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The Keepers Crown

Novel By: KytrisVemidethMedera
Romance


This story begins with a rather unusual plot, assasins, crazy women with guns, trickory, people in cages, those hot showers that are in EVERY SINGLE STORY I READ,(yeah quit laughing you know exactly what im talking about) and of course the young black haired vampire that of course always has something to do with that occasional hot shower (If you havent gotten it by now then you havent read a lot of un-published vampire stories.) So enjoy. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 19, 2008    Reads: 115    Comments: 6    Likes: 1   


            “Daimen, Sir Daimen!” Troy trotted quickly over the red carpeting of the staircase, pausing to catch his breath at the top. “Master Daimen!” He waved the stack of papers over his face, lifting his head as fresh sweat fell from his chin.

Troy?” He lit up at the sound of the clear voice, its sound grasping the atmosphere in a demanding feel. “Master it’s an emergency!” He raised his head slightly, willing to catch any sound that strayed his way.

“Enter then, yet be slightly more composed with your introduction boy, you are much too loud.” Troy swallowed and pushed one of the large glossed oak doors forward.

            Now a large room lay before him, a black silk king’s bed set in the far wall. The ceiling and walls were brilliantly colored in crimson and dark gold that reflected the light that streamed in through the ceiling height windows. Large portraits aliened the walls, white candles lining their base over the cherry wood furniture, and thick ebony carpet.

“Master?”

“Over here, what is it?”

Troy turned his head to see a nineteen year old watching him from a desk. Dark black hair brushed over their shoulders, two onyx and mauve mixed eyes watching him through thick bangs that often covered much of his pure porcelain skin.

“Sir, there has been a request from the others.” He narrowed his eyes slightly.

 

Daimen’s P.O.V.

 

            “A request from the others?” The boy approached me, handing me a set of bound papers “It’s an assassination sir.” I smiled slightly, my withdrawn fangs glowing past my lips “Ah, a girl? How rare” I chuckled lightly “A rather beautiful one.” I ran my fingers over the picture “What threat could a simple flower like this pose to the race?”

 

*      *      *

 

“Get the guns, all of you, shut down the gates to the base and send out the swat team!” Iris paced down the halls her voice turning heads. “We have an intruder, all of you take your positions, the penetration is in the left gate!” Growled as her ring tone met her ears over the loud sirens, and red lights, and picking it up she flipped it open “What is it?”

“Iris?”

“Yes?”

“We have him, he bought time for the others to escape, but we have him contained!”

“Good, where?”

“Section four, in the lock down center!”

She suddenly speed up throwing open two double doors “I’m on my way, secure the creature, and confine it. Send it to holding cell seventeen, doubled caged, I want Mary Lynn to watch over it until I can observe the it.” She shut her phone of sliding it into her pocket “Finally.”  


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Comments:

ooo this is good

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

its a pretty hard topic to write on at the moment lol but i appreciate the comment geez, im going to have to put off a whole day to updates lol.

Sounds original. like it. update soon please.

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

I will see what i can do.

YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!

Posted: Oct 10, 2008

Author Comment:

lol

What in the hell was that? A teaser???? Its soo short, why in all that is holy did you stop?? It seemed like it was getting some place, and I know its the the beginning but could you add more description and personality? Other that we the readers demand you right more, you hear? lol OK riot over for now.....

Posted: Oct 18, 2008

Author Comment:

ok ok ok, yeah i have a friend thats begging me to continue! fine fine ill do it =p

hmmmm PS to all of you...
wow.

this thing needs major editing...

Posted: Oct 18, 2008

:( wow...That was....Short. :( I'm going to cry now. *Sobs* Will there ever be an update???? I liked this a lot.....Please continue writing it! :) LOL.
PS: I know what you mean with the shower scenes *Rolls eyes* I've only read one vamp. story w/out any. Um Compaions of the night, Vivian Vande Velde (crazy name, huh? I could only spell it because I have one of her books next to me, LOL.)

Posted: Oct 27, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah there everywhere -.- But I am actually not sure what to do with this one...I still have tp piece the plot together =P



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