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Mythical Creatures

Novel By: MidNightSun
Romance


Loida McCarthy, or Lola, lives a not so good life. Her best Friend from her childhood, Lizzie or Liz, stopped talking to her when she became a cheerleader in seventh grade, and since Lola doesn't like drowing attention, and never tried to be popular their friendship was lost. Now, snearly six years later Lola is still the main loser in their year, thanks to her so call 'friend' for spilling every secret she knows of her. But things are about to change. Its their senior year and a new family has arrived in town. This family lives in the biggest mansion in town, they have pale sking and goldish yellow eyes. Their only son is also a senior and is very attractive, his brown hair looks like he just got out of bed, every outfit he wears shows off his well built chess, and his smile put Zack Efron's and Orlando Bloom's to shame. Every girl in school, is attrated to him. But will Lola have enough courage to go against her ex-best friend for a guy??? Even if the guy shows a little interest on her??? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 1, 2008    Reads: 212    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


*Hey everyone, just wanted to let you guys know that I've decided to write a sequel to this story so it'll come to an end quick....Probably in the next chapter, or the one after that.....But I promise that the sequel would be better since everything happened in two days in this one.....Anyways enjoy this chapter....:)*

I shifted to my side and I felt something that shouldn't be there.I lifted my head and saw Alex sleeping next to me, I smile as I saw his angel face.His Arms wrap themselves around me and I look up to see him smiling down on me his eyes open.

"Morning."He said.

"Morning."I said.I look around him at the clock, it was 7:00 AM."Please tell me you're not like Edward."

"What do you mean?"

"You can sleep, right?"

"Ofcourse."He said."But I'm a light sleeper, I felt you move."

"Good."I said smiling."So, what's up?"

"The cealing."

"Alex."I shook my head.

"I've got good news."He said and I look at him."The war's over."

"So soon?"

"Yeah."He said."The fact that Cate is now Queen sealed the rebels chance to kill the remaining Royals of Earth.You saw Felipe and The Leader melt."

"How do you know that?"I ask, shock.

"I heard you."

"Oh."I said."I don't feel like school today, and that's weird."

"You missed yesterday, you have to go today."He said, and I glare at him.

"Yes, dad."I said with a fake smile."Where's Cate?And How did I got here?"

"Cate's in her room with Cam.And I brought you here."He replied."There might be a problem in science today."

"Why?"

"Because there's no Mrs.Brown."He said."She's dead, remember?"

"Oh yeah."I said."We won't have science until they find a sub....That's soo cool...I hate science."

"You're weird sometimes you know that?"He said, smiling."But I love you anyways."

"I love you too."I said and he kiss me.

"That's soo sweet, but we need to get to school."Cate's voice said from the door."No offense but you and Cam need to get out...It wouldn't look good you two guys walking out of our house."

"But their car is in our drive way."I said."or did you guys moved it?"

"No, but as you two haven't notice, me and Cam went home and changed.We're way ahead of you."Alex said smiling at Cate, but then turn to me."But you need to take a shower and change, so I'll leave."

He stood up and got out.I got off the the bed and went to take a shower.


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Comments:

Really good it sounds like you are leading up to the ending or is that the ending if so i cannot wait for the sequel

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

no this isn't the ending, but is coming soon.....Be ready:)

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! i love it update soon plez

Posted: Aug 2, 2008

Author Comment:

OK....I will



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