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Just a little piece of my new novel...comment and tell me if I should keep going...Find out who the guy is and what he is... View table of contents...


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Submitted:Jun 2, 2012    Reads: 15    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


                                                         Whe we got to his apartment he led me inside. It was small but clean. That was a suprise, I was suspecting there would be food everywhere, and a mess.

                        "I have a guest bed room in the back," he told me.

                         "Ok," I said.

                         "What do you want for dinner," he asked?

                          "It doesn't matter," I said.

                          "Pizza it is," he smiled.

                          "Um.....the showers the second door to the right. If you want I can give you one of my tshirts to sleep in," he said.

                          "Thanks, that'll be great," I smiled. He walked into his room then came back out with a shirt. I got  walked into the bathroom and beganmy shower. About twenty minutes later I was sqeeky clean,and dressed. I walked out of the bath room, and sat down on the couch. I smelled the aroma of pizza so I got up and walked into the kitchen. When I opened the door I stood totally still. A  raptor stood by the pizza. I' m talking about a dinosaur from eighty thousand years ago! I started to back away, but I knocked over a small table behind me, and the raptor turned his head my way.

                          "Crap," I mummbled running away I fast as I could. I turned my head and noticed the guy that saved my life running after me.

                           "Stp stop, it's ok," he yelled! I stopped and waited for him to catch up to me.

                           "Why was there a raptor in you kitchen," I asked?

                           "There's something I need to explain," he said as we sat down on the sofa.

                           "I'm not human," he said.

                            "Haha, stop trying to be funny," I said.

                            "I'm being serious," he said.

                            "Sure," I mummbled.

                             "Do you want to know what I am...that raptor back there was me," he explained.

                            "And how exacaly do you turn into a raptor,and why," I questioned?

                             "I turn into a raptor as one of the many things I can shipshape into. I'm a fallen Angel," he said.

                              "Sure you are," I said. He rolled his eyes. I blinked for one moment, and next thing I notice he has huge, fluffy black wings.

                            "What the crap," I gasped.

                              "I was lying Rebecca," he told me.

                              "How do you know my name I never told you my name," I asked?

                              "Because Rebecca, I'm your protector. For me to get back into heaven I have to complete this mission. I have to keep you safe," he explained.

                              "How long exacaly do you have to keep me safe," I asked?

                              "Til your last day's," he said.

                              "That's a long time," I said.

                              "It's a small price to pay to get back into heaven." he told me.

                              "That means I'll see you for the rest of my life, and in heaven," I said.

                              "Yep," he smiled.

                              "God I hope you arn't annoying," I sighed.

                              "God I hope you arn't that hard to keep alive," he said.





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