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Hugs, Kisses and Tears

Novel By: Dannika
Romance


Are you afraid of the dark? I am. Especially when a bunch of men come into my house and kidnap me. Yeah, that's when I'm afraid. But, what I didn't expect is my saviour, the unlikely truth of the world, and a cure to my disease.

And I actually found love throughout all of this... View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2 3 4 5 6

Submitted: Oct 3, 2008    Reads: 291    Comments: 18    Likes: 0   


...Having Issues...

Yes, I tricked you guys into getting you to read this.

I'm so very sorry to say that this is NOT an update...:(

I'm also dreading telling you that I might have to stop this novel for a bit. I know, i'm silly, because I started this on a whim - as I might have mentioned, and had no actual plan going for it. :( You might be able to think of some ways the story might go - but, it's really, really hard to put it to words, when you barely have an idea...

...you know?

...I really hope you guys understand. It will be on Hiatus - i'm taking it off Featured, and I'm going to work harder on Such Sweet Sorrow - and try and put the last chapters of Vampyr up. Once those are finished, of course i'll start a new novel - but I just...can't keep going on this one...

...it's just hard. Because, I come home every night from school, and...I KNOW I have to update - coz I love all of you and want to make you happy -- but I write like two words, and then I just get sooo annoyed because I can't think of anything else.

...and as a result of this - my other stories suck, coz i spend less time on them.

... -- - - ---- so, i'm going to stop this one, and work harder on the others.

****If you have strong, like you're going to kill yourself issues with this story ending (which I doubt you will), then let me know.*****

But if not, I would be happy if you don't lose your loyalty to me and my writings and just read my other novels.

Again, I'm so sorry!!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥I really, really do'nt want to do this - but I can't.

So, there prolly won't be another update of this for a couple of months...

....phew...

Glad I got that impending doom feeling off my shoulders - now I can just concentrate on writing the work I actually wanna get published.

...Thank you sooo much for listening to me, and please COMMENT!

Let me know what you think of all of this, I would REALLY like to know. ♥

Always, and Forever Yours,

Dannika

ps. I'm also not gonna finish Even Breathing Hurts Without You. It's a complete dead end. <3

But, I do want to post something - one chapter long - that I wrote about my grandma's death. <3 It was sad. 


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Comments:

ZOMG NOOO it was soo good boo hoo
i dont have that strong of feelings but i am very sad lol
it was weird before u put this novel up i had on that was just like it ...weird.. anyhoo i am sad but i am glad u will update ur other ones because they are SOOOOOOOOOO good all ur writing is good i love you i wish i could write as good as you
YAY
i was all excited to read this update sheesh lol but i will get over it lol

Posted: Oct 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Ooh, i'm soooo sorry, Sam!!!! :( But...it just wasn't happening for me..

I'm really not that good of a writer, Sam. ♥ I just read a lot and have no life. :D

♥ Dani.

are you serious??? not another novel..dam this and another one is like one i always check to see if you have updated!!!!
grrr
...but i guess you shouldn't continue a novel if you can't and if it is affecting your other novels...but if i can... you should ask someone for help...like an author on Booksie that you respect...just give them your email and give them your ideas and all and help etc....im not trying to force you to write it but it's just a really great novel...i just would hate to see it stop when there is such good characters adn everything...it's soemthing you should be so proud of...i have that with one of my novels(im not going to say which one thou) and i find it even better if i haven't got the whole novel planned...it makes it mroe fun adn suspenseful for you when you write it...like you too are reading it for the first time with your reader...and sometimes when i don't know what to do i just take a little break and work on my other novels...whether at work or school or going for a run...life is full of inspiration...and its your playground, so make the most of it! lol
but like i said its your novel..and you know whats best...
keep me updated though...
Addie :)

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, I totally understand!

None of my novels start with the whole plan. But, I didn't even have a small plotline - or any direction with this one. The only part I knew for certain was...Lachlain stealing her. THe only part I actually thought about was at the house.

But with my others:

Vamyr - Well, that novel's already finished, and I'm just rewriting it.

Such Sweet Sorrow - I thought about this one a little bit more. Coz it's such a touchy subject with people. So, I know what's gonna happen next chapter - what's gonna happen at the end.

I'm so sorry, Addie! It's only on Hiatus - coz with Vampyr - I started it, and then left it for a few weeks, and suddenly, I got the inspiration to write and I wrote 100 pages in one night! So, I'm hoping that'll happen with Hugs, Kisses and Tears - but when people keep asking me to update - I feel i'm obligated to, and it sucks.

So, I'd rather wair for that inspiration - and do a good job, rather than try and finish it now, only to see it sucks.

...you know?

♥ Dannika.

boo!
thumbs down
pls dnt stop
or ru puttin us in suspense
pls i dnt like it
jst continue pls


shamiholidon!

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Okay, i'm sorry dear.

Don't hate me, but read the comment above you - my author response, that should make you understand a little.

♥ Dani.

Oh, and ADDIEWESTWOOD!!! I won't publihs a new novel - till i'm done with Such Sweet Sorrow and Vampyr. ♥ Dani.

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

i still love you!!!

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

OH I'm so happy you're not mad at me. :]

Yeah, I have Kitty - and I'd really like to know your opinion on it. ♥ Dani.

miranda
(not registered user)

i still love you, dani. it's okay. i read all your other stories too. so keep the good work up.

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, thanks so much! I don't know your name, but I still love you for saying that - and for being nice!

♥ Dani.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO PLEASE NOOOOOOO I WANT THE CHAPTERS OF VAMPYR UP TO BUT I LOVE THIS STORY WHAT IF SHE GOES TO SCOTLAND AND SHE SOME SORT OF QUEEN AND THEN THE BRONTHERS FIGHT FOR HER OR SOME THING AND THEN SHE PIKS ONE TO RULE HER KINGDOME WITH HER OR THERE SOME NEW GUY SHE TALKING TO AND THEN HE BECOMES KING


I KNOW THATS STUPID BUT I LOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS STORY

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, That's not stupid honey!!! ♥ I just...

Okay, this is what I feel:

I don't like writing stories when I have no clue where to go. Because, I get this horrible bored feeling - and I easily get sick of that story.

And I get pressure after I put out each chapter - I don't mind - but it's really hard knowing that people are slowly getting angrier and angrier, and you HAVE to update - but you know the next chapter will blow because of it.

And I've had some problems with boys lately - and it's kind of hard to concentrate.

I can think of millions of ways for this story to go - but...I just don't like it anymore.

Of course, like I said - it's only on Hiatus, so I won't delete it - i'm sure I'll finish it sometime. ♥♥♥

I'm sooooo sorry, Chante!! ♥♥♥

Dannika.

Haha, I liked the story but it's fine, I have twenty some novels on my page and I well past the point when i NEED to update. Look, if there's a story that we like and you don't feel enthusiastic then ditch it. I know it may sound a bit harsh for everyone else but writting is supposed to be fun for you. Maybe you will be more enthusiastic abot it later, maybe you will get new ideas, heck with it ditch the stress I really don't think most of us mind. You gave us the gift of your writting, you have all rights to take it away ;) Keep it up! And have fun!

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, that's exactly what it feels like!!1 I hate the pressure - when I only enjoyed writing the first two chapters!!! ♥ I need time! hahaha. j


Thanks so much!

♥♥ DAni.

Um... wow... no comment.

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Okay...is that bad? Or just...trying to be mean?

If you didn't have a comment - you prolly shouldn't have commented, silly. hahah.

♥ Dani.

Sorry, dear.

Ignore all the negative comments, if a person likes you're writing enough they aren't going to abandon you because you made a choice that was yours to make! They should want to read your work at its best..and if you aren't inspired than it won't be the best and it won't be as good of a read! As the author, never feel that you need to write something for the people who don't appreciate every part of you being a writer! I hope you get inspired on all of your other works, and this one as well!! (mental vacations are amazing!!)

--Gem

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, I love you so much, Gem!!! ♥

You always know what to say to make me feel better. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

i understand because i'm glad you letted us know instead of leaving us hanging for months and we have to keep leaving you comments. Yeah school is woo so thnks for letting us know keep writing

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, i'm glad you understand! ♥

But I really updated Vampyr. Added 4 chapters in one day!

Hope that made some people happy.

And put up a new short story called Kitty. ☻

So plz check those out.

♥ Danni.

Danii

plz tell me yu havnt finished this story 4 gudd.?.

ii really love thiis story n ii noe yu miight of hiit writers block with thiis story riight now but plz try n continue iit cz ii REALLY love this story.!.

ii can be patient n understandin please, Please, PLEASE dnt finish thiis story 4 gudd.!?.

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, I'm probably gonna finish it. I just need a break.

Thanks so much, dear! ♥

Yeah, i'm gonna work on my other stories more now, till i'm ready. Ooooh, I updated Vampyr four times yesterday! Four more chapters up of Vampyr, so check 'em out.

♥ forever and always yours,

Danni.

I thought this was really good. Don't just stop and never come back. At some point, you need to finish it!

Posted: Oct 5, 2008

Author Comment:

haha. Okay, i just need a break from the pressure of having to finish it. ♥

Dani.

MAN I HATE YOU







WHAT I HATE MORE IS I STILLL LOVE YOU AND YOUR WRITING
(IM POUTING)

Posted: Oct 6, 2008

Author Comment:

....sorry....:(

♥ Danni.

demi
(not registered user)

i really thought this was a good story :) o well, im sure u will come up with bout of inspiration one night and u will just have to write it, lol. im going to read ur other stories now. cya :)

Posted: Oct 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Yay!

kayla
(not registered user)

I loved this story! I wish there was more, but I totally understand why you stopped. The same thing happens to me all the time. If you ever have a brainstorm or any ideas about this story though it would be great if you added more!

All your other stories are great too!

Posted: Oct 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, I was screwed.

kk. thanks.

♥Dani.

the only reason i came to this story b/c i saw you mentioned it on other stories of yours i've read...now i'm like it...sooo...i understand the need for a hiatus....just know i like what u had so far

Posted: Oct 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, P!! ♥♥

mimi94
(not registered user)

ok i am way depressed now but i totally get where yourcoming from like sometimes i ust can write anymore because i have other things on my mind that take up all my space maybe thats happening to you but great book so far and hope you can add to it soon but if you can't you can't.
-sm

Posted: Nov 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Wow, that took you a while. Haha. Okay, well, if you don't like this one, you like Tuatha De.

Danni.



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