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The Lost Soul

Novel By: KKPrincess
Romance


Tags: james, and, his, friend

Bobina is a girl who has always been lost in the world and meets Prince Eric. She runs away and meets James. They have a little bit of fun. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Mar 6, 2008    Reads: 77    Comments: 6    Likes: 1   


The Lost Soul

James was strolling down the street and heard a squeel. James turned around and saw that a car had turn the corner of the dirty street and was heading straight toward him. James ran to the middle of the street waiting for the car. The car didn't slow down. This suprised James. Although he knew who was in the black Hummer, he was actually suprised that they din't slow down. They always did.

"James get in!" Yelled a voice from the Hummer.

James walk to the side of the car. It was moving and wouldn't stop. James climbed into the car not knowing what to expect. He hadn't seen these guys in a long time. Well okay, he saw them at a party about two months before but hadn't seen a hair from them since.

"So, I heard about your little adventure on Sunday night. That was what, three days ago?" someone said. It was Austin. Everyone hated him but did whatever he said to do. No one ever went against Austin.

"Actually that was 5 days ago and I knew you would filnd out about Christina." James said.

"Give it up. She loves me more!"

"Uh actually you just scare her." James said.

"That' is not true Jason!"

"My name is not Jason. That was my father's name!" James said.

"Really cuz i saw your record the other day and on it was the name Jason William Black."


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Comments:

lol, this is amazing. aka- Saratopia love u. lylas

Posted: Mar 6, 2008

I think you are a great writer.
My advice is that you might want to stop saying Jame in the begin a little earlier.
Other then that, awesome so far!

Posted: Mar 23, 2008

Author Comment:

this is the story jason and i wrote he he

James*

Posted: Mar 23, 2008

Author Comment:

haha

you use the name james in like every story

Posted: Apr 1, 2008

Author Comment:

actually jason came up with the names i just wrote the story

Love ya,
KK

hmm... im really looking forward to reading the next chapters of this. you set the mood of a promising adventure very well :D!! maybe cut a few of the "James" in the first paragraph, though.

ps: i really like the name James, good choice!

Posted: Apr 10, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks, my friends tell me i use the name james way to often! I'll make the change soon, or as soon as i can!

KK

U have 2 tell me when u make chapter 2 diz story. Im interested into wat happenz next.

Posted: Jun 8, 2008

Author Comment:

K i will do that!



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