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Mythical Creatures

Novel By: MidNightSun
Romance


Loida McCarthy, or Lola, lives a not so good life. Her best Friend from her childhood, Lizzie or Liz, stopped talking to her when she became a cheerleader in seventh grade, and since Lola doesn't like drowing attention, and never tried to be popular their friendship was lost. Now, snearly six years later Lola is still the main loser in their year, thanks to her so call 'friend' for spilling every secret she knows of her. But things are about to change. Its their senior year and a new family has arrived in town. This family lives in the biggest mansion in town, they have pale sking and goldish yellow eyes. Their only son is also a senior and is very attractive, his brown hair looks like he just got out of bed, every outfit he wears shows off his well built chess, and his smile put Zack Efron's and Orlando Bloom's to shame. Every girl in school, is attrated to him. But will Lola have enough courage to go against her ex-best friend for a guy??? Even if the guy shows a little interest on her??? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 14, 2008    Reads: 134    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


The rest of the day went out with everyone starring at us, and by fifth pariod it was made clear that Alex and I have every class together. Every girl stare at me with envious eyes everytime we walked out of class.

We're heading to the parking lot now, laughing at how Liz look when Alex hold my hand before going out of our last class.He did it on purpose, I know, and it made me wonder if he like liz and is only hanging out with me to make her jealous.I look up at the sound of other people laughing and froze.I can't believe it. My little sister is turning into a mini Liz. She's sitting on the back of th M6 talking with a, I have to admit,super hot guy, but not as hot as Alex.

"What's wrong?"Alex ask.

"That."I said and pointed to my sister and the guy.I look at Alex and he look mad.

"Isn't that your sister?"Alex ask, the anger clear in his voice.

"Yeah that's my sister."I said.

"I guess the McCarthy's find the McGregor's very attrative."He joked, but his eyes were tight.

"Wait.What?"

"That's my little brother."He said.

"You never said you had a brother."I accuse him.

"You never ask."He simply said.

"Ha, ha, ha."I said."Not fair, I told you I had a sister."

"But I asked you if you had a sister."He said."You on the other hand."

"Ok, okay."I said as we reach them.

We came to a stop infront of Cate and the boy.

"Hello."I said.

"Hey, Lola."Cate said."This is Cam."

Cam nodded his head towards me.I notice he had the same goldish eyes as Alex.

"Hi."I said."Cate this is Alex, Cam's older brother."

"Oh, yeah, Cam mention him."Cate said, and turn to Alex."He also said that you left him at the house this morning because you were mad at him."

"Really?"

"Yeah."Cate said."It's really mean, I mean he's your brother."

"A very annoying one."Alex said, and look around the parking lot, his eyes landing on Ms.Brown."We better go."

"Nice to meet you Alex."Cate said.

"Same here."Alex said.

"Lola."Alex said, and took my hand and took me a few steps back, putting his lips on my ear."Remember what I said about Ms.Brown.Stay away from her. And make sure Cate is even farther away from her than you."

I gave him a confuse look, but nodded.He smile and peck me on the cheek.

"See you tomorrrow."He said and went to his Porsche.

"Bye."I said, a second late. I walked towards my M6 and unlocked the doors. Cate and I went in and as I did I felt someone eying me.I look aroung, everyone eyes were on me, but the most obvious were Ms.Brown.

Maybe I should listen to Alex and stay away from her. I thought as I reeve the engine.

I drove home, and that's when we both saw the black Porsche on our new neighbor's front yard.

"They live in the biggest mansion in town!"Cate exclaim."I can't believe it!"

"That'll explain the car."I said and walk in.


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I love it update soon and i hope that Ms. Brown gets it:] love it

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Yay! post mores plez!

Posted: Jul 15, 2008



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