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Cupid's Aim Sucks

Novel By: Caterina

Elise Wiemer and Tyler Donovan have been best friends since the were in diapers and baby booties. Now, It is the summer before Senior year, and everything is changeing.
Elise volenteers at an old summer camp to be acounsler. There, she meets Brandon, a sweet and kind guy with a troubled life. But soon, she realizes his troubles effext him more than she thought.
While Tyler is waiting for Elise to get back, a new girl moves in across from him. They meet and fall in love. But when Elise gets home, tyler becomes aware to how jealous and possesive Thalia really is.
Will these two friends find love outside of there circle, or will they realize how much they really mean to eachother? View table of contents...


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Submitted:Dec 22, 2012    Reads: 142    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   

Hello to my loyal readers, if i have any at all, whatso ever. In this new version of Cupids aim sucks, i am adding more detail and more sense to it. I hope you enjoy this novel. (There are some violent chapters in this novcel, so if u don't like cat fights, breakups, and fist fights, i suggest you do not read!)Each chapter will be switching from Elise and Tyler's point of view. I will put the name at the begining of the chapter, so you know who is talking.


"tyler. Tyler. Tyler." My best friend was trying to sleep under the ancient oak at Purple park, and i was making it very diffucult by throwing paper balls at him. He opened one big blue eye and said "Elise, you are the wierdest girl i have ever met." "thankyou. I take that as a compliment." i said before throwing another ball at him.

He grabbed on and threw it back at me. I the reached out and snatched his hat.. Putting it on my mouse brown head, I stuck my tongue out at him. "WHy you little..." I laughed and ran to his truck. He must have caught up, because he grabbed my pneytail and pulled mr toword him. "Give me the hat!" Rreluctantly i did, but not before grabbing his keys. "HEY!" i stuck my tongue out at him again (i am a 5 year old at heart) and once again took off for the truck.

Jumping in, I slammed the door and locked it. Tyler just made it to the truck, and tryed the handle. WHen he realized it was locked, he started to pantomim unlocking the door. After five minutes of that, I finally did. Sitting down, he stared at the steering weel for a moment,, then wacked me upside the head.

"What the heck!" he exclaimed. I shrugged and said "At least i didn't drive off and leave you here." Tyler rolled his eyes before starting his truck. "You can't even drive yet." I acted insulted before saying "I can to drive. It is just illegal and very unwise to let me." Tyler couldn't help but laugh, "we better get home, othrewise your parents will murder yyou" he said. I sighed. I dind't have the best relationship with my parents.

"Fine. Take me home, but if I end up dead, I'll haunt you!"


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