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Falling in Love with an Angel (completed)

Novel By: Dolphin198818

As Elizabeth started school at Peace in Brownsville, she feels alone, and by herself. But when the new kind shows up; there is no longer Peace at the school and Elizabeth can not keep her eye's off of him. Will Elizabeth fall for the new kid? Or will he be bad for her? Read on to find out! View table of contents...


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Submitted:Oct 30, 2012    Reads: 27    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   

'What are you doing?' asked Isaac as he watched Elizabeth dial a phone number on her phone and waited for someone to pick up.

'I'm calling my father. I want to see how he is doing after everything that happened,' replied Elizabeth as she laid on Isaac's chest.
'Hello?' asked Elizabeth's dad.
'Hey dad it's me; I just want to know how you're feeling from the other day,' said Elizabeth quickly.
'Who? I'm sorry, but I don't know anyone by the name of Elizabeth,' said her father. There was a short pause. How could he not remember his own daughter? Elizabeth thought to herself.
'Dad it's me Elizabeth, your daughter,' she said.
'I'm sorry, but I don't know you,' said her father before hanging up the phone. Elizabeth hung up the phone after hearing the dial tone and laid there confused and feeling alone.
'What's the matte?' asked Isaac.
'My father doesn't remember who I am,' said Elizabeth as tears rad down her face.
'What?' asked Isaac confusedly.
'He told me that he doesn't have a daughter named Elizabeth,' she said as she began to cry. 'How could this happen! How could I go from having a family to being alone!' she cried as she got up and ran to the bathroom and slammed the door. Isaac quickly got up, and knocked on the door.
'Elizabeth come out here; we will figure this out, and you're not alone,' said Isaac.
'How are we going to figure this out? My father doesn't know who I am,' cried Elizabeth from the bathroom.
'Elizabeth come on, and we will go and see your father,' said Isaac.
'No,' cried Elizabeth. Just then, Ryan was behind Isaac.
'What's the matter? I heard crying,' said Ryan concernedly.
'She called her father and he doesn't remember her...he doesn't remember anything,' explained Isaac.
'It has to be Raven,' said Ryan quickly. 'Because her father was fine a couple days ago.'
'I know, but she won't come out of the bathroom, so we can go and see what we can do,' said Isaac.
'Let me try,' said Ryan, as he moved in front of Isaac and knocked on the door. 'Elizabeth, it's me Ryan, can I come in,' he said. There was a short pause, before they heard her unlocking the door.
'What?' asked Elizabeth wiping her nose with a Kleenex.
'We can help you with your father if you come out,' said Ryan.
'How?' asked Elizabeth.
'First, we can go over there and see what's really going on,' said Ryan. There was another short pause before Elizabeth spoke.
'Alright, I'll go over,' said Elizabeth.
'Good, can you come out now?' Ryan asked.
'Yeah,' replied Elizabeth. She walked out and hugged Isaac. 'I'm sorry for running and crying.'
'That's okay; I just wish that you would talk to me, instead of Ryan all the time,' said Isaac.
'I'm sorry; I promise that I will start talking to you more,' said Elizabeth. Isaac smiled down at her.
'Alright, let's go and see your father,' he said.
Elizabeth's father was watching television when she knocked on the door. 'Now who is that?' he asked as he turned off the television with the remote, got up, and went to answer the door.
'Hey dad,' said Elizabeth when he opened the door. Elizabeth's father looked at her with a confused look.
'Who are you?' asked her father.
'Dad it's me, Elizabeth, I'm your daughter,' said Elizabeth quickly.
'No, I'm sorry, but I don't have a daughter, and I was never married,' explained her father. Elizabeth's eyes filled with tears.
'Dad, it's me...I'm your little girl,' said Elizabeth sadly. Her father looked at her for a few minutes.
'No, I'm sorry, but I don't have a daughter,' said her father. He went to slam the door, but Isaac stopped him.
'What is the last thing you remember doing yesterday?' asked Isaac.
'Well, I got up took a shower, and went to see my son,' replied her father.
'Your son?' they both said together.
'Yeah, my son Raven,' replied her father. Isaac and Elizabeth both looked at each other, then back at her father.
'You don't have a son named Raven,' said Elizabeth.
'Yes I do, and his mother died a couple of years ago,' said her father.
'No dad listen to me! My name is Elizabeth and you're my father and my mother died a couple days ago,' explained Elizabeth quickly.
'No, you are mistaken, and I'm going to have to ask you to leave,' said her father before slamming the door in their faces.
'How is this possible?' cried Elizabeth. Isaac gave her a hug.
'We'll figure this out, apparently Raven is behind this, so we have to find him,' said Isaac.
'But how? How do we find him?' asked Elizabeth as she wiped her eyes on her sleeves.
'I don't know; we need to go back to the house and regroup,' said Isaac. He took Elizabeth in his arms as he flew her into the sky.
'I don't know, we knew where he was, maybe Raven is still there,' said Ryan.
'Alright, we have to make a plan. Elizabeth, you are going to be our decoy,' began Isaac.
'Oh thanks,' said Elizabeth.
'Now listen, your part in this is the biggest one. You have to get Raven to get outside, and away from his "layer." Then when he is out, we will strike,' explained Isaac.
'But strike how? We can't kill him unless we have all four arrows, ' said Michelle angrily.
'We'll just have to beat the crap out of him until he gives in and gets her father's mind back to normal,' said John angrily. There was silence while Isaac thought and took everything in.
'Wait...I got it!' he began as he snapped his fingers together. Everyone moved in closer so they could hear Isaac's plan.
'Elizabeth are you alright?' asked Isaac as he walked out on deck and closed the door. Elizabeth was leaning on the railing watching the waves.
'I just can't believe all this is happening. Just last week, I was this normal girl with no problems and a mother who was alive and a father who knew who I was. Now, I have no one,' said Elizabeth sadly.
'You have me,' said Isaac as he touched her hand and smiled at her.
'Isaac, I know I have you here in this world where everything is angels and demons, but what about the normal world that I use to have? Everyone I possibly know are vanishing,' explained Elizabeth.
'You don't like this life or me?' asked Isaac. Elizabeth let out a sigh and turned to Isaac.
'Isaac, I like you...in fact, I love you a lot. You are my best friend and my soul mate. It's just that, I haven't had time to myself since all of this has been happening. I need some me time to think about what is going on and what is happening to my parents,' explained Elizabeth. Isaac looked at her as he thought about what she said. Why would she need some time away from him?
'You can do some thinking here and we will leave you alone, and it'll just be me and you,' said Isaac.
'Isaac your not listening to me! I'm telling you that I need some time to think about what's going on and just be by myself, and I don't want you to come with me!' said Elizabeth. She didn't want to yell at him because she loved him, but she wanted him to understand. To understand what is going on in her life.
'So, when are you thinking about going?' asked Isaac.
'After we do this with Raven. After we do this thing with Raven, then I think I'm going to hang out with my dad for a couple of days,' replied Elizabeth.
'A couple days?' asked Isaac.
'Yes Isaac,' she began as she moved in closer to him. 'If you love me, you will understand that I have to do this,' said Elizabeth. They stared at each other for a few minutes, before Isaac hugged her tightly.
'Okay, I'll let you go, but don't forget about me on your time off,' he said.
'I can never forget about you,' said Elizabeth as she smiled up at him and kissed him passionately.
'Alright, let's go get Raven,' said Isaac as he took her hand and they walked back into the house.
I'm curious: What did you guys think of that chapter? And did Elizabeth make the right choice to leave for a few days after everything is over?


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