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Hugs, Kisses and Tears

Novel By: Dannika
Romance


Are you afraid of the dark? I am. Especially when a bunch of men come into my house and kidnap me. Yeah, that's when I'm afraid. But, what I didn't expect is my saviour, the unlikely truth of the world, and a cure to my disease.

And I actually found love throughout all of this... View table of contents...

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Submitted: Sep 2, 2008    Reads: 760    Comments: 30    Likes: 6   


 

Okay, before I start, let me just say “Sorry!!!”. I did not mean to take so long – but I've been really busy (work, reading, writing other things), and I just...well, I have no clue what I'm going to write about, but it usually comes from me about halfway through.

Haha.

Anyways, I hope you enjoy this one. I'm kind of in a bad mood, because someone just called me a terrible writer, and basically said I was a stupid teenage girl.

...wow...

That's extremely immature, in my opinion. Sure, I may not be the top of my class, but I'm not stupid!!! Where do you get off sayin---

Okay, I'll stop.

Here goes.

IV

The limousine was extremely quiet as we drove away.

The only sound in the small space was my shaky breathing.

I tried to break the silence.

“Uh,” Smooth, Abby.

He looked up at me, a small smile tilting one side of his lips.

I frowned, my eyes narrowing slightly.

“Well,” I started, looking at my small hands tucked gently in the folds of my dress. “You can let me out now.”

He laughed, startling me abruptly.

“That's all ye ha'e to say, lass?” His voice rolled off his tongue deliciously, his brogue thick.

I waited for him to continue.

He didn't.

“What do you mean, 'That's all ye ha'e to say, lass?'?” I asked, trying my best to mimic his voice, causing him to laugh once again. I was starting to get annoyed.

“I mean,” He started, eyebrows raised. “Ye jump all over me, telling me te help ye, and then the next moment, yer gone?” He still had a hint of a smile on his lips as he said this.

“I did not jump all over you!” I argued, hands on hips.

“Aye, ye did, lass,” He purred. “And ye liked it too.”

I felt the blood rush to my cheeks, as he said this.

I had liked it.

“I only kissed you so that you would take me out of that horrible place,”

“Ah, but why did ye kiss me in the first place?” He asked, causing her to frown. “Why didna ye just ask me nicely, like a lady, to escort ye away from the place?”

“I...” I didn't actually know why.

“It's because ye enjoyed it, lass.” He said, his large hand reaching up to gently push the hair out of my face.

I leaned back in the seat, taking his hand off my face.

I crossed my arms across my chest, and glared out the window.

“What's your name?” His voice filled the space, tormenting my senses.

I didn't answer, still staring out the window.

“I helped you, didn't I?” He asked, causing guilt to flood me. Why was I being so rude? “Can I at least have your name?” He tilted his head, and it looked adorable. “Or would you rather me call you lass, and woman for the rest of your stay?” His smile was teasing, grating on her nerves.

“Abigail.” I pushed out through my clenched teeth.

He chuckled, his eyes boring a hole right through her.

“Abhegayle,” The way he said her name created butterflies in her stomach. “Are ye Irish, Abigail?” He asked, his head once again tilting to the side.

“My mother is...” That was the first time I'd really thought about my parents for the last two days. How were they reacting now?

“Gabriel,” I said, sitting up, abruptly. “I have to get home.”

He shook his head.

“No.”

“Why not?” I said, frowning, preparing to tell the driver the directions.

“Because, Lachlain will go there first. I can't protect you there.” He said.

“But my parents are there, Gabriel!” I cried, reaching for the door. A strong arm wrapped around my waist, pulling me back into him. Fear coursed through me momentarily, but it was washed away by the adrenaline. I scratched at his wrist roughly, jabbing him in the throat with my elbow. His grip loosened.

“He'll kill them!” I pushed out of his grip, and shoved the door open. We were still in the middle of some street, so I was able to jump out, safely.

I think he took it easy on me for some reason.

Either that, or he was weak for some reason.

I charged through the street, looking around me as I ran. I heard the car come to a stop, and the door slam closed, but I kept running.

Vaguely, I recognized where I was. But I was way too far from my house. How would I ever find it, let alone get there?

Tears fell down my cheeks as my heels clicked loudly on the hard pavement.

Eventually, the tears blurred my vision so much, I could hardly see in front of me.

Suddenly, something bright was shining in my eyes, and getting closer to me.

It wasn't until it was a few feet from me that I realized the annoying, honking light was

a semi truck coming at me, full speed.

Something hard rammed into me just in time, pushing me to the ground. I knew what, or who, it was before I even hit the ground.

Gabriel's weight crushed me, his harsh breath was right above my mouth.

“Abigail.” He hissed, his scent piercing me. “I know you want to see your family, and we will go see them. But I can't let you leave me until I've killed Lachlain, do you understand?”

I nodded, mutely.

“I've already sent some of my best men to watch your family, understand? And one is watching Jillian right now.”

“How did you know about Jill?” I asked. I hadn't even mentioned her. Or where I live, for that matter.

“When I heard my enemy had a new pet, I did a little research.” He muttered.

“Why does that matter to you, anyway?”

He chuckled.

“How better to embarrass my enemy than to steal his prize?” He asked, mockingly.

I pushed against his chest, trying to squirm out of his grip.

“I am not a prize.”I said, my eyes narrowed.

He chuckled. I c ould feel his breath near the base of my neck.

“You're not a vampire too, are you?” I asked, fear laced in my voice.

He chuckled once again.

“No,” He replied, his lips pressing a soft kiss against my collarbone. “But, like Lachlain, I do have a weakness for beautiful,” He kissed the arterie in my neck. “innocent,” He placed yet another kiss on my jaw. “women.”

Our lips met once again and that familiar, yet unfamiliar, feeling bolted through me, heating the blood in my veins to what felt like boiling point.

He pinned my hands above my head, leaning in closer, until I was flush against him. His lips crushed against mine, my heart beating at 100 miles a minute.

I flew higher and higher, until, suddenly, I was freezing, and I no longer felt his lips against mine.

I peered around me, looking for him.

Where was he?

Gabriel's POV

He was hot.

Too hot.

He flashed away from her, before he did something he knew they'd both regret.

He searched his memory for somewhere wet, and cold.

Suddenly, he was 60 feet above the pacific ocean, and falling.

The freezing air whipped against his skin, filled with debris.

Then, daggers of ice sank into his skin as the water swelled around him. He shuddered as his body returned to normal.

What she did to him...

He shook his head fiercely, curling his fists.

He needed to get back.

She was probably wondering where he'd gone.

Within moments, he was standing above her. She was beautiful. Her silken skin, as pale as porcelein, and her silky, black locks curled around her small face delightfully. She had a small nose, perfectly fitting of her angelic face. Her plump pink lips were...delicious.

Perfect.

And her eyes...

They changed colors every time he saw her.

A fey if he ever saw one. He knew, because of his research of course, that she was indeed a fey daughter by blood. Her mother, the one from Ireland.

That's why Lachlain went to their house in the first place. To find his demise. But, instead of bringing back the sgian dubh, they brought back this little one.

He fought back a savage growl at the thought of that man touching her. Hurting her.

No use scaring her more.

“Abigail,”

She peered up at him, wonder in her eyes.

Her lips were still swollen, her body soft and ready.

He held out a hand for her.

“Come.”


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Comments:

Ooooooo, this was really good! I like it. That was kind of crazy when she jump out of the moving car. But I'm glad she okay. What is a fey? I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Okey dokey. haha. It might take a little longer tho, cause I'm mainly trying to finish Vampyr.

Oh, and you'll find out more about the Fey soon enough. But, Tuatha De Danann, are like a supersized version of the Fey. The Fey are kind of like lesser beings, but known for their beauty and quickness.

If people disagree with this, just want you to know, I made that up - - but, it's true in my story. The fey are often depicted as ugly creatures, but in modern tales, they are beautiful little sprites.

The Tuatha De Danann are a more human version - but they are superior to real humans anyways. They actually HATE humans, because well...they're better.

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

oh yeah, don't listen to that person who ever said that. The person should had never said that. That was wrong of them. They could have just left some pointers. I think your story is great and I love it. You keep on writing. I like the way you write and it's enjoyable. Hope to see more of your work. :)

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Okay! I don't know who said...what? haha. I didn't get a different comment.

Fuck the person who said you were a horrible writer! They are absolutely insane. Grr...want me to make a few calls to uh...take that fucker out? Cause I will!

Absolutely amazing chapter! Post another soon.

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, you're so amazing. ahahaha. That was so long ago, I forgot I put that up there. haha. I luv you so much for sticking up for me tho!!!


I'm so glad you liked it!!! The 6th chapter of VAMPYR is out!!!! It's an amazing chapter, I have to say!!!

DAni.

Again. I just re-read it, and I'm SO!!! sorry that it's so short!! While you're waiting for chapter 5, read my other novel VAMPYR. I think you'll like it people!!! It's already got 6 chapters!!!!!!!!!!

yay! And I've already finished the whole story - i'm just re-reading it. ahaha. So, it'll come quicker than this one.

luvs you guys!

dAni.

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Ahhh, I LOVE IT!!!
The story just keeps on getting more intreaging and I want to know what happens next - NOW!
Update soon...PLEASE!!!
=D

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Okay. Ahaha. Read VAMPYR while you're waiting. I like it. :)

Dani.

Thanks!!!!!!!

oh my Gosh! so is like Gabriel the good guy? what's a fey? What's her mom? Human, vampire, what??? lol! There are sooo many questions in my head!! haha (: please update as soon as you can! and keep me posted too ^^

Posted: Sep 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Okey dokey!! I just let everybody know who commented - and then, put some crazy thing on my profile.

Yes, gabriel's the good guy!! Read the summary. Aha. And a fey, is like a minimized version of a tuatha de danann. Her mom is a fey (kinda like faerie). The only vampires are Lachlain and his friends and slaves and whatnot. Luke Ara and Marishka.

Thanks so much for commenting!!!


Ooo...but there's a slight problem you see...There's no more chapters!!!! Absolutely AMAZING chapter! Can't wait to read the rest!!! Keep me posted please!! (P.S. Screw whoever told you you were a bad writer!)

Posted: Sep 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, you're amazing. Aha. I thought you were gonna say like "there was only one problem" then say like it was too short or somthin'.

Yay!!!!I'm happy you liked it!!

Check out Vampyr! 6th chapter is up!!!

Good dialogue! I watched a girl step out of a moving car once. It was horrible. She tumbled over the pavement like a rag doll and lay there lifeless until the ambulanve came. Blood was leaking out of the back of her head as it emerged from under her hair that was fanned across the black top. It was very scary to se such a sight. Just so you know.

Posted: Sep 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, my gosh!! That's scary. aha. Yeah, she's fey so she can't die.

i really really like it. i can't believe she jumped out of a moving car. i mean come on. lol

Posted: Sep 3, 2008

Author Comment:

It wasn't going that fast! It was on a small neighborhood street, and they were going slow. Aha. I wasn't on a highway, silly!!

I'm so glad you liked it!! Check out Vampyr if you haven't already. I love that novel - because, it's finished.

AWEEEEE!! that's sweet!

+Hecate+

Posted: Sep 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha. Glad you liked it!

WOW!!! i loved it! ...an double wow..i didn't know there was the sishar Dubh in this novel..makes it oh-so-much-more-better!
Love it that she is a faerie!or whatever its spelt like...lolz! wow what is he?
Where'd you get this idea? did it just randomly pop into your head or were you inspired to write it through reading a book(s)?
AND BTW....your not a bad writer..who ever said that needs a slap on the hand! you are a great writer..and (not to sound corney or anything) don't let anyone tell you differentlY!
now pleeease update! am dying to know what happenes next!!!!

Posted: Sep 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Sidhe Dubh? That means Black Dagger in Gaelic. Did you know that too? > luv you so much if you did!! < fey. ahahaha.

He's a tuatha De Danann. Look it up on Wikipedia. ahahaha. It randomly popped into my head, as I was writing. Actually, i'm in love with the Tuatha De danann ever since reading KAREN MARIE MONING'S highlander series.

hahah.cheeky.i like.:]vry dramatic.my type of reading.
im beginning to like this site.all the writers get together.

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

Author Comment:

yay! I'm happy you liked it!!!

Dani.

No, don't tell whoever said you were a horrible writer to F*** you. That would be too nice of a thing for them and they don't deserve such a treat. You proved that you are a very good writer with this chapter. Just from chapter one to this chapter there has been a change in your writing and it is for the better. (that's the great thing about reading it within in a 12 hour period) You're young, but you have very mature thoughts and you present them very well. So whoever said that needs to get a brain cell or two.
Now for a some constructive cricism: half way through you went from 1st to 3rd person (in stead of me you said her.) with Abigail. Then with Gabriel's POV you made it point of 3rd person as well. Otherwise I think it was perfect. Keep up the good work. And for the record, I think this is one of the longest comments I have ever made:)

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh thanks! Yeah, I accidentally switch person sometimes when I'm writing. I just wanted go into third because it's hard to just BE Gabriel, you know? I know it's not allowed - but I thought I could pull it off. Aha. Anyways, thanks so much, you're really nice!!

Dani.

I love it please update soon

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

Author Comment:

okey dokey!

i love the connection between both of them post soon

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Okey dokey.

Well I find these stories quite interesting because I myself am mostly Irish. Cool another great one!

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, now I looooove you!!!!

I don't know why, but I just love Ireland and Scotland even though i've never been to any of those places. It's probably all the romance novels i read. aha.

But did your g'parents or parents ever tell you about the Tuatha De Danann? Because they were supposedly gods or something like that, who inhabited Ireland after their predecessors the Fir Bolg. They're also known as Faeries, or beings that live in mounds underground because the formorians ran them out.

miranda
(not registered user)

please write more. it's so good

Posted: Sep 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Okay. It's really hard tho coz I don't really know what's gonna happen next - I had the beginning planned out. That's it.

BTW- since you never went into detail, did he force her to be with him?

Posted: Sep 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Who? Did Gabriel force her? No. He's a nice person. aha. Yeah, they didn't even do anything tho, so it's good.

Hae! i just read your reply on my previous comment! wow! i looove Karen Morning!...literally love!...both her Darkfever Series and highlander series (if you haven't read her Darkfever series read it! its where i first got introduced to the sihsar Dubh)

Posted: Sep 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, I loooved her books. But I started Dark Fever - didn't finish it tho. I don't find modern stories as interesting (which is ironic, cause i write them), but that's where I discovered Tuatha De Danann, and I looked them up on Wikipedia. I started writing a REAL novel I was gonna get published about them, but I'm stumped.

No, I meant Lachlain. Did he force her after the bath to have sex?

Posted: Sep 10, 2008

Author Comment:

No, no. Aha. Everything that happened, happened. Everything that I wrote. :)

NOOOOOOOOO FINISH THIS PLEASE INEED TO READ THE END

Posted: Sep 11, 2008

Author Comment:

OKAY!! AHAHAH.

DAni.

hey nice really nice waitin for for u 2 write more...
n plz keep me in formed...........

Posted: Sep 11, 2008

Author Comment:

oki dokie.

Come on already..........ur killiin me here LOL

plz update SOON.!.

Posted: Sep 13, 2008

Author Comment:

omgosh, i'm so sorry! I can't think of ANYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :( I'm really trying! But I have nothing!!!!

☺ Please update soon!!!!

Posted: Sep 13, 2008

miranda
(not registered user)

i'm begging you please write more. but still NO PREASURE. TAKE YOUR TIME. juat take your time and hurry.

Posted: Sep 21, 2008

Author Comment:

OKIE. aha. I'm so sorry!!!

another great chapter...i cant wait to see how Susan is associated with the fey :)

Posted: Oct 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Susan? Who's that again? ooops...I forgot already! ahaha.

awwww i like this guy ♥ hes cutee.
great chapter :)

Posted: Oct 1, 2008

Author Comment:

tee hee. Yeah, I know.

ok...i swear im totally not crazy...Susan is her mom right? as said in the last chapter???

Posted: Oct 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh!! Right. hahah. Okay, I just forgot for a second.

OMG!!!!
great chapter!!!!

ONward!!!!!

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah...:(

♥ Dannika.



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