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And so it began

Novel By: lux

Thing aren't what they seem.
Kate lived a seemingly normal life with her boyfriend until someone strange came to the door and turned everything inside out. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Jul 8, 2010    Reads: 62    Comments: 0    Likes: 2   

"Go down the hall to the last door on the left."

said the man in the dark black blazer, he didn't look up, I was kind of glad, I didn't want to see what was under all that black hair.

I walked down the narrow hallway, it was lit by red candles, that looked like little red demons, licking the walls, and dancing to a song that the devil sang to them.

I knocked.

"yeah." A man's voice said.

His voice sounded smooth and and sultry almost like a low growl, I was instantly soothed, like his voice was sinking into my veins, calming me, poisoning me in a way.

He may have only said a word but I could hear him talk forever.


The..They told me to come to the back. I sputtered quietly, my voice barely above a whisper I'm sure, but It sounded like my voice was bouncing off of every wall.

"come in." he purred.

so I went.

Before I could turn around I felt his chest against my back, I stepped back and he mirrored my movements, I moved to the left he moved to his left.

I turned around and he looked at me, I could feel his every movement, he was so close I could smell him. He smelled sweet.

"leave." he said.

"I don't want to.....I don't want to leave...I mean.....tell me why you wanted me here..why you called me.?

"I don't want you....leave" he said simply.

"fine." I said, suddenly I was lost, I had no idea why I was there and I was scared.

"Get out while you still can....before he changes his mind." said the creepy man in a sing songy voice, he was taunting me I realized.I ran.


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