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Mythical Creatures

Novel By: MidNightSun
Romance


Loida McCarthy, or Lola, lives a not so good life. Her best Friend from her childhood, Lizzie or Liz, stopped talking to her when she became a cheerleader in seventh grade, and since Lola doesn't like drowing attention, and never tried to be popular their friendship was lost. Now, snearly six years later Lola is still the main loser in their year, thanks to her so call 'friend' for spilling every secret she knows of her. But things are about to change. Its their senior year and a new family has arrived in town. This family lives in the biggest mansion in town, they have pale sking and goldish yellow eyes. Their only son is also a senior and is very attractive, his brown hair looks like he just got out of bed, every outfit he wears shows off his well built chess, and his smile put Zack Efron's and Orlando Bloom's to shame. Every girl in school, is attrated to him. But will Lola have enough courage to go against her ex-best friend for a guy??? Even if the guy shows a little interest on her??? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 21, 2008    Reads: 118    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


After Cam and Alex left Cate and I stayed up taking it all in. Us Princesses, unbelievable. Everything we thought was a Myth is real and now a Vampire is out to get us, well, Cate.I'm getting powers and a Vampire is in love with me, but not just any Vampire, he's the Vampire, future ruler of his world, and he wants me to rule it with him. If everything goes alright, I won't have to worry about college, ha!

I don't remember falling asleep, but when the next thing I know my mom's waking me up.

"Lola."She said as my eyes open."You need to get ready, school starts in an hour."

Great!I thought.

I went up to my room as my mom started waking up Cate.

I took a shower and went inside my closet. I decided to put on a a blue shirt, a black vest, and blue capris with black sandals, a black hat, blue earrings, blue watch, and a black ring. I went to take my messenger bag, my iPhone, and my keys then went down stairs.

When I got to the kitchen, I froze. Alex, Cam, Cate, my parents, and two other people- a man and a women-, were there.

"Hello."I said, as I took it all in and went to sit between Cate and Alex.

"Hi."Alex said, smiling at me.

"Finally."Cate said."Mind taking a bit less time.Showers don't take that long."

I look at her and glare.

"Lola honey."My mom said, getting my attention.

"Yeah?"

"This are Mark and Josey McGregor."My mom said.

I look at the two other people. McGregor? They look nothing like Alex or Cam, how did they expect to pull this off?

I look at Alex, confusion clear on my face.

"The story is that they can't have kids, so they addopted me and Cam, who were abandoned in an orphanage in Michigan.They adopted the both of us because I wouldn't go anywhere without my little brother."He explain."Josey is a fairy, and Mark is a Wolve, like Jacob from the Twilight series."

"I can't believe all this creature are real."I thought aloud.

"Right behind you sis."Cate said.

"We have to go to school or we'll be late."Cam said.

I look at the clock, it's 7:57.

We all stood up and as I left the kitchen my mom called me and threw me a Pop Tart.

"Thanks."

Alex and Cam got in the Porsche and Cate and I got in my M6. We both started the car at the same time and got out of the drive way, me infront of Alex and it stayed like that until we got to the school. Hardly anyone was in the parking lot. Alex and I park right next to each other, when I opened my door I felt something weird.I remember my parents saying last night tha one of their many powers was to know when a creature that didn't belong here had enter. I felt light-headed and sat back down on the drivers sit, a hand on my head.

"Lola?"Alex ask, but that's the last thing I heard.


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Comments:

OMFG what happened??/ i love it update soon plez

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

She fainted....scary hah?????Not really you'll be scared in the next one....

The grammar in that was so much better :D And update soon, omg is this what i think, can she tell the future?!?! :O

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

SPOILER ALERT!!!!!It will be a yes and a no....

ah! she passed out! or something! gah!!! update please and the grammar and spelling improved by a lindslide! good job!

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx....yeh she passed out!!!The next one's from Alex's POV...

omg i can't wait to see what happen. uday soon. plz =]

Posted: Jul 21, 2008



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