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The Forbidden Fyre

Novel By: Itania
Romance


There are three problems in Elenora's life. First, she is a Kireen -a mermaid. Secondly, she is in love with a Namuri named Zach. Thirdly, the Kireen and Namuri are mortal enemies. Can they break the bonds their forefathers tied around them? View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8

Submitted: Jul 19, 2008    Reads: 266    Comments: 4    Likes: 0   


Prologue: Part One

I can't just sit here and watch him be beaten by my family. But I can't just turn my back on my race. Oh the indicision! My thoughts are racing as I watch my love try to defend me from my own kin. My family is now nothing. They have truly forgotten what they taught me; they are so caught up in the struggle for dominance. I can't help but wince at the thought of either side loosing!

I made a mistake! He doesn't mean anything to me! Kill him!

I want to yell these lies. To spare him from more hurt than he's gone through. To let them kill him so that I may spare my family and my love from pain. I will just live alone.

Cold and alone. My Fyre put out through shame. Oh! If only I had my flame! But alas, my pendant is gone and I am human for my love. So that he won't kill me. So that we will work. Needless to say my family is not pleased.

I can hear voices as his family approaches. Ready for a fight. But my darling must live! I must get to him! I can feel a single tear roll down my cheek as he picks himself off the floor once more and positions himself in front of me. My mouth is open in a silent scream as he lunges once more. This once; possibly towards his death.

How I wish I could reverse this. If only I was a human...

I will tell you my story. If I do die here, I will tell you how this all happened and how the Kireen came to love the Namuri... and hopefully how they came to truly join the two races...


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Comments:

OHMYGOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love it!!!

keep writing (or I'll stalk you forever...),
Wish

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

This is Fyre Lyte, but it's retitled and I'm re writing it. The original sucked.

(Stalker! Stalker! Police! Police! hehehe)

AUOW that is sooo sad..having to choose between your love and family...harsh...but oh-so-good!

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

I know. Sad isn't it.

Good Idea! Keep it up

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

muwahahaha! I will. and I have a werewolf novel coming out. and a short story. (Fantasy Tails, and Frighten Me Speechless)

Ooo! Interesting...now i'm going to have to go read the next chap. :D

Posted: Sep 1, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks Cath!



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