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Cutting Roses - Scene #3

Novel By: Kissmeimgreek
Romance


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Submitted:Jan 14, 2012    Reads: 37    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


[Scene 3]

[There is a driveway going into the trees and then appears this large baby blue and grey cottage, the driveway and lawn have cars all through it and there are people outside on the lawn around a fire pit. people up on the balcony and the porch. Everyone looks drunk and some are smoking.]

Rachel

(pulling in) wow.

Anna

(speechless) Oh god... this is-

Amanda

(getting out of the car) this is AWESOME! (starts heading over to the fire pit where some boys are waving to her. Turns to face Rachel and Anna) Best Friday night ever!

Anna

Well I think it's safe to say we wont be seeing her anytime soon.

(the girls laugh as they get out of the car)

Rachel

How long do you want to stay?

Anna

Well, Amber is out at her friends house, and Diane wont be home until tomorrow morning so...

Rachel

So we can crash in my car and then drive home tomorrow?

Anna

Sounds like a plan!

[Break]

(Anna and Rachel walk up to the house)

Guy #1

Hey look! Anna and Rachel are here.

Gavin

(stumbles over) Hey-hey Rachel

Rachel

Hi Gavin, having fun?

Gavin

Bet-Better that your here now.

(Gavin steps closer and Anna gently pushes him back)

Anna

Hold up Gavin, who was the girl that you saw Tom with?

Gavin

(trying to think back) I don't know but all I know is it wasn't Rachel. (to Rachel) I would never hurt you Rachel, you know that right? Right!

Rachel

(nods) yeah Gavin I know (walks up the steps and goes inside.)

Anna

Oh boy (goes to follow)

Gavin

Anna! (She turns) Think I have a chance? I mean like I really like her yah know and -

Anna

(cuts him off) Gavin even if what your saying is true there is no way in hell that Rachel will pick you. (walks in the house)

(Gavin looks around, finds the bottle in his hands and pounds it back.)

Anna

(inside looking around) Rachel? Rachel!

Mike

Hey! I'm sorry I don't know your name, what are you doing here?

Anna

Mark! Hey it's Anna do you know where Tom is?

Mike

(looks slightly baffled) Uh... Mike?

Anna

No, Tom!

Mike

(laughs) out in back common (leads through the crowd of people. As they get closer they hear both Rachel and Tom screaming)

(they get outside and they see Tom and Rachel in a very heated argument)

Rachel

And you were the one!-

Tom

The one who what? Cared! Loved you? Put up with all your crap!

Rachel

I hate you! You ignorant ass

Tom

When is it any different! I'm the bad guy but yet your the bitch!

(Rachel slaps Tom, Anna and Mike run down the stairs to stop the fight)

(Mike grabs Tom's shoulder)

Tom

Were over! Through!

Rachel

Fine by me!

Mike

Hey that's enough (tries to pull him away)

Rachel

why don't you go tell your whore you can spend more time with her!

Tom

(Angry and loud) You don't understand!

Rachel

Than explain it to me!

(waits - neither of them say anything)

(quietly in a calmer tone) Yeah that's what I thought Tom.

Tom

(Looks pissed off) You don't understand.

(Tom walks away followed by a very concerned Mike)

Anna

(hesitating) Are you okay?

Rachel

(gives her a sarcastic look) I'm great (walks into the house and Anna follows) I'm great cause tonight I lost my boyfriend and my dignity in front of the entire school and then some, no Anna I'm totally fine! (sits down on the coach) how could he do this to me? He called me a bitch to my face and then he tells me I DON'T understand!

Anna

Do you?

Rachel

No I don't! But then again I have no idea what he is talking about. He want's me to trust him just cause were dating but he never lets me in... Anna I try so hard yet there's just a wall with him, we can go all the way on some things yet when it comes to talking he stops. I can't do it anymore I can't take all this bullshit... (reaches for a drink)

Anna

If you want I can talk to him-

Rachel

(runs her hands through her hair) I'm sorry Anna but really I don't want to work things out this time.

Anna

So your actually over?

Rachel

(Gulps the drink down) Yeah.

[Break]

Mike

Man Tom whats wrong with you!

Tom

Whats wrong with me? (points his hand back at the house) Whats wrong with her! She comes in here; pissed off and directly b lines it for me! I was having a good time I wasn't looking for a fight, I was happy to see her and then she just goes off like a broken record.

Mike

Your such an ass hole

Tom

(grabs Mike's shirt) What did you call me!

Mike

(pushes him off him) I said your an ass hole I mean did you just listen to what you said, you pull that girl around and are never serious with her what the hell do you expect from her! You keep her in the dark about your crap and for starters I don't even know why you do; it's not a big deal.

Tom

But its my crap - not hers! I bear it.

Mike

Then bear it Tom! Carry it around let it drag you down but don't hurt her with it, she loves you that why she yells and fights because she cares and because she scared that shes loosing you.

Tom

She's not

Mike

But she doesn't know that! (pauses) imagine you seeing Rachel hugging some guy you never met before and when you asked she said nothing of it. Tom you two love each other but your big head is going to push her away one day and she will never come back, then what will you do. (walks away, Tom pauses and then slowly follows)

[Break]

Gavin

Hey Rachel!

(Rachel Moans)

Anna

Now is not the best time for this Gavin

Gavin

But I just wanted to say I'm sorry for Tom, hes a jackass

Rachel

(sitting up) I know! God I don't want to see him agai...

(Rachel starts to fall and Anna reaches out to rebalance her)

Anna

Woah (sets her back down) Gavin I think you should leave.

Rachel

Wait Gavin come here!

(Gavin eagerly come over to Rachel)

Rachel

(touches his hair) your cuter than I thought

Gavin

Maybe you just never got a close look (leans in)

(Anna sees whats happening and tries to pull him off)

Anna

Okay! That's enough!

(Anna tries to pull him off and then stops seeing Tom and Mike in the doorway)

Rachel

Oh hey look! There's my dead nothing ex!

(Tom strolls over and throws Gavin off of Rachel)

Rachel

HEY! Don't touch him!

Tom

Your drunk, I'm taking you home

Rachel

Im not drunk! Your just a jackass!

Tom

Rachel common-

Rachel

No! now apologize to my boyfriend (points to Gavin who freezes)

Tom

Your... what!

Gavin

Man shes drunk Tom I didn't- I mean we didn't-

(Tom reaches back and punches Gavin hard, both Anna and Rachel scream as Gavin falls to the floor stunned)

Tom

(kicks him lightly in his ribs) Get out! (He watches Gavin crawl out of the room and turns around to find Rachel in his face)

Rachel

Fuck you! (slaps hard) YOU get out! I don't need you okay just leave me alone I don't want you! I hate you! I HATE YOU! (pushes him out and then runs back to the bedroom repeating "I hate you" Anna follows her)

Tom

(touches his cheek) She shouldn't be aloud to drink when shes pissed off

(Anna looks out the door before Rachel screams her name and then she shuts the door)

[End of Scene 3]





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