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Mythical Creatures

Novel By: MidNightSun
Romance


Loida McCarthy, or Lola, lives a not so good life. Her best Friend from her childhood, Lizzie or Liz, stopped talking to her when she became a cheerleader in seventh grade, and since Lola doesn't like drowing attention, and never tried to be popular their friendship was lost. Now, snearly six years later Lola is still the main loser in their year, thanks to her so call 'friend' for spilling every secret she knows of her. But things are about to change. Its their senior year and a new family has arrived in town. This family lives in the biggest mansion in town, they have pale sking and goldish yellow eyes. Their only son is also a senior and is very attractive, his brown hair looks like he just got out of bed, every outfit he wears shows off his well built chess, and his smile put Zack Efron's and Orlando Bloom's to shame. Every girl in school, is attrated to him. But will Lola have enough courage to go against her ex-best friend for a guy??? Even if the guy shows a little interest on her??? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 28, 2008    Reads: 291    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


"Lola, are you ready for tomorrow?" My mom ask me on another morning of the worst summer ever-not that any other summer has been any better-.

"What's tomorrow?" I ask, was someone coming and I forgot?

My mom sigh and shook her head. Her short brown hair moving with her.

"I swear Lola, you can be so out of it sometimes." She said, in a sad voice.

"Sometimes?" My little sister, who's fourteen Cate, said."More like every single day, no wonder Liz ditch you, you have no life, I'm embarrased to be your sister."

Lizzie Spears was my best friend from elementary school. Now she's a cheerleader and I'm just a plain loser.

"Cate." My mom said."Watch it."

"What's tomorrow?" I ask again, taking my glass of orange juice.

"Tomorrow is school." Cate said.

I Spill the juice on the table.

"LOLA!"

"What!" I exclaim, standing up and walking towards the calendar.

It can't be,

I though. So soon.

"Today's the tenth." My mom said. "School starts tomorrow."

"But don't worry, you already bought all your school supplies." Cate said. "Remember, the nerd day."

"Cate!" My mom said. "Your sister is not a nerd, she just decides to do her work on time, unlike someone I know. Or do I need to remine you who I had to go to school and plead the principal to let you pass to the ninth grade?"

Cate made a face and I smirk.

"I need to go shopping anyways," I said."I wouldn't want to embarrased my little sister on the first day of school, now would I?"

"Ha,ha, ha." Cate laugh as my dad walk into the kitchen.

"Good morning." He said.

"Morning dad." Me and Cate said.

"Lola," He said, looking at me. "I know is not your birthday, but since you'll be a senior starting tomorrow, your mother and I have decided to give you and early, eighteenth birthday present."

"What is it?" I ask, excited.

"He's old car, just like your sixteenth b-day." Cate laugh.

"Not quite." My mom said, and I stare. "It is a car, but not our car."

"Which one do you want to go to?" My dad ask."Porsche or BMW?"

"Are you serious?!" I ask.

"Yes." He said. "Your Mercedez is too old for you now, I'm selling it."

"Finally, it was putting us to shame." Cate said. "I mean, we're like the richest people in this town, that car was of early 2000, we're in 2008 people!"

"Cate, I hope you look for a guy with a lot of money, because the money mom an ddad are going to give you won't last you a year."

"Ha,ha,ha."

"Well, which one do you choose Lola?" My dad ask.

I thought for a second. A Porsche or a BMW. umph. I like the M6 so,"BMW."

"Let's go."


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Comments:

why didn't she get a porshe? I'd give (nearly)anything for one of those!
Oh, suggestion: fix some of your comma errors, but I like it so far!

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

She didn't get it because she someone else is going to.....



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