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Mythical Creatures

Novel By: MidNightSun
Romance


Loida McCarthy, or Lola, lives a not so good life. Her best Friend from her childhood, Lizzie or Liz, stopped talking to her when she became a cheerleader in seventh grade, and since Lola doesn't like drowing attention, and never tried to be popular their friendship was lost. Now, snearly six years later Lola is still the main loser in their year, thanks to her so call 'friend' for spilling every secret she knows of her. But things are about to change. Its their senior year and a new family has arrived in town. This family lives in the biggest mansion in town, they have pale sking and goldish yellow eyes. Their only son is also a senior and is very attractive, his brown hair looks like he just got out of bed, every outfit he wears shows off his well built chess, and his smile put Zack Efron's and Orlando Bloom's to shame. Every girl in school, is attrated to him. But will Lola have enough courage to go against her ex-best friend for a guy??? Even if the guy shows a little interest on her??? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 24, 2008    Reads: 242    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


Lola's POV

As I slip into unconciousness I had a 'vision'. I saw my parents being killed by a Vampire.Icouldn't see his gace just his back.I saw Mark turn into a wolf, but was killed. Josey turn into a fairy and fled, the Vampire couldn't catch her. I saw her fly out the house and far west, then I woke up.

When I opened my eyes the first thing I saw was the wall into my house, the door was thrown on the floor. I went into shock, did what I just saw actually happened? I had to find out.

I opened my door and ran in the house. I ran to the kitchen and froze.I gasp as I saw my parents and Mark lying on the floor, dead. I saw Alex there looking at me, waiting for my reaction.

"Who did this?"I ask him, mad.

"The only thing I know is that it was a Vampire."He told me."They.....They left a messege."he pointed to the wall and I read it over and over again, taking the messege in. Oh, We'll be ready.

"I'm sorry."I heard Alex said..

"For what?"

"I brought this on."He said, and I looked at him shock."If I hadn't come none of this would had happened."

"Alex."I walked towards him, and hug him, how can he think that."You didn't do anything wrong, this isn't your fault."

"Yes it is.I came here, I lead them to the Royals of Earth."He said.

I shouldn't had come. I heard his voice in my head.

"You led them here, yeah."I said, trying to make it sound like it wasn't a big deal."But, you didn't lead them to this.They were the ones that decided to kill my parents, not you."

"You're being too noble."He said.

"But you deserve better."I said."And you're right, you shouldn't had come, I mean, what's so special about me?"

"Everything."He said, and I roll my eyes but he couldn't see me."But we'll talk about that later.First we have to do something about this."

"We have to call the police."I said but then something occur to me."But, won't they see the mark?"

"No, our marks are invisible to normal humans."He explain."You'll be able to see it, since your the Queen, but noone else can, you can also identify who did this."I felt like breaking down when he said that I'm the Queen, I'm not ready for that, but there was a hope that I'll be ble to identify who did this and finish him off myself.

"I can?"

"Yeah."He said."You wanna try before we call the police?"

"But how would we really know who it was?"

"You can describe him or her to me and I'll tell you."

"Okay."

I bend down towards my dad and look for the mark. I found it on the left side of his neck. I touched it and close my eyes.

I saw a men with white hair and red eyes, he has big muscle, and his back was just like the one in my dream. I opened my eyes and look at Alex.

I describe the Vampire to him and saw him going into shock.

"No good, no good."He said, over and over again.

"What's not good?"I ask him after his tenth 'no good'.

"That's the leader of the rebels.That's why none of them survive.He's stronger than all of them, and if his here..."He trailed off.

"We're all in danger."I finished for him, but he shook his head.

"Your parents were killed because they were powerless, you were gaining your powers faster than you should, I think that when he came your parents weren't as powerful as they should had been because you had nearly all the powers."He said."In othe words as you gained your powers they lost them."

"So the only ones in danger are-"

"Cam and Cate."


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NOOOO! not cam and kate!!! NOOO!! tell me when you post!

Posted: Jul 24, 2008

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon plez

Posted: Jul 24, 2008

What!!! Update soon!!!!!! PLEZ!!! Oh My GOD!!!!!!!

Posted: Jul 25, 2008



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