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Tancy is a twin who hates being the uglier and more manly one, but will all that change?
Cody is a hard working man who has lost a lot, but will a young schoolteacher change his mind?
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Submitted: Jun 17, 2008 Reads: 126 Comments: 7 Likes: 1
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hmm... cant wait for more! sounds very promising!
Posted: Jun 17, 2008
Diz iz good, i cant wait 2 read the REAL begginig. (LAL)
Posted: Jun 17, 2008
ooh this is good..Can't wait to read more.
Posted: Jun 18, 2008
looks really promising!!
"Tancy's short black hair hung on her freckled face like a baby monkey hangs onto it’s mother"
very good comparison.
I have one peice of advice though, try not to make your sentences choppy, or repeat names like fancy and tancy. but other than that, i'm going to continue reading!!
Happy days!!
Posted: Jun 18, 2008
awesome!!!
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
That really sucks for Tancy. It's really not cool when you are constantly upstaged by those around you, but I hope she finds love!
Posted: Sep 1, 2008
AWWW, POOR TANCY!!!!!! WELL, ON TO READ THE REST!!!!
Posted: Nov 26, 2008
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