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Enter the land of Starlem and watch magical things happen. Prince Christopher faces hardships of being a prince. The king and queen are throwing a royal bash for his eighteenth birthday. He is expected to choose a bride, but let's just say, the person he wants, he can't get. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Apr 7, 2007    Reads: 363    Comments: 9    Likes: 0   


This isn’t any ordinary story. You might think it’s about a prince trying to find true love or a pageboy falling in love with a princess and thinks he isn’t good enough for her, but ends up with her anyway. Well, this isn’t exactly like those stories but a bit similar. I said a bit. So sit back, relax, and enter the land of Starlem.

 

            Starlem is filled with occupants unlike any other. You may have heard of them before but there is a catch. They mostly all got along. You’ll see what I mean. There are trolls, ogres, fairies, nymphs, dragons, and regular humans just like you and me. But, picture a troll walking down the road and stopping by a dragon’s house for tea. Do you see what I mean? But that’s what makes Starlem so special, there are no enemies. Everybody usually got along. Starlem has had peace for over thousands of years.

 

            And of course, there is a royal family. The Mallendore’s. This royal family has been ruling over Starlem for centuries. King Ferdinand and his wife, Queen Annabelle keep an eye on everyone. Every week, they would visit families all over Starlem to see if they needed anything. The royal family have very kind hearts, especially Prince Christopher.

 

            Yes, Prince Christopher was very kind. He just doesn’t know when he’s overdoing his kindness. There was once a time when Prince Christopher was visiting a troll family beside the creek with his family. The trolls lived under a bridge because they had to stay away from the sun. The sun can do damage to there eyesight. So, when they arrived at the trolls’ bridge, everything was going fine. The trolls were grateful for them visiting. The trolls were serving lemon cakes, and that’s when everything went wrong.

 

            When Prince Christopher took a lemon cake and tasted it, let’s just say he didn’t know what he was saying. He suggested to the trolls that the lemon cake was a bit too sweet, and he told them that he’d be willing to let them see their cook, to get it just right. Let me just clue you in on something. Trolls may be nice creatures, but they can not take insults. And quite frankly, this was an insult.

 

            Queen Annabelle explained to the trolls that Prince Christopher didn’t mean any harm; he was just stating his opinion. Thankfully, the trolls forgave him. From that day on, they never took Prince Christopher with them when they went visiting. This is where my story begins.

 

           


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hahahahahahahahaha i was here wen u typed this. u idiot, ur such a good writer. "wheres the list?" hahaha i think i noe where it is "the list for the ball". ppl reading this, ull understand it in the further chapters

Posted: Apr 7, 2007

Author Comment:

lol, your crazy, well thanks for commenting lol

hey rawan great story! great writter! comment mine plez -mina

Posted: Apr 8, 2007

Author Comment:

lol, i already commented urs anyway umm yeah thanx for the comment although i think ur a better writer than me lol

nice story. lol im jealous cuz ur such a good writer.

Posted: Apr 8, 2007

Author Comment:

lol aww thanx, im posting my other story soon, so tune into that too!

Luv ur work!!! hope to see the same rating and comments in mine. not actually the same but u no wat i mean. lolz

Posted: Apr 8, 2007

Author Comment:

lol thanx so much for commenting, ill be sure to check out ur work and dont worry itll be good feed back lol thanx again

i really like mystical stories..i think yu did a great job..i hope i become a good writer like you and your sister :D

Posted: Apr 10, 2007

Author Comment:

lol, dont worry ull get there lol thnx for the comment i cant wait to read ur work!!

Oh, well.... I'm not done with the 4th chapter... I only wrote part of it. On sunny...

Posted: Apr 13, 2007

Author Comment:

oh ok, cause i was like yay the fourth chapter, but then it was like 2 paragraphs lol but id love for u to continue! i want to see wat happens

yay i finally started reading this story. HAHA the trolls got insulted from the hottie prince! losers! lol =)

Posted: May 18, 2007

Author Comment:

lol, thats not exactly a good thing lol but ok, thanx for finally getting the time to read my story its so sweet of you lots of love =)

oh my God what a great story so far can't wait to read more. check out my work please

Posted: Jun 18, 2007

Author Comment:

thanks and ill go check out ur work =)

great description of Starlem. love it.

Posted: Oct 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you =]



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