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Southern Belle in the City

Novel By: jfm98
Romance


Tancy is a twin who hates being the uglier and more manly one, but will all that change?
Cody is a hard working man who has lost a lot, but will a young schoolteacher change his mind? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 17, 2008    Reads: 126    Comments: 7    Likes: 1   


Fancy and Tancy were twins and boy were they different! Fancy lived up to her name: beautiful, elegant, well mannered and always a hit with the boys!
Tancy, on the other hand, was the total opposite. She was not homily, but she was not as beautiful as her sister. She also loved to run around with the boys and get dirty, unlike her sister who abhorred to even get dirt on her shoes.
As the years passed, more and more proposals for marriage came for Fancy, and none for Tancy.Tancy grew up to be more like a man than a women and her southern accent made her stand out even more.But on their 23rd birthday, Fancy finally accepted the hand of a man that Tancy wished would have asked her.This man, William Blake,was the bachelor that she wished would have asked her not her sister.
At her sister’s wedding, Tancy saw her sister in a long white dress, adorned with pearls and a silk veil with her black hair cascading down her back like a waterfall.Tancy's short black hair hung on her freckled face like a baby monkey hangs onto it’s mother.She hated the red dress that her sister made her wear because it was to big for her not yet filled in body.Her sister had more of a bust than Tancy, and her bum is also more defined than hers is.Tancy always hated her sister’s looks because, after all, they are twins
But, Tancy is happy that she has stayed more active than her sister because she has more muscles and a more toned body.
But none of that matters anymore because she lost the man she loved to her sister and she will never get him back.


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Comments:

hmm... cant wait for more! sounds very promising!

Posted: Jun 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!!! I have alot of twists to ad to it!!!

Diz iz good, i cant wait 2 read the REAL begginig. (LAL)

Posted: Jun 17, 2008

Author Comment:

This is the REAL beginnig! I guess I got it confused, sorry!

ooh this is good..Can't wait to read more.

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

REad on, which I'm sure u have already! LOL!

looks really promising!!
"Tancy's short black hair hung on her freckled face like a baby monkey hangs onto it’s mother"
very good comparison.
I have one peice of advice though, try not to make your sentences choppy, or repeat names like fancy and tancy. but other than that, i'm going to continue reading!!
Happy days!!

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I am going to reread this one!!! Thanks 4 the tips!!

awesome!!!

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!! I am in the process of changing it so I wi8ll tell u when I do!

That really sucks for Tancy. It's really not cool when you are constantly upstaged by those around you, but I hope she finds love!

Posted: Sep 1, 2008

Author Comment:

She hopefully will! Thanks for reading! :-)

AWWW, POOR TANCY!!!!!! WELL, ON TO READ THE REST!!!!

Posted: Nov 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Yay!



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