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Under The Stairs

Novel By: Jenny Tavern
Romance


Alexis Jane wanted him for all the wrong reasons
He wanted her for reasons that didn't exist View table of contents...

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Submitted: Mar 23, 2008    Reads: 96    Comments: 10    Likes: 4   


“There’s no return address?” A fake blond stood behind the desk, holding my package. God, why didn’t I just put it in a envelope like a normal person?

“No” It doesn’t need one. The lucky person to get this is going to know exactly who sent this little present.

“Okay, That’ll be five fifty, Miss Jane” I slid my money across the counter and left, wondering why she had called me that, “Miss Jane” is not me any more. Not until the day that staircase falls. With my luck, that’ll be never. As I swung the front door pf the post office open I caught a glimpse of my self, and shuddered. In so little time I was so very different, my hair was cut in a sleek bob, my tank to hugging my chest, my jeans, loose an curving, in all the right places, How could I have not realized why he was so interested in me?

I followed the yellowing side walk down the foreign street, wondering if I’d be late. Late for school, for life, for everything. But my hopes were shot down when I entered math class, a long time before the bell. He arrived next. Mr. Steven Skane. Mr. Know everything, see everything, do nothing, himself. I couldn’t stand it. Stand knowing he knew. Wondering what happened at his locker after school that very special day, so long ago now, that changed my whole concept of life. So Mr. Steven Skane, your going to be target number one. I’m telling your story first.


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Comments:

Hmmm... very mysterious^-^. This seems like a good start to a really good novel-- I look forward to the update! The only thing I have a question about, is what do you mean "Now everything, see everything, do nothing himself?" Sorry, it might just be me who doesn't get it-- but if you could explain it-- that would be awesome^_^.

Update soon!!! Very soon!

Lot's of special chocolate to you,

Ghiradelli Girl.

Posted: Mar 23, 2008

Hmm i Like it very good.. You have some good talent you could be a bit more explanitory but really good.

--Hoodling--

Posted: Mar 23, 2008

There were a couple typos, but it's good and I want to read more! Oh, and I love her name, it's really pretty ^_^ Just one more thing: when she describes herself, umm,,,she seems a little full of herself, if that's how she's supposed to be, that's fine, but if she isn't, then maybe change the descriptions? Anyway, love it ^_^

Posted: Mar 23, 2008

Lucky day
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Loved it! Big thumbs up!!!

Posted: Apr 5, 2008

It's really good, i like it a lot!

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

Loved it all the way it was so cool!

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

this is really good!

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

aso
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Hey there, I haven't had a chance to read all your chapters, but so far it sounds very interesting.

Posted: Apr 7, 2008

I admit that I started reading this because the summary contains the name Alexis Jane, which is very, very close to one of my best friends' names, haha. And now I am intrigued....

Posted: Apr 10, 2008

V. interesting... it's almost like a journal cause it's very realistic...basically I really like this and wait with baited breath for more!

Posted: Jun 16, 2008



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