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Mythical Creatures

Novel By: MidNightSun
Romance


Loida McCarthy, or Lola, lives a not so good life. Her best Friend from her childhood, Lizzie or Liz, stopped talking to her when she became a cheerleader in seventh grade, and since Lola doesn't like drowing attention, and never tried to be popular their friendship was lost. Now, snearly six years later Lola is still the main loser in their year, thanks to her so call 'friend' for spilling every secret she knows of her. But things are about to change. Its their senior year and a new family has arrived in town. This family lives in the biggest mansion in town, they have pale sking and goldish yellow eyes. Their only son is also a senior and is very attractive, his brown hair looks like he just got out of bed, every outfit he wears shows off his well built chess, and his smile put Zack Efron's and Orlando Bloom's to shame. Every girl in school, is attrated to him. But will Lola have enough courage to go against her ex-best friend for a guy??? Even if the guy shows a little interest on her??? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jun 29, 2008    Reads: 320    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


I was walking down the street. I have been having this same dream for days and still haven't figure it out. The streets are empty everywhere I turn and I feel like I'm looking for something but i don't know what. At that moment I feel someone behind me, I turn and see a guy my age right behind me. He has never appeared in the dream before. He has brown hair, goldish yellow eyes, and a well built chest.

"I've been looking for you Lola." He said, in a soft tone.

"Who are you?" I ask, but before he could answer a loud beep sound fill the streets and he vanished.

"Ugh!" I said, opening my eyes and turning my alarm off. 6:30, it read. "Out of anyday that could had happen it happen before i went to school. Dreams suck."

I got up, and went in my bathroom, which happens to be light blue, just like my room. my room faces the back and the front. Its like that because my parents didn't expect to have another baby, so when my mom got pregnant of Cate it was a big surprise, not that it wasn't expected. My parents take every chance they get to get 'busy'. I wouldn't be surprise if my mom says she's pregnant, again. Anyways, my room is huge. I have a plasma tv, a radio, dvd player, computer, a labtop, a king size bed, a walk in closet like Hannah Montana, only bigger. I have a great sense of style, but I have been holding it down until now. My Senior year. I'm gonna make everyone who has been making fun of me this pass six years to wish they never did.

I shower and wash my hair. I have a bathub/jacuzzie as well, but I only used it on weekends.

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I got out of the shower and went into my closet.

"What should I wear?" I wonder. Its the first day of school, so I decided to go simple. I walk to the Blue outfits, and took out a blue skirt that goes a few inches above my knees, a white tank top, white knee-high boots, a blue hat, and a blue jacket. "Perfect."

I walk over to the mirror and put on a little lipgloss, I don't put make up on, it makes you look older, example: Liz Spears. She looked like a 20 year old instead of a eighteen year old last time I saw her.

I put on some white fingerless gloves and grab my dark blue messenger backpack. I made sure I wasn't forgetting anything and went down to the kitchen.

"Hey-WOW!" Cate said as I came in the kitchen and she saw what I was wearing. "Who are you and what have you done with my goody-two-shoes of a sister?"

"Well, like I said yesterday, I don't wanna embarrased my little sister on the only year I get to go to the same school as her." I said with a smile."Besides, I have to look appropriate if I'm going to drive that car, don't ya think?"

"Yep." She said with a smile."Now this is the Lola I know."

"Watchu mean?" I ask, clearly confused.

"Well, I remember your sense of style was like this when you hanged around Liz, you were the one that teached her how to dress, remember?" She ask me, finishing the first pop tart.

"Yep." I said, taking the other pop tart.

"Hey!" She exclaim as mom and dad came in the kitchen.

"Morning girls." Mom said.

"Morning, mom, dad." We said.

I look at the clock on the microwave, it read 7:50 and school starts at 8:10

"We better go." I told Cate and she nodded.

We both kiss mom and dad goodbye and went outside. As we did, we saw out neighbor, Sean Young another senior, starring at me like he has never seen me before, and then stare at my M6. I smile and I saw Cate smirk.

"Did you see him?" Cate said as soon as we both where inside the car. "He couldn't belive it was you!"

"Anyone who had heard you yesterday wouldn't believe this was you." I informed her, smiling, and turning on the car.

"Sorry, I'm just so happy to get my sister back. Even if it took you SIX years to show everyone who you really are." She said, in a mock angry voice.

"Sorry." I Said and turn on the radio."Why don't we get our latino side out?"

"YEAH!" And I put Wisin and Yandel song Sexy Movimiento (Sexy Movement) the remix ft. Daddy Yankee on.

We arrived at school ten minutes later and I park my car at the back, in the senior parking lot. Everyone there turn to look at the car.

"We have exactly ten minutes to find our homeroom. Nice." Cate said.

"Whom do you have?" I ask her.

"Mr. Thomas." She said, looking at a piece of paper in her hand with the teacher's name on it.

"Ugh. Math teacher, he hates me." I said.

"Why?" She ask, shock.

"Because I'm smarted than him." I said, taking the key out and opening my door.

I stepped out, shocking everyone who was starring. I took my backpack and close the door. Cate was already out, and ready. I walk and met her at the back of the car, an then we both started walking towards the school. Everyone's eyes on us. I turn and lock my car, remembering that I hadn't done that.Then we heard loud, rap music playing bahind us, and we turn to see a Porsche 911 twin turbo, Black. We move out of the way. It wasn't sunny out -It hardly ever is- and the windows to the car were down. I look in and saw a boy, around my age, with brown hair in the drivers' seat, he was looking at me with goldish yellow eyes. He wink and drove, he got on the parking space two spaces infront of us.

"Did he jus-"

"Yes, now let's go." I said, freak out. He look a lot like that guy from my dream.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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again, you have grammar mistakes galore, but it's a good story! Next chapter!....

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

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this was really good, and it hooked me- grammar

Posted: Jul 11, 2008



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