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Dearly Beloved

Novel By: jfm98
Romance


This is a story that sounded interesting in my head... View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 25, 2008    Reads: 66    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


Prologue

Jack and Jill ran up the hill in the year of 1995.They were best friends and no one could separate them from each other.But as they grew up and changed, Jill no longer played with Jack because she wanted to be part of the popular crowd.Jack was upset with her saying to him that he was not popular, because he thought they were good friends.Jill wanted to tell him that since he was in unpopular clubs and was not in sports, that they were running in different circles now a days and…well she just did not know how to tell him that.She always had a crush on him, because he was not only her dearest friend, but he was handsome.He had dark brown hair, and stunning blue eyes.She always knew he would tell her what was on his mind and how beautiful she was, and how much he loved her smile and…Oh who is she kidding!She knew she loved him, but it could never work out.She knew him to well, and he her.

That was twenty years ago…


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Comments:

aaaaa how sweeet!!!

haha i never thought of a jack and jill story like this heehee cool!!

morrrrrrrrrrrrreeee :D:D:D:D
me likes ^^

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Great! Thanks! :-)

wow i like this!
keep me posted!

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

I will! I changed a TON of stuff...but I have to retype it! I will tell u when I do post it!

Jill should be honest to herself...

Posted: Aug 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes she should!

Cool! This is very interesting, in a good way. I like it. I would have never thought of a story like this.

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks soooo.... Much! I have a TON of changes to add to this story! Sooo, stay tuned!



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