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The Moon Watches Us

Novel By: azure2skies
Romance


In a peaceful and serene place where people live simple lives, two people will find themselves bounded together by destiny. The Moon Watches Us is a romantic tale of two lovers who can only meet at night, under the pallid shade of the moonlight. Perplexing and confounding, they soon discover one another’s secrets, as well the mysteries surrounding them in such a tranquil town. Later on, they will find out the big role the moon will play in their relationship, and they will eventually learn to conquer all for love. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 11, 2008    Reads: 690    Comments: 41    Likes: 6   


Chapter 1
His View

It was sunset earlier than usual on that crisp and fair day. But I was still there, ambling on the russet fields looking around. I knew it was late. But I refused to go home, for I was waiting for someone. The weeds and grasses were all swaying gracefully with the course of the gentle breeze in the atmosphere. The meadow I was sauntering on was overlooking a wide sea. I could see the aquamarine waters under the cool orange skies. The calm waves smoothly striking the edge of the land made a rejuvenating sound of serenity. On the faded horizon, I could see a foggy mountain with a strange hut resting atop it.  As I meandered through the fields, I could also hear the relaxing chirp of the robins resting upon the large Acacia tree beside me. I could see the leaves of the tree slowly gliding down like pieces of brown paper, withering and falling from the heavens. Autumn was good. Since I was but a little kid, I have always found autumn to be one interesting – no, the most interesting of all seasons. It is a phase when everything wilts and withers. Everything turns orange and the temperature dies down. Autumn, besides its interesting events, always brings back many memories of my life. I lifted up my head and looked at the heavens and I saw it gradually getting darker and darker. Slowly, I started to daydream about the reminiscences I had in that particular season.

I had barely begun when I noticed someone arrive at the field. The person I had been waiting for had finally come. Quickly, I crouched and hid myself behind the tall auburn weeds. The moon was full and it had just begun to dominate the skies. I knew it was night. Through the moonlight, I could clearly see the person I waited for. She was there, standing near the edge of the land, gazing upon the extensive sea, staring blankly upon the tranquil horizon. She was beautiful. Her long hair was as smooth as strands of black silk. Her complexion was white and looked as smooth as a freshly-picked apple. I continued to look at her, for her beauty was worth of a million years of staring. Momentarily, she would look behind her, as if she had sensed my presence. She would give the grasses behind her a suspicious look, as if she was wondering if someone was watching her. But I didn’t care. I knew I was well hid under the dark shadows of the Acacia tree beside me. Every time she would look behind, I could see her lovely face under the white moonlight. Her eyes were glowing in the night, and her cheeks were rosy. As she continued to gaze perplexedly upon the sea, I also continued to gaze at her. It went on for a long time until the full moon was already high above the sky. She took a little white handkerchief from her pocket. She then gently wiped it on her rosy face as she slowly walked away from the russet field where we stayed for about an hour. I watched her every move while my mind contemplated on whether I should approach her or not. Part of me just wanted to go and introduce myself to her, but part of me kept on thinking that I was just plain crazy. What was I doing, following a girl around in a tranquil field? I didn’t even know who she was and what was she doing there.

It all began a few weeks before that very day, when autumn had just begun. I was riding my old rusty bicycle down the long asphalt road from work. It was a newly-discovered shortcut, and it was the first time I passed through that route. The sun was still warm and the fields were still filled with a few lush green grasses and yellow sunflowers. I was marveling at the picturesque sceneries when a girl – the very same beautiful girl – caught my eyes. She was there, standing at the very same spot, gazing upon the wide ocean. I kept my eyes focused on her, marveling on her beauty, not noticing that a large piece of rock was lying on the ground in front of my bike’s route. Needless to say, my bicycle tires tripped and I mindlessly fell down the road and scraped my knee, giving off a red liquid called blood. But little did I feel the pain of my tumble, for I was busy looking at her. My brain was too busy to tell my body that something bad had just happened. She looked so beautiful. Starting from that very day, I longed to see her at the end of each afternoon, like a chain smoker longing for a pack of cigarettes. Every afternoon, as I would ride home from my job, I would pass through that very same route and look at that very same pretty girl, standing on that very same spot, looking at that very same sea. Why she was there every day I did not knew. All I knew was that she was a mystery – a very perplexing mystery.

I went back to my senses under the shadows of the Acacia tree on that cool night. Before I could settle on introducing myself to her or not, she was already out of sight. The night fields were once again empty. I looked up the skies and once again saw the pallid moon, now partly concealed behind thick formations of nimbus clouds. It was going to rain. I stood up and left the shadow under the Acacia tree and gave the peaceful ocean one final look before picking up my bike which I left lying on the road. As I balanced myself on the old worn out seat of my bike, I used my feet to give its pedals a strong push. Autumn nights were cold. As I pedaled my bicycle down the asphalt road to my home, I could feel the windy chill around my whole body. I glanced at my side and the extensive field was still there. I saw the full moon still above the sky, and as I accelerated through the path laid before me, I had the eerie feeling that it was chasing me. As I rode my bike, the moon was always there, levitating in the sky, never out of my sight. I then saw the clouds getting thicker and thicker, slowly governing the sky. I had to hurry before it rains. Though I had my black ragged jacket on, my immune system had been weak since I was a little child and a little drizzle would surely cause me to catch a cold. I pedaled my bike a little faster. But it was too late. Rain fell down from the autumn heavens like millions of tears from the twinkling stars. The drizzle was cold and I was struggling to protect my head with my jacket when something caught my attention from afar.

There, on the other side of the field, was the same girl who left me earlier. She was there, struggling to get home amidst the unforgiving weather. The downpour was not too hard, but I suddenly felt that it was so malevolent. It did not spare her gorgeousness and sweet beauty, and so she walked as fast as she could. She was trying to find something that could shelter her from the rain. Her long black hair was soaked; her clothes were drenched. I knew it was the perfect time for me to make my move. I could not lose that possibly my only chance to get to know her and befriend her. I knew I could not waste even a single second. Quickly, I left my bike lying in the middle of the sodden road and risked my newly-bought pair of maroon slippers in the mucky field. I had to get to the other side before she was out of my sight. As I make my every step the only thing I could think of was her and my chance to finally talk with her. I suddenly glanced up and I saw the moon still there, following me like a watchful guardian overlooking its child. But there was no time to think of such similes. I had to progress and reach her as soon as possible.

With much delight, I managed to get across the grassland. I looked for a second and I realized that the field was wide. It’s hard to believe that I actually crossed that field, but I knew I did it because of her. I looked back at her again. She was still there, covering her head with her bare hands, trying to protect it from the harsh rainfall. I wasted no time. I ran towards her, slamming my feet on the ground and making a thumping sound against the wet earth. She heard my footsteps and she turned around, allowing me to once again see her angelic face. It was quite palpable that she was startled at my presence, as she backed away a few steps from where she was standing. I couldn’t blame her; after all, it was quite absurd for a beautiful girl like her to see a man running to her in such an empty and tranquil area. But I wanted to assure that she would not feel afraid of me; I wanted to show her that I was there for a purpose – and that purpose is her. I wanted to show her that I care for her and I wanted to protect her from harm. Without any hesitation, I took off my blue jacket, leaving body exposed to the rain.

“The rain is hard today and you might catch a cold,” I said. My voice was a little trembling as I talked. “Here, use my jacket.” I placed my jacket around her shoulders which were already soaked wet by the rain. The beat of my heart gradually got quicker and quicker, with fewer and fewer intervals between each pump. No words cold express the emotion I felt when I offered my jacket to her. But all those were about to change. “I’m sorry, stranger,” she said. “I am in a hurry. I have to go.” She forced the jacket I offered her off her shoulders and walked away from me.

“Wait,” I said. “I’m not going to harm you! I just want to help. The autumn rain is bad for you.” I walked and tried to catch up with her, but she staggered too fast it almost seemed like a run. My feelings were hurt by what she had done, but I did not hate her. My heart seemed like it was broken, rejected without a chance to prove itself worthy for her. After a few seconds, she was out of my sight. It was unfair. It was truly unfair. But I had no hard feelings. I remembered what my mother had always repeated to me when I was a little toddler. She always told me to look the bright side of things. That way, I would see the world in a different perspective – a better one. And so, I tried to understand why she ran away from me. Many different ideas flooded my mind. Perhaps she was just afraid. Perhaps she was shy. She was probably ashamed. She might have a problem. With all these excuses I made up, I felt a little better. What really troubled me was if I would still see her again the next afternoon. To make matters worse, I noticed that my wallet was missing. I knew I took it home from my job, but it suddenly disappeared from the deep pocket of my long white pants. In my mind, I tried to retrace my steps, and I hunched that it fell while I was concealing myself under the shadows of the Acacia tree in the middle of the fields. Even if I was not in the mood, I had to back to the tree to retrieve my wallet.

I kept on thinking on her as I walked that I didn’t notice that I was there already at the lone Acacia tree where I hid while I was gazing at her beauty. I strolled closer and closer to the large tree, and under its shadows I attempted to search for my misplaced wallet. My hands were already covered with chocolate mud before I finally laid my hands on the lost object. It was still there. I left it open, but thankfully, all my money were still intact. However, I was quite irritated to find out that a couple of small snails had invaded my wallet. I did not like insects and slugs. They were creepy. I picked up a small twig from the ground and used it to remove the mollusks. I sealed it and began to walk away from the Acacia tree. The rain had finally subsided. The beautiful girl was still bothering my mind. I forced myself not to think about it. Just then, on that very moment, I discovered something lying on the ground on the exact spot where she stood earlier when she was gazing at the sea.

I placed my wallet inside my pocket and marched towards the spot beside the once again serene ocean. On the damp grasses, I saw a transparent box lying on the ground. I went closer to it. It was a chocolate cake inside the box tied up with an elegant red ribbon. That object added to the mystery of the girl whose beauty I admired. Whether she intentionally left it there or accidentally dropped it no one knows. But one thing was for sure – the moon was still there, high above the sky, following me and watching my every move.

Next chapter to be published next week…
 


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Comments:

Your writing is so beautiful. I love it so far and I can't wait to see more chapters! Please keep up the good work, you have amazing talent! And I'd love it if you would let me know when more chapters are posted! =)
~Maple

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much. I am very much flattered by your comment. It feels so good that other people appreciate my writing. Don't worry, I will try my very best to inform you when the next chapters are published.

Sarah :)
(not registered user)

very nice... super descriptive!!! it's as if we're in the setting...

i wonder though... from where does this author get his inspiration to write such descriptive, hardcore romance? hmmmmmmmm.... :)

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for the praise. I get my inspiration from a special someone, as well as all of you readers who give your support to my works. :-)

not registered user
(not registered user)

I did not read your stoy but I'll support it haha >:)

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Ummmm..... okay.

cyan is cooler than azure
(not registered user)

azurezskies...
WOW!!!
I felt like I was there...
And I hoped I was There...
To see such beauty...
Within such serenity...

But you know why
for we all die
without that love
blessed by one above

both man and woman
will something span
with a wallet lost
and chocolate frost

may two live entwine
like those of a vine
may the girl's view
give us a clue

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much for your wonderful comment. I really like the last stanza of your poem. Don't worry, for I will try my best to make the next chapters are good as possible.

not registered user
(not registered user)

No words cold express the emotion I felt when I offered my jacket to her.

IS THAT REALLY COLD OR IS IT SUPPOSED TO BE COULD?

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

I apologize for the typo. It should be 'could.'

Some guy that will also make a novel
(not registered user)

Is L______ really gonna be her name?
Why is it so erotic?
(girl + wet clothes=something) >:)
You know who I am >:) =))

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Are you a mind reader? How did you come to conclusion that her name begins with L? I don't know you despite your claims that we are acquaintances. >:)

There is no erotic content in this novel. First of all, it rained. Why would you expect the girl's clothes to be dry? Second, the girl's clothes were described to be soaked before the man even approached her. Therefore, it is safe to assume that the "wetness" had nothing to do with the man, and therefore it is NOT erotic.

But still, I apologize if you find this novel rather arousing.

Cia
(not registered user)

really loved your novel!
you have my 1000000000000000% support(even if i have to study for college stuff!)

God bless always! :D

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much! But don't forget to prioritize your college studying. And if you have free time (which I'm sure you have), you can use that time to read my novel! :-) Thank you for the support. :-)

Azure? whats that? I like Purple
(not registered user)

Nice story but after reading the comments of "Some guy that will also make a novel" I don't know if your really impying that. But I will still read the story anyways.

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Once again, there is no erotic part in this novel. I never thought of such a thing while I wrote this. And if I wanted to publish an erotic novel, I could have placed it under the Erotica genre.

Thanks for complementing the story anyway and thank you for your support in my novel :)

give me a name
(not registered user)

just use the L____ E____ as her name haha... >:)

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm sorry, but I really do not understand what you are saying. I have no plans of naming her with the initials L. E. and I don't know where you got that idea. Nevertheless, thank you for the comment (it actually boosts up the ranking of my novel). :-)

The friend of the friend of your friend's friend
(not registered user)

I like your story
I wanna see what happens next
I can't wait for the next chapter to be released
I'm gonna support you all the way :D

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much! :-)

.......................
(not registered user)

nice story....

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much. Expect more twists in the future chapters. :-)

The enemy of my enemy is my friend, so your my friend >:)
(not registered user)

WHY? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooooo WHY NAME HER C_____ T_T I WANT L______ >:)

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

I don't really know what you are saying.

LOL >:) >:) >:) >:) >:) >:)
(not registered user)

LETS JUST NAME HER S______ >:) >:) >:) >:) >:)

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

What is S______ ?

Ginger+Pepper+Vanilla+Mint=Disgusting Food
(not registered user)

I WANT TO NAME HER MIRACLE >:) >:) >:) >:) >:) >:)

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the suggestion, but I have already decided what name to give her. :)

THE GUY WHO'S COMMENTING MOST OF THE TIME...
(not registered user)

I ran out of comment ideas :(
I'm gonna stop commenting until the second chapter is released >:)

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

I ran out of replies to your comments also.

196418155418128657987
(not registered user)

nice

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much. Expect more twists in the future chapters. :)

Negi Springfield
(not registered user)

Nice story,
I felt the story go by as if it I was the persona.
I'll support your story all the way ü

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

That was my goal. I want the reader to feel he or she is the persona. :) Thank you for the comment and the support and I hope that will read all the future chapters. :-):-)

The sun watches us
(not registered user)

I wanna read more of this story,
I wanna know more about the lady. :)

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Don't worry. The next chapter will be written from the girl's point of view. :) Thank you for the support.

themafia
(not registered user)

What a great story. Very descriptive. Post the other chapters soon. Hahahaha.

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much for the support. :-)

Your secret admirer
(not registered user)

I want to read everything you write, not because they are good, but because you wrote them :x

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

You broke my heart by saying it wasn't good. Just kidding. :-) Thanks for the comment.

Sarah :)
(not registered user)

there... another comment... juz as you requested.... i like how it is going, though i can't wait for more plot twists!!! will wait for chapter 3... though i should start regulating my reading of romance novels... i read this after finishing new moon, when i started in the 1/4th part of the book...
conclusion: reading too much romance novels in a day can cause headaches... especially when combined with college entrance exam reviews!!! wahaha... :)

Posted: Jul 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much, though I was actually requesting a comment in the second chapter and not in here... :-) But thanks anyway! I appreciate the support you give to my novel and I wish you all the best in your college entrance exams! :-)

this is really really good. at first, i thought this was going to be some cheesy romance novel, but this is really really good. the style of writing is very classical, almost as if it were written a long time ago. i really like it. keep going with it. totally awsome.

Posted: Jul 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much! I really appreciate your support to my novel. I will also that novel of yours and I have a feeling that I would like it. :-)

seethroughin the rain
(not registered user)

raining?dreanched clothes?isn't that quite sensual?
or is it that your protagonist is just blind?

Posted: Jul 26, 2008

Author Comment:

I wonder what would happen if you were in the shoes of the protagonist.

Hello Azure2skies,

Your story is quite captivating and the visulizations that come to mind are really astounding! I felt as if I too am standing in that field.

Thanks for the great read! I did not have time to read past Chapter 1 yet but, I am looking forwrd to it.

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much, Riobald! I amg lad that your appreciate my writing. I hope that you would read on. :-)

tintmad ako bshin ang haba

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

...

hahhaha may secret admirer ka kht panget ka jwk =p

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

inggit ka lang :-p

That story is so beautiful...
I want to be in the story...
Maybe I should right like you...
Deep words...But not with in congruence with the story line...i mean...they're poor, so how the hell will they know those words?azure...seriously...i didn't even know what azure is until a friend of mine told me it existed...
like the word though...
if it's going to be published...it ain't gonna be for illiterates....

Posted: Aug 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much for the comment. :-)

Beautifully written.

Posted: Aug 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much. Your comment will serve as one of my inspirations to try my best to make this novel as best as it could be. :-)

Guess Who??
(not registered user)

Beautifully Written,

Like the sweet poetry that comes from lovesick men
hahaha, inspiration comes in may forms
so your inspiration has taken the form of a woman, perhaps?
I am eager to find out

So who, in our school, has captivated your heart so much that you would write such an interesting novel to vent out your feelings?

=)

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much for the comment and thank you very much for taking the time to read my novel. I was just wondering who might you be since you appear to be someone from my school. :) Anyway, about the inspiration - it does not come from someone in our school :-P :-)

Once again, thank you for the support. I really appreciate it. :-)

your story is amazing
well done
^^

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much for the comment. :-)

an acquaintance and secret fan~ =)
(not registered user)

Wow. You're totally good!

It's hard to find nice stories like this one in Booksie. Ever thought of becoming a pro? Haha

I hope you update more often because I think I'm beginning to get hooked on your work~ =3

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

And who might you be? :-)

wow! many not registered peaple gave u comments here.... this was very descriptive and a good start! I'm not English myself but this was very interesting!

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! :-)

The story is beautiful.
There are a few spots that repeat a little for my taste, but hey, thats just me.;p

But that lies in shadow compared to the wonderful imagery. I love it entirely.
Nice work!

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much! :) I hope you would continue supporting The Moon Watches Us! :-)

an acquaintance and secret fan~ =)
(not registered user)

that's a secret! Otherwise, I would've just posted my name if I wanted you to know! Hehe.

I'm closer than you think!

Maybe if you update more, i might tell you =)

Posted: Aug 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Please tell me!! T_T

I really do adore your story, and everyone trying to guess her name is the whole point, this stories beginning seems to be a start to a wonderful story. I am excited to read more. I also do believe you picked the perfect words to get the reader into the story and hooked.

Well done.

-DD

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much for the good feedback :-)

.....
is there any word that can be used to describe the 1st chapter?!!!

OMG...tiam-lee...it's so deeeeeeepppp.....

(I'm already cowering in fear with your literary greatness...)

but then again, i am better... (hahaha LOL joke lang un...wag ka tampo....)

so anyway, it's good...but too long. and as i was reading ur comments i found out dat u hve a secret admirer!!! hahahah!! Herman laughed at u didn't he?
Inggit lng un...hahahahah!!! :)

that's all the comments i can gve u ryt nw...bt dnt worry, my dear good fellow...i'll be back!!!!

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for the comment and I am looking forward to reading your work here in Booksie! :-)

you have a great potential in writing and I do so love ur writing!
Only, sorry to say, i dont spend much time online and hardly has the purrfect time rading your nice novel.
Please recosider to expand ur talent by wirting short stories, essays or even poems. thanx!!

Posted: Aug 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for the suggestion, Amira! :-) I might consider publishing short stories in the future, so stay tuned! :-)

Absolutely beautiful! Kind of reminds me of a dance. Elegant, yet full of secret words between two people.

Loved it!
Can't wait to read more!

Posted: Sep 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much! :-)

Renesmee Carlie Cullen
(not registered user)

Very nice Tiam-Lee! I wish I could be as descriptive. Pwd nang ipanlaban sa Teilight. lol! Just kidding. Keep it up. ^_^

Posted: Sep 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much! :-):-)

wow thats an amzing story so far
please let me know when you put more chapters up =]
you got talent
well done!

Posted: Sep 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much! :-) I'll inform you as new chapters get published. :)

oh my this surely HAS captivated me!
bravo and very well done, it's amazing =)
please do write more!

Posted: Oct 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much! :-)



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