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Mythical Creatures

Novel By: MidNightSun
Romance


Loida McCarthy, or Lola, lives a not so good life. Her best Friend from her childhood, Lizzie or Liz, stopped talking to her when she became a cheerleader in seventh grade, and since Lola doesn't like drowing attention, and never tried to be popular their friendship was lost. Now, snearly six years later Lola is still the main loser in their year, thanks to her so call 'friend' for spilling every secret she knows of her. But things are about to change. Its their senior year and a new family has arrived in town. This family lives in the biggest mansion in town, they have pale sking and goldish yellow eyes. Their only son is also a senior and is very attractive, his brown hair looks like he just got out of bed, every outfit he wears shows off his well built chess, and his smile put Zack Efron's and Orlando Bloom's to shame. Every girl in school, is attrated to him. But will Lola have enough courage to go against her ex-best friend for a guy??? Even if the guy shows a little interest on her??? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 5, 2008    Reads: 274    Comments: 0    Likes: 1   


Alex's POV(Day Before school;Morning)

I had just finish unpacking all of my things when I heard a 'What a dumb ass' in my head.

"What?" I ask looking around.

'I can't believe she forgot school starts tomorrow.' The voice said.

"Who forgot?" I ask myself.

I walk to my front window (His room is the same as Lola's but black) and tried to find where the voice come from. I look to the left, nothing, everyone sleeping. Right, I saw two girls and a women in the kitchen of a house- well, a mansion- next to ours.I went in the balcony and look closer. The first girl has short blond hair and blue eyes, she looks the youngest. The other girl has long brown hair and blue eyes. The women has short brown hair and blue eyes, they were arguing about something, so I listen.

"Cate!" The women, who I supposed is the mom, said to the blond one, Cate. "Your sister is not a nerd, she just decides to do her work on time, unlike someone I know. Or do I need to remind you who I had to go to school and plead the principal to let you pass to the ninth grade?" Heh, I count older one as a nerd, and Cate a big trouble maker. Nice.

I saw Cate made a face and the other girl, who's name I don't know, smirk.

"I need to go shopping anyways." The girl said."I wouldn't want to embarrased my little sister on the first day of school, now would I?"

"Ha,ha, ha." Cate laugh as a man, the dad, walk into the kitchen.

"Good morning." He said.

"Morning dad." The girls said.

"Lola." He said. Lola?

I look closer, ofcourse, how could I not recognize the hair.She has beautiful eyes, I thought.and a very nice shape.

She's talking now,"What is it?" She ask, obviously excited.

"He's old car, just like your sixteenth b-day." Cate laugh.

"Not quite." Their mom said. "It is a car, but not our car."

"Which one do you want to go to?" Their dad ask."Porsche or BMW?"

"Are you serious?!" Lola ask.

"Yes." He said. "Your Mercedez is too old for you now, I'm selling it."

"Finally, it was putting us to shame." Cate said. "I mean, we're like, the richest people in this town, that car was of early 2000, we're in 2008 people!" I rolled my eyes at that.

"Cate, I hope you look for a guy with a lot of money, because the money mom and dad are going to give you won't last you a year." I chuckle at that.

"Ha,ha,ha."

"Well, which one do you choose Lola?" My dad ask.

Lola look thoughtful for a moment, I tried to read her thoughts but I couldn't.

"What?" I wonder. I tried reading Cate's, 'Iknow shegoing to choosethe BMW,butshe does loves the new Porsche 911 Twin turbo.'

"If I can read hers, why can't I read Lola's?"I ask myself. I went to read her parents mind. Same. Couldn't read it.

"BMW." I heard Lola said, and I stopped listening and went inside.

"She likes the 911 twin turbo, hah?" I said, smirking."Well, let's not ruin her chance at seeing it closer." I stood up and went to buy the Porsche 911 twin Turbo, black.


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