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Falling in Love with an Angel (completed)

Novel By: Dolphin198818

As Elizabeth started school at Peace in Brownsville, she feels alone, and by herself. But when the new kind shows up; there is no longer Peace at the school and Elizabeth can not keep her eye's off of him. Will Elizabeth fall for the new kid? Or will he be bad for her? Read on to find out! View table of contents...


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Submitted:Nov 25, 2012    Reads: 27    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   

Chapter 17

'I'm right,' smiled the green fairy.

'Alright, fine,' said Ryan. 'I love her, but I know that she doesn't love me,' she said.

'You are a good man, and for that, I know that love will find your way soon enough,' said the green fairy.

'But will you help us find the destroyer?' asked Ryan.

'I will spread the word to my friends,' said the green fairy.

'Thank you,' said Ryan before the fairy flew away, and Ryan went to meet Isaac to tell him what had happened.


'Why did you call me in here?' asked Raven as he walked slowly towards the servant.

'I just wanted to see if you where going to tell Elizabeth or if you already told her,' said the servant, as she gently touched Raven's bicep.

'I'm going to tell her. When we are in the park tonight,' said Raven.

'Okay, I just can't wait to be with you forever,' smiled the servant.

'Me neither,' said Raven as he pushed the servant up against the wall, and began kissing her neck.

'Oh Raven,' said the servant when she wrapped her arms around him. 'I don't know if we can do this here,' said the servant as she moaned.

'Oh come on baby,' said Raven as he sucked her neck.

'Okay, let's go in the closet though,' she moaned. Raven picked her up, and the servant wrapped her legs around him as he carried her to the closet, and Raven closed the door behind him.

'You jerk!' yelled Elizabeth. She was so mad that she ran out of the room, trying to get Isaac's attention. 'Isaac, please hear me! I love you and I love only you!' she yelled as tears ran down her cheeks. 'Please...someone hear me!' she yelled. No one heard her. She didn't like this at all. She didn't like the fact that no one couldn't hear her and no one could see her. She felt utterly alone, and she never wanted to be alone. She wanted to be with Isaac, and now she knew that she wanted to be with Isaac for the rest of her life. It didn't matter what she had to do; she was going to get back to Isaac and her friends, even if she has to die to reach them.

'Where's Raven?' asked the other Elizabeth when she walked in and seen that Raven was nowhere in sight.

'Oh, he's in the kitchen,' said Michelle.

'Yes, I can go and get him if you want,' said Isaac as he couldn't keep her eyes off of her.

'No, that's fine; I'll go and get him,' said the other Elizabeth before walking into the kitchen, followed by the real Elizabeth.

'Raven,' said the other Elizabeth when she reached the kitchen, but didn't see anyone. It was quiet, until she heard some rustling coming from the pantry. So, Elizabeth rushed over to see if it was Raven or someone she knew. But when she openedd the door, she couldn't believe her eyes. 'What are you two doing?' yelled the other Elizabeth angrily.

'Elizabeth, it's not what it looks like,' said Raven quickly when he pulled up his pants, and went to go after her. Elizabeth turned around, and stormed out, before Raven could touch her. The real Elizabeth was furious, and she ran after the other Elizabeth. When the other Elizabeth ran passed Isaac and Michelle in tears, isaac watched as she ran, than got up and ran after her.

'Elizabeth, wait!' yelled Isaac as the other Elizabeth reached the park, and stopped and sat down at the angel fountain and cried. Isaac seen Elizabeth crying on the fountain, and slowly walked ove to her. He sat down next to her, and gently touched her hand. The other Elizabeth looked up at him through tears.

'How could he do this to me?' How could he cheat on me?' she cried.

'Because, he's a bad man that doesn't deserve you, I deserve you, not him,' said Isaac.

'What?' cried the other Elizabeth.

'Elizabeth, I love you. Ever since I laid eyes on you, I loved you,' said Isaac.

'Oh Isaac,' cried Elizabeth as she hugged him.

'I knew it!' yelled Raven. The other Elizabeth and Isaac stood up quickly.

'Raven, what did you think was going to happen? You can't have two women at once!' yelled Isaac.

'Elizabeth is mine! She will always be mine!' yelled Raven as he ran towards Isaac and tackled him into the angel statue, shattering it to pieces.

'Stop!' screamed Elizabeth, but Raven didn't stop. Instead, Raven grabbed Isaac, and began punching him repeatedly in the face. 'Stop it!' she yelled once more, but he still didn't hear.

'I love her Raven, and I will go to the ends of the world for her,' said Isaac with a bloody face.

'You will never have her!' yelled Raven. Raven went to punch Isaac again, when a male voice rang the park, shaking the ground, making Elizabeth and Raven fall to the floor.

'Stop it now! There is no fighting here!' said the male voice.

'He started it dad!' yelled Raven.

'I don't care; you are kicked out! You will never enter here again,' the voice yelled.

'But dad?' said Raven.

'No, this is enough!' yelled the male voice.

'Fine, I will find her mark my words,' yelled Raven. Just then, the ground below Raven disappeared, and he fell down and down, until the ground reappeared.

'Thank you, dad,' said Isaac as the wounds on his face began to heal and the other Elizabeth ran towards him.

'Are you alright?' asked Elizabeth scaredly.

'Yes, I'm fine,' said Isaac as he smiled at her.

'She can not stay here,' said the male voice.

'Why not? She hasn't done anything wrong?' Isaac said.

'But Raven will try and get in here, and I can not do any harm to anyone, and can't have anymore fighting. She will go until all this is settled, and you can stay here and watch over her, till she needs your help,' explained the voice.

'Alright,' said Isaac.

'You two can say your goodbyes,' said the voice.

'I don't want to leave you,' said Elizabeth as she cried.

'It's okay, we will meet again,' said Isaac. Elizabeth cried and Isaac kissed her, as the ground disappeared, and Elizabeth fell, leaving Isaac by himself.

'The real Elizabeth couldn't believe what she had just witnessed. She just witnessed her being thrown out of Heaven, Raven being also thrown out, and she falling in love with Isaac. Elizabeth already knew that she loved Isaac, but didn't know how much, and now she knows. Now she can tell Raven how much she loves Isaac, and how much she hates Raven, and maybe this will get her out, and she can see Isaac again. So, Elizabeth quickly ran to the door, and down the tunnel, and back to the cabin to tell Raven.


Michelle and John told Michael the news of them getting married. 'We are going to wait until all this is over with Isaac and Elizabeth; that way no one will interfere,' said Michelle as Michael oohed and awed over her ring.

'That's a good idea,' said Michael. 'Oooh, now I have something to do as we wait for them to come back,' said Michael happily.

'You can't start planning it now,' said John.

'Oh yes, a good wedding taked a long time to plan,' said Michael as he grabbed Michelle away and into the kitchen to talke about the wedding plans. John just laughed to himself, when he turned and walked outside on the deck for some fresh air.

When John leaned on the railing to watch the waves, he noticed something very odd. When he looked at the waves, they where frozed. 'What's going on?' he asked to himself, when he turned around to see Michelle and Michael, but they where frozen to talking about the wedding at the kitchen table.

'I have frozen time,' said a voice from behind him. John turned around, and seen Raven standing there, with his wings out.

'Why are you here?' asked John angrily.

'Now calm down. I am here to get you on my side and to help me get Elizabeth back,' said Raven.

'And why would I want to do that?' John asked angrily.

'Aww, now that's a good question,' said Raven as he waved his hand, and Michelle appeared beside him. 'I take it this is the woman that you love with all your heart. I can leave her to know you or make her forget you, all you have to do si choose,' said Raven. John loved Michelle with all his heart, and he would die, then let anything to happen to her. John took a breath, then let it out, before answering.

'What do I have to do?' asked John.

'All you have to do is convince Elizabeth that she doesn't love Isaac, that she loves me. All I need is one kiss from her and she'll be mine forever,' said Raven.

'But we will seize to exist,' said John.

'If you help me do this, then you can live forever, like Elizabeth and I will,' said Raven. 'But if you don't, then everything you will know will be lost forever.'

How do I get her to love you when she isn't here?' asked John.

'You will go to the cabin that she is in. Don't worry, I will fly you there, and Michelle and Michael will still be frozen in time, until the job is done do we have a deal?' asked Raven as he held out his hand for John to shake. John looked at Michelle, then to Raven's hand. John walked in closer, then shook his hand.

'Alright,' said John.

'Good man,' said Raven. With nothing else said, Raven took John's hand, and flew him to where Elizabeth was.


'So the fairy didn't tell you anything then,' said Isaac.

'No, not really,' said Ryan. 'Did you find anything?'

'No, we have to continue our search elsewhere. We'll have to hurry, because it'll be getting dark soon,' said Isaac.

'This sucks, we're never going to find her,' said Ryan angrily.

'We will, don't worry, I have faith,' said Isaac.

'Isaac, what if Raven has won? What if she loves him and not you?' asked Ryan.

'We're still here, so that's proof enough to me, so we keep hunting until she makes up her mind,' said Isaac. Ryan remembered what the green fairy had said to him about he loving Elizabeth, and he couldn't keep it in any longer.

'Isaac, I have something to tell you, and ti's very important, so I ask you please not to spaz out until I'm done,' said Ryan calmly.

'Okay,' said Isaac confusedly.

'Alright, remember when I told you that I liked Elizabeth, well that was a lie. I love Elizabeth like the way you love Elizabeth,' said Ryan. Isaac's jaw dropped, and he grew instantly mad the second that Ryan told him this.

'What?!' Isaac yelled.

'Yes, it's true,' replied Ryan. Isaac couldn't talk, because he was so mad. Instead, he ran towards Ryan, smashing through a couple trees, and finally landing on the ground.

'How could you love her liek I do?!' You know that she belongs to me!' yelled Isaac as he held Ryan down.

'I don't know how it happened, it just did,' said Ryan.

'Then you can't help me! I don't want you helping me, because you ar not on my side!' yelled Isaac.

'Yes, I am on your side. I still want to get her back,' said Ryan.

'Just for yourself, well, you can't help her and I don't want you helping me! From now on, you are on your own!' yelled Isaac.

'But we can't do this by ourselves,' said Ryan as Isaac got off of him.

'I will show you and everyone else that I can and I will get her back!' said Isaac angrily.

'Isaac please, we're brothers,' begged Ryan.

'We where brothers, now I have no brothers!' yelled Isaac as he began to flap his wings furiously, and flew up into the sky, leaving Ryan standing there alone.


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