's.

Karachi is the capital of Sindh province and is among the five biggest cities on earth. This huge metropolis is the economic heart of Pakistan. Its strategically important cuz of its two ports. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 23, 2008    Reads: 87    Comments: 8    Likes: 5   


Several hours and almost four glasses of whisky later Adam sat in his lounge with his shirt sleeves rolled up and his rumpled tie still dangling drunkenly from his collar. Try as he might he couldn’t get himself to calm down, every time he came close he remembered the last words his grandfather had uttered and his simmering anger and frustration came to a roiling boil once more.

“Well look at the bright side darling,” Crooned a husky voice, “It’s not like you have to go and live in the godforsaken place. It’s just a marriage after all, not a binding contract.”

Adam lifted his gaze from his brooding study of the glass topped coffee table and gazed incredulously at his mother. Catherine shah, or Kat as she was fondly referred to among her friends sat upon the chaise opposite her son with a negligent grace which spoke eloquently of a woman who had always been regarded as a sensation. Her slender, manicured, red nailed fingers were holding onto a crystal stemmed glass half filled with sherry. Well groomed silvery blonde hair was piled artfully high on her head in a deceptively simple chignon.

For a sixty year old she still looked smashing, nary a wrinkle on her soft white skin or a line marring her smooth forehead. Her narrow, oval face with its arrogant aristocratic features still gave the illusion of middle age, thanks to the miracle of botox as she often called it and a strict diet which would have shamed a monk. That was why her slender figure encased sumptously in a five thousand pound Chanel suit was still the envy of women half her age, or so she thought. As Adam stared sullenly at her, he wondered how best to get her out of his apartment. All he wanted to do was get sotted and it was damn hard to do so with her tut tutting like an indignant hen. He needed to forget his worries for a while but it seemed his damn family wasn’t going to give him that chance.

“Do you want another drink?” He asked dryly instead of shoving her out the door, silently cursing his father for telling her everything.

With an irritated wave of her hand she stood up, eying her son through narrowed blue eyes which were mirror images of his own. “No I don’t want a drink!” She hissed incensed, “And I think you’ve had more than enough,” she added as Adam made to get up, heading for the miniature bar set up across the room. “You should be thinking about your strategy to counter this mess not getting drunk as a wheelbarrow.” She informed him shrilly.

"God save me from meddling relatives," Adam despaired for the hundredth time. First the confrontation with his grandfather and now this. It seemed the heavens were conspiring against him.

“Mother I have told you this before and I wont repeat myself again.” He explained, a tinge of impatience lacing his heavy baritone.” There’s nothing I can do. The company does belong to him, he has a controlling stake and he can bloody well leave it to anyone he wishes.” Adam held up his hand to stop her from interrupting him “As for a legal recourse I don’t think that’s going to work either, its only going to be a protracted slugfest not to mention a publicity nightmare which will hurt the company even more and shake investor confidence. Furthermore given the credit crunch hampering the economy and all the expansion going on we can’t afford to have any mishaps.”

“There must be something you can do for god’s sake. That bastard can’t just order us about for the rest of our lives.” She wailed “He is just doing this out of spite. That malicious old man is so filled with hatred of me that he’s taking it out on you. I just bet that evil old coot is savoring his ultimate revenge. He couldn’t get his son married off to the girl of his choice so now he’s getting back at me by forcing your hand.” She said bitterly, her anger increasing substantially as she realized that her own son was being forced into the same situation her husband had rebelled against so long ago.

Catherine had an almost overpowering urge to smash something, a habit which had cost her countless glass ornaments over the years, not to mention tons of money. Temper tantrums unfortunately were second nature to her. Taking a deep breath she tried to remember what her therapist had been telling her only yesterday, something about "Positive thinking and Karma" or some such, "Oh screw that!" she raged inwardly, valiantly refraining from throwing the ming Dynasty vase lying peacefully atop the chippendale side table to the tiled floor, “Oh why doesn’t he just die and get out of our hair once and for all. You would think an eighty nine year old would have the decency to cock up his toes by now.”

Adam stared at her warily and poured himself another whisky. He had always lived in the middle of a family battleground but his mothers hate filled words still had the power to make him cringe.

Catherine and her father in law had always been at loggerheads, ever since Adam could remember. Many a family get together had been ruined by their sniping at each other. It had made his childhood a living hell for he was always stuck between both the warring sides, constantly having to try and broker peace since his father had seldom stepped in. But Adam had borne the brunt of it since early childhood, for he’d been the tool his mother had often used to get back at her father in law. Often stopping her son from visiting his grandparents until she got her way. Afzal had never forgiven his son for choosing a white woman as his wife and consequently never accepted her as his daughter in law and Catherine had retaliated by driving a wedge between the families, a gulf that had still not been bridged.

 


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Comments:

Hmmm this split makes it more interesting and manages to 'grab' the attention of the readers' attention....

but the previous format was also fine buddy....when r u going to post 3rd chapter?

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Hey Pratibha, comon girl stop being so stingy with ur comments lol. Tell me what you thought of the story itself. Do you like it or not. I will post the third chapter just as soon as you give me a more thorough comment lol.

I don't like it i love it! But since love it isn't in button form, I'm just put like it 4 now. Keep it up :D

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for LOVING it, you don't know how good that makes me feel LOL

I loveeee it!!
I don't really know what else to say
:]
On to the next chpterr!

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Boy you really are a voracious reader, and God Bless you for being one. Hey i would really appreciate longer comments lol. They are like oxygen for my brain, they help me churn out pages worth of new details. So if you want me to keep updating quickly you'll have to tell me in detail what you think lol.

yep...on to chp 3

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL

I already commented on this one, so that go to the next.

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL

I really like the way you describe your characters and setting. It's informative but doesn't go on forever. And I'm not sure if I like his mom or not yet. But I'll read more and see if I can decide then...

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Hello,
thank you again, it was a very deliberate effort on my part to make sure that this one was descriptive as well pacy at the same time. I wanted the narrative to be fun and engaging it feels so good to know that i have succeeded to some extent LOL.

Azmat, from the look of things so far, this chapter was just as good as the first. I'm truly intrigue with the way you write. The way you describe the characters and set the atmosphere makes it easy to follow along.

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx. I hope you like the next chapters just as much. I will be taking all the way to Pakistan so bring your Camera along LOL.

been here, read this ;)
on to the next lol

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

O.K LOL.



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