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Submitted:Jun 1, 2012    Reads: 38    Comments: 9    Likes: 1   


"Typical Rebecca always crying about something," my foster brother Zack said lying against my door frame.

"Get out," I yelled throwingmy brush from my vanity at him.

"Missed me," he laughed moving out of the way.

"I know to bad right,"I smirked.

"Watch your mouth missy, orI might just have to teach you to keep it shut again," he threatened. Thats something I didn't want to endure again. Last time he back handed me across the face leaving a bruise on my face. I went to go tell my foster parent, but they didn't believe me. And when I left back to my room Zack smacked me up against the wall threating to kill me if I snitched again. Me andZack were homeschool,so no I didn't have friends. Though he had many. Most of them had crushes on me, but wouldn't dare say something like that to Zack. The reason why I'm in foster care is because my parents used to beat the living daylights ot of me. When we moved here I thought hey maybe I can start over again. When they told me an older guy lived ther around my age I thoughA big brother to protect me. Sadley no, none of that happened. The protecter was actually a big meany, and bully who beats me worse than my parents did.

"That's what I thought," he smiled going away.I put my head down on my vanity and cryed. One thing you should know about me is I'm emo, and I love being emo. It's easy to express myself being like this. I have long black hair and Bright blue eyes. I don't have a boyfriend cause oveously I don't get out that much.

"Rebecca," Zack said comingback to my door.

"What," I asked frightened that I had done something wrong?

"How would you like to come to a party with me and my friends. The only way we can have a party at Erics is if theres a girl. Your a girl aren't you," he smiled?

"I'll go,"I answered.

"Good girl, get dressed," he damanded. he left and I walked over to my closet and pulled out a black miny skirt, red tank top, and my blackkneehigh converses.

"You ready," he asked by my doorway?

"Yea," I answered.

"Lets go," he said.

When we got toErics hous I noticed abouttwenty cars there and onlytwo other girls. What have I gotten my self into tonight.

"Come on lets go," Zack said getting out. He took my arm and led me into the house. There we so many dudes everywhere, and I was tthe only girl in the house. let me tell you I was so scared. He led me into the kitchen where I'm geussing his friends were.

"Everybody this is my baby sister Rebecca," Zack announced.

"Hey," they all said.

"Who wants her first,"he asked?

"What," Igasped terrifyed? Most of the guyshands flew up. Zack grabbed my arm and dragged a fighting me up to the satirs when the front door swung open and a guy who probaly was late to the party walked in.

"Help me," I screamed.

"What the fuck are ya'll doing to her," the guy yelled?! He raced up to Zack and snatched me away from him.

"You want something from her you pay first," Zack told him.

"What the fuck is wrong with you Zack," the guy asked knocking him over?! The guy took me in his arms( I was balling of course) and took me to his car. When we were both inside and seatbelted I looked over at him. He had blonde hair that hung in his eyes, anddeep green eyes. He looked over at me and smiled.

"Are you ok,"he asked me? I nodded.

"I'm just glad I got there in time," he told me.

"Me to," I wispered.

"Do you need me to take you back home," he asked?

"I don't want to go back home. Zack will be there, he'll just hit me again," I told him.

"You can stay the night at my apartment," he said. I stared at him.

"I promise I will not do anything to hurt you, never," he said.

"Ok," I wispered.





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