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Mythical Creatures

Novel By: MidNightSun
Romance


Loida McCarthy, or Lola, lives a not so good life. Her best Friend from her childhood, Lizzie or Liz, stopped talking to her when she became a cheerleader in seventh grade, and since Lola doesn't like drowing attention, and never tried to be popular their friendship was lost. Now, snearly six years later Lola is still the main loser in their year, thanks to her so call 'friend' for spilling every secret she knows of her. But things are about to change. Its their senior year and a new family has arrived in town. This family lives in the biggest mansion in town, they have pale sking and goldish yellow eyes. Their only son is also a senior and is very attractive, his brown hair looks like he just got out of bed, every outfit he wears shows off his well built chess, and his smile put Zack Efron's and Orlando Bloom's to shame. Every girl in school, is attrated to him. But will Lola have enough courage to go against her ex-best friend for a guy??? Even if the guy shows a little interest on her??? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 5, 2008    Reads: 290    Comments: 7    Likes: 0   


Days pass and now we're at my house having a little dinner for my eighteenth birthday.

"Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you, happy birthday dear Lola happy birthday to you!!!!"I laugh and shook my head as Alex, Cam, Cate, and Josey sang the song and place a blue and white cake with eighteen candles infront of me.

"Make a wish."Cate said.

I wish for happiness in both of mine and my sisters life.After I made the wish I blew out the candles.

"Seriously, couldn't you just put two or three candles, I'm out of breath."I argued.

"Cate's idea."Alex said coming to sit next to me."Presents."

"Who's first?"Cate ask.

"I think the sister should go first."Cam said, and they nodded in agreedment.

"Here."Cate handed me a small bift bag."It's nothing big, I just went to the mall and saw it."

I open the bag and took out a small jewelry box, I took one look at Cate, and open it.It was a gold Oval locket.

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"I have one too."Cate said, and took it out."open it."

I open it and saw a picture of our family in the left, and a picture of just Cate in the right.

"I have the samething, except there's a picture of you not me to the right."She said

"Oh my god Cate."I whisper."I love it.Thank you."

"No problem."She said, coming to hug me, then look at Alex."Next."

"Cam."Alex said."Your turn."

Cam gave me another gift bag, and I open it to see another jewelry box.I open it to see a gold bracelet with with dimonds.

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"Thanks Cam.I love it too."I said, and open my arms for a hug.

"No problem."Cam said."Next."

Josey step foward and gave me another gift bag."I really didn't know what to get you.But I was walking around and lots of girls are wearing something like it."

Now I was curious to see what it was, but it was just another jewelry box.I open it and saw what she meant.It was a necklace with the word LOLA on the.

"Thank you."I said.

"Cate told me that it was the first thing you were going to buy yourself when you got your credit cards, so I decided to let you off the hook for that one."Josey said.

"Thank you so much."I said."Thanks to all of you, really."

"Present time is not over yet, sis."cate said."Someone still needs to go."

"What if I want to give it to her when we're alone?"Alex ask her.

"Not fair.You haven't let any of us see what ever it is."Cate exclaim.

"What do you think Lola.Now or later?"Alex ask me.

"Whatever you like."I said.

"Later."He smile in triumph."Now. Let's eat some cake."

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Everyone was asleep now, and I was putting on my PJ's, ready to go to bed.When I walked out of my closet, I almost scream.Alex was lying on my bed with satin pants on, no shirt.His perfect body lying there all his muscle showing its real picture, his eight pack all clear and big.

"Alex!what are you doing here!?"I ask him, my voice sounding relieve.He was infront of me before I could blink.

"Did I scare you?"He ask.

"Heck yes!"I exclaim.

"Sorry."He said."But I thought you might want you present now."

"Right."I said, I held out my hand but he just bent down to one knee, I went into shock, what was he doing?!

"Loida,"I flinch at the sound of my real name, he notice and look up with a smile on his face."Loida Catherine McCarthy, I promise to love you, be with you everyday, protect you from any harm, to never lie to you, and most importantly to make you happy.Lola would you marry me?"

What the-! this is my birthday present!I look down at him shock.How could someone want to marry me!But then I remember his reason for being in this realm, I smile at that and felt him relax.

"So.Would you marry me?"He repeated the question.

"Yes."I said, and he stood up."You forgot something very important, though."

"What?"

"The ring."

"Oh, right."His hand went to the back of his satin pants."This is only a practice ring."

"A what?"

"A practice ring so you can get use to having a ring on you left hand."He said.

"Why?"

"Lola, how wierd would it look if you walk around the halls of school, wearing an engagement ring and walking hand in hand with the new boy?"

"It wouldn't look weird."I disagree."Strange maybe, but not weird."

He open the ring box, and I saw a gold ring with a heart in the middle, to dimonds were in the middle of the ring, while another to the left of it.

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"This one looks perfect as a promise ring."He said."The real ring will come when we're in my realm.I want it to be more royal then anything."

"Why?"

"So everyone knows that you're the future queen and not some girl who's engaged."He said."Now, we'll be here until we graduate, then we'll take Cate and Cam to our realm, and start planning the wedding your way."

"Why don't we talk about the plans when we're near its time."I suggested."Right now let's get some sleep, so I can absorve the news."

"Ok, goodnight."He said, and headed to the door.

"Where are you going?"I ask him.

"To my room."He said.

"And leave your future wife to sleep all alone and cold.Nice."I said and made my face look sad.

"Well, if you want me to stay I'll stay.Don't be sad."He said.

"It's ok."I said."You can go.Just forget I said anything."

I made my way to the bed and got in."Night."

"Lola."Hi sigh."Lola, please."

"Whatever Alex."I said and roll over so my back was to the door.

I didn't hear anything but then he was there, behind me.I smile to myself.He wrap his arms around me and held me close to his chest.

"I love you."He whisper in my ear.

"I love you too Alex."I said and turn around."With all my heart."

He smile and lean down to kiss me.

*And this is the end I'll try to get the sequel up as soon as possible*


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Comments:

i love it. there so funny together. =]

Posted: Aug 5, 2008

Author Comment:

i know....:)

I LOVE IT ....

I LOVE IT ....

I LOVE IT ....

cant wait for the Sequel

Dont ever stop writing

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

me either....But the writting would probably slow down starting next wek because i'm going back to schoool.....

I love it tell me when you have the sequal up plez

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

k...i will

Cool! Love it!

Posted: Aug 8, 2008

as soon as everyone gave her jewelry, I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT I KNEW IT! HE DID DIDN'T HE!

here! have some e-fruit.

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

I KNOW NICE WAY TO END IT HUH?????THANKS.....

yuki yoshida
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it was great can't wait to read part two.

Posted: Aug 31, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx

i just loved it..cant wait until u update

Posted: Nov 25, 2008



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