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Pink Sunset

Novel By: Greek Mysticism
Romance


Serena Diane Von Dehlia was just your average teenage, girl. That is until she was taken from the world she used to know. Devlin Devile, the [hot] prince of Jarenalia, and soon to be king is her captor, and unbeknownst to Serena, her fiance as well. After things are finally explained to her, and Serena's future is revealed, everything seems to be going well. Only, there's one problem. Only ONE. His name is Raphael Dupont; and he's a threat. But not for the reasons you think. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Oct 12, 2008    Reads: 226    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


    I stared at the tree—squinting, actually. There was something odd about it, almost unreal. Was I going crazy? Of course I was. The tree was just a regular tree. It had brown bark and green leaves. So, then why did it seem different?
   

 I stood up and slowly walked over to it so I could examine it further. I looked closely at the color and the texture. I smelled the wood. Normal. I pressed my ear against it. A humming noise vibrated from within its dense structure. I leaned away and knocked repeatedly on the trunk in different places. I was searching for a weak spot. When I heard the hollow, I brought my hand back and pounded on the wood until it cracked. I added more pressure with every blow and then it happened.
   

My fist penetrated the wood and a glowing light emerged from the dark cocoon, causing me to fall backwards in astonishment. It zipped back and forth through the air, almost as if it were searching for something. I stood, and immediately realized that was a mistake. The light froze and flew towards me.
   

I turned to run, but clumsily ended up tripping and falling into the muddy ground. Disgusting. The light encased me, and then ironically enough, everything went black.


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Comments:

Interesting, looking for following chapters.

Posted: Oct 13, 2008

Author Comment:

:)

I wonder where you're taking this. :)

Posted: Oct 13, 2008

Author Comment:

I wonder that too.

this is an interesting start

Posted: Nov 2, 2008



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