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Mythical Creatures

Novel By: MidNightSun
Romance


Loida McCarthy, or Lola, lives a not so good life. Her best Friend from her childhood, Lizzie or Liz, stopped talking to her when she became a cheerleader in seventh grade, and since Lola doesn't like drowing attention, and never tried to be popular their friendship was lost. Now, snearly six years later Lola is still the main loser in their year, thanks to her so call 'friend' for spilling every secret she knows of her. But things are about to change. Its their senior year and a new family has arrived in town. This family lives in the biggest mansion in town, they have pale sking and goldish yellow eyes. Their only son is also a senior and is very attractive, his brown hair looks like he just got out of bed, every outfit he wears shows off his well built chess, and his smile put Zack Efron's and Orlando Bloom's to shame. Every girl in school, is attrated to him. But will Lola have enough courage to go against her ex-best friend for a guy??? Even if the guy shows a little interest on her??? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 11, 2008    Reads: 284    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Alex POV

Mrs. Wilson had stopped calling row and I saw lola take out a book called Twilight. I had read that book, us vampires like to read the stories humans have about us, and I've got to say, Stephanie has it about right, just to say it's my most favorite book.Not all vampires are evil, or drink human blood. But this might ruin stuff, I pretty much have the same description as Edward Cullen, except I have Brown hair. I wonder if she'll figure it out, it doesn't help that I can't read her thoughts.

"Ofcourse the geek loser would read instead of making conversation with the guy who just stood up for her." I heard Bella said.I look at her and she was glaring at Lola.

She so does not know how to flirt.She thought.

"Ofcourse Bells, what did you expect, she probably doesn't even know how to flirt." Liz said.

OMG, it's like she can read my thoughts.Bella said, and I chuckle.

I look over at Liz, I knew she wasn't a Vampire and that she had no special power, or I would've known.I look over at Lola and saw that she was still reading, I admire that, I didn't like girls who look for a fight but fought if she was hit.

She's such a geek, OMG,I so be talking to him right now. He looks so cool, and hotter than the other football players.A girl thought.

"Well, if you have to read to be a geek instead of a cool person then, I guess I'll take out my book."I said, and bend down to my backpack to take out my copy of Twilight.

"That's nawt what I meant."Liz revise quickly."See, Lola here-"She hiss her name-"is just an unexplicable loser, a know it all, a girl with no sense of style, someone that obviously doesn't care what other people think, someone that doesn't do anything to be popular and just let people judge her for how she acts instead of who she really is."

That shock me. It sounded like she was sort of defending her and at the same time insulting her. But right now, Lola looks like she has a great sense of style. I obviously figure out by myself that she doesn't care what people think about her, I mean someone would had tried to fix their profile if they've know they were the major loser of the school, but Lola doesn't seem to care.

"And you do?"I heard Lola ask her."Last time I check your only friends are the football players you haven't hook up with and the cheerleaders who adore your up-to-date sense of style."

I was shock.

Did Lola just said that? A boy's voice thought.

It's true if you think about it. Another guy said.

I think I hit a nerve.Liz thought, smiling.

"At least I have had boyfriends, and have friends." Liz said, smiling in triumph."Something you obviously don't"

"Why would I want a boyfriend who just wants to hook up and friends who just like the way I dress and not who I am?" Lola ask her.

In other words, she's still a virgin, open for a friendship, and hasn't had her first kiss. All the things I'm going to change. In time.

"Because you are a complete loser."Bella said."All a guy wants is to hook up, and obviously you have to have a nice sense of style to attract them to you and that's what Liz shows."

I felt insulted, I've gone out with a zillion girls, and I haven't taken one of them to bed.

Liz stood up and model.Showing off her too short mini-skirt, her too short tank top, and knee-high boots.

"So in other words I don't dress like a complete whore. Thanks." Lola said and everyone gasp.

"You did not just call me a whore."Liz said walking towards Lola.

"Yes, she did." I said."And if that's how you really are, don't even bother giving me the time of day, I don't date sluts."

At that moment the bell rang and everyone took their things and went to find their next class."What do you have next?"Lola ask me, completly ignoring Liz, and oblivous to Lola, her obvious attempt to look sexy to me.

"AP Chemistry with Mrs.Brown."I replied."You?"

She look down at her schedule."AP Chemistry with Mrs.Brown as well."

I hid a smirk, I knew her entire schedule, I had made sure we had every single class together.

"Let's go then."I said.

"Let's go."She said, and we walk pass Liz.He's only doing that to make her feel special, yeahsure, keep thinking that.

"So, who was the girl you were hanging with this morning?" I ask, trying to make conversation, as everyone stares at us, shock that Lola has someone to talk to this year, and thinking that that's the reason she's dress like that.

"My little sister."She told me as we walked down the hall."We have to go up the stairs."

"Ok."

We open the door that led to the stairs.

"So, why does Liz hate you?"I ask, I still couldn't figure out why Liz said such a thing, since I can only hear what someone is thinking at the moment.

"That's a very good question, why don't you go ask her."she said,in a tone that made it clear that she wasn't going to say anything else.

"Oh, sorry."I said.Then I felt it, a vampire's presence.

We got to the class and walk in. This classroom has three rows with four black table and two blue chairs behind them, and walls full posters about lab safety rules,-hah, as if I need that- old science fair projects, and old class projects.As we fully walked in we saw name tags on the table and everyone looking for the right place to sit.

Lola and I went to find our names. I look down the rows and found my name faster than anyone else, who was still looking.I look to my right to see who I was sitting next to and saw Lola's name, which happens to be Loida. I heard a brief movement and look up to see Lola looking at her name. I smile as she look up at me.

"Hello partner."I said, sounding excited.

"Hi." She said and took her sit as the bell rang.Then I felt it again.The presence of a Vampire.

"Good morning class."The teacher,Mrs. Brown, said walking inside the classroom. She has dark skin, her hair is straight and shoulder lenght and she has brown eyes."I said, good morning class."

"Good morning Mrs.Brown."The whole class said.

I went to read her thoughts. Even if she were a vampire, she couldn't lock me out, I'm loyalty, Noone can lock me out. But I have advantages with Vampires, I can read all of their thoughts, unlike with other creatures.

She's a Vampire, and she's not excatly a she. She's not Mrs.Brown, Mrs.Brown is dead, he killed her last week, when he found out I was here and that I'll be attending this school.He's one of the rebels, and worst of all, my old teacher.He's power is to shape shift, but he can't take the place of royalty, which means I don't have to worry about him replacing me or Lola. But then I saw Lola and Cate walking out of the M6. No, Cate needs protection, I need to talk to the McCarthy's.

I was brought back to the classroom when I heard giggles. I look infront of me, to see two girls.

We will so get her.One of them thought. But when they saw what Mrs.Brown, or Mr.John, was doing they stop giggling and froze. Great.

I put my lips on Lola's ear and whisper,"those two are in trouble." And she nodded in agreement.

Mr.John then came to our row and began to check.

"I guess you're wondering if you'll get in trouble even though you switch with yourselves, and the answer is yes."She told the girls who let out a groan."Detention tomorrow, three O'clock, don't be late or you'll get another day."

She came to our desk and I froze. She look up with a smile,"ah, miss McCarthy, I've heard a lot about you. And who do we have here, Alexander McGregor. Alexander, sounds familiar."Ofcourse it does, I thought even if he couldn't hear me.

"I wouldn't be so sure, I just move here."I said, protecting my cover.

Can't believe this girl is the Princess, for what I've heard she's a complete know-it-all and a loser. No Princess is a loser.Oops, I forgot the Prince reads minds.How are you my dear Prince? How about I give you some reminders, huh?

"Umph, well, I used to teach a Prince, name Alexander."He said, smiling at me.'What a trouble maker he was, always got the girls."

I force myself not to glared at him, and tried to laugh indifferently, and I did.

He tried not to think about his plans, but he never knew that I could read everything in a vampire's mind, and I knew he was going to use Cate as bait to get Lola, if both Human heirs die, there'll be noone to look after Earth, therefor the war will automatically end, and the rebels win. When Lola turns eighteen, she'll get her powers and noone will be able to touch her without her permission, she'll be able to protect Cate herself, but until then, I'm their protector. Felipe John will be able to touch her if he wanted, and I couldn't risk that. I needed to find out more about Cate. What will deffinatly get her attention.

I was glad when the bell rang, I waited patiently for Lola. Once we were outside the class I look quickly for a safe place to talk, and found a closet with mops and stuff. I remove the lock without difficulty and went in.

"I know you're a good student and love to be in a teacher's good side, but trust me, don't get too close to Mrs.Brown."I said in rush whisper.

"Why?"She ask confuse.

"Just trust me, please."I said a little impatient.

"Will you explain?"She ask me and I thought about for a second.

"Later, come on, we're going to be late."I said.

"What clas-"

"Don't bother, I have the same classes you have, now let's go to Math." I said, and I saw confusion wash over her as we walk out.

This are just some last minute pics.....

altAlex's PorschealtLola's M6altAlex 'mom'altliz.altCate.altBella.


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more! quickly because I won't be here for long! I'm going to camp next week and i want to continue reading this! (gramatical errors here and there, but not noticeable. Good job!)

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks.....I'll hurried up, probably post one everyday....

I think the story is OK, but it is to similar too the twilight saga for me, I think you need to come up with some of your own ideas.
HOPE YOU TRY TO MAKE IT A BIT DIFFERENT.
Sidhe

Posted: Nov 3, 2008



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