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Mythical Creatures

Novel By: MidNightSun
Romance


Loida McCarthy, or Lola, lives a not so good life. Her best Friend from her childhood, Lizzie or Liz, stopped talking to her when she became a cheerleader in seventh grade, and since Lola doesn't like drowing attention, and never tried to be popular their friendship was lost. Now, snearly six years later Lola is still the main loser in their year, thanks to her so call 'friend' for spilling every secret she knows of her. But things are about to change. Its their senior year and a new family has arrived in town. This family lives in the biggest mansion in town, they have pale sking and goldish yellow eyes. Their only son is also a senior and is very attractive, his brown hair looks like he just got out of bed, every outfit he wears shows off his well built chess, and his smile put Zack Efron's and Orlando Bloom's to shame. Every girl in school, is attrated to him. But will Lola have enough courage to go against her ex-best friend for a guy??? Even if the guy shows a little interest on her??? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 7, 2008    Reads: 276    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


Alex POV( School day)

I had the dream again. Except that this time I walked up to her and talk.

"I've been looking for you Lola." I said, in a soft tone.

"Who are you?" She ask, but before I could answer a loud beep sound fill the streets and she vanished.

"Great." I said and got up.

I took a shower and put a black shirt that said 'My girlfriend or baseball?' at the front and at the back, 'When do we play?' with black baggy pants, black nike's and a black bandana. The contrast with me and the outfit makes me look hotter, which is the point.

I walk downstairs and into the kitchen where my 'mom' was making me breakfast.

"Morning." The fairy, she's actually in a fairy form right now, said.

"Morning."

"I made you breakfast and lunch."She said."I doubt you'll like the human food they serve at school so I made you a sandwish with cheese, eggs, salami, and ketchup." (its relly good in real life.)"I bought you a dark bottle, so you can take blood to school, incase you get thirsty, we wouldn't like you to slip and kill the Princess by accident, would we. I'll only do that until you're completly under control."

"I'm under control." I said.

"In your dreams you are." She said."You haven't smell her in real life yet."

She had a point so I took the Black lunch box, well more like bag since I can just swing it over my shoulder, it's just cooler than the bags a human boy uses in elementary and middle school.

"Now go or you'll be late." She said and I look at the clock, 7:53.

"Right." I said."Bye."

I went to the garage and hop in my Porsche.

As I pass Lola's house I saw that her car wasn't there.

She most had already left. I thought. And boy was I right. As I drove inside the senior parking lot I saw Lola and her sister walking towards the school. Man did she look hot! She's wearing a blue Mini-skirt, a blue jacket, white boots, a blue hat, and white fingerless gloves. I like the messenger backpack, it's just like mine, but dark blue. What a coincidence, huh?

My windows where roll down, so everyone could here the loud rap music and look my way. Yep, a Prince needs his attention. I drove slowly as I pass Lola and her sister, who had step aside to let my car by. I look at her and see her looking at me.

'He's hot.' I hear her sister think, but nothing from her. I wink at her as to make her think something but then, she just stares at me, shock. I keep driving and park a few spaces ahead of her.

"Did he jus-"I heard Cate voice, but it was interrupeted by Lola.

"Yes, now let's go." She said, obviously freaked out.

"Guess noone has ever wink at her before."I said as the windows came up.I turn off my car and look at my homeroom teacher's name."Ms.Wilson. Sounds boring."

I got out of my car and I started hearing everyone there thoughts.

'Damn he's hot.' a few girls thought, and I smile.

'Why are all the girls starring at him?" I didn't like the way whoever that is emphasize him.

'he better not still my girlfriend.I know guys like him, only go after the cutties.' A guy said as I pass him. I look at him, then at his girlfriend, and smirk, making the guy mad and the girl blush uncontrolably.

'Where has he been all my life?' she thought. After that I close my mind to the thoughts that I knew would be too many.

As I walk in the school and through the halls toward my class I saw girls and guys, even female teachers starring at me. I mean, i know I'm Hot, but am I that hot?

As I round the conner towards my HR, I saw Lola walk inside the a classroom, which just happens to be the same as mine. I walk towards the teacher and give her my schedule. She look at it and then gave it back, and her thoughts came to my head.

'How I wish I were young this days.'She thought.

I smirk at that and went in, just in time to hear,

"OOh, look who's trying to join now." A girl said, she was looking at Lola, who had just sat down at the far right. I read her thoughts,'I like that skirt.'

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"Isn't it a little too late for that." A guy said.'Man she looks hot.'

"And aren't you a little too old to be criticizing people." I said, looking at the guy who just spoke, irritated by that.

"I criticize whom ever I want. New boy." He said.'Who do he think he is?'

"John, let him, he has no idea whom he's standing up for." Another girl said.'Man, he's a total hottie. i can't believe he's standing up for Lola loser McCarthy.' That just did it.

"I have a very good idea whom I'm standing up for, thank you very much." I said.

"Sorry then." Liz said.'Gosh, since when does the loser have a defender?' "How about we start over. I'm Liz, Liz Spears, and no, I'm not related to Britney Spears. Who are you?" 'i can't afford to have this major hottie hate me. he'll deffinatly be the Man this year.' That got me even angrier.

"Who I am is none of your concern." I said and from the conner of my eyes I saw Lola look up at me. Liz though and everyone else is starring at me with shock clear in their face.'What, noone has said that to her before?'

"You have no idea who I am." She said in a threatening tone.'I'll take that as a no.'

"Yes I do, you just told me your name is Liz Spears and that you're not related to Britney Spears." I said, a smile on my face, she better get use to that.

I heard Lola laugh and it was the most beautiful sound I have ever heard.

"What are you laughing at?" The first girl ask.

"Obviously at what he just said. Seriously Liz, how dumb can you get?" Lola ask Liz, and she glared at her with the rest of the other girls.

The whole class did, 'ooohs' and 'wows'.

"I wouldn't get too happy if I were you, McCarthy." Liz said.

"Sure, sure." Lola said and look at me.

when she saw me looking at her, she look away and at that moment the bell rang. and I went to sit on the empty desk next to her and she look up.

"Hi." I said."I'm Alex. Alex McGregor." Nice last name, huh?

"I'm Lola McCarthy. And thanks." She said.And that confuse me.

"For what?" I ask.

"For standing up for me." She said.

"Any time." I smile, my breath taking smile.

"Okay, when I call your name I need you to come up here and take your schedule." Ms. wilson said, she looked over at the girls and the guys from before,"I also need all of you to be quiet." But they didn't listen."I said BE QUIET!"

Everyone froze and I chuckle. I felt Lola's eyes on me. I was excited because what Liz was thinking, 'I can't believe he gave her his name and not me, I mean, she's a total loser, I'm prettier than her. What a dissapointment he'll get when he finds out that he just stood up for the loser of the school, the one noone likes.' That last part confuse me, though. 'How can none like Lola? From what I've heard in people's thoughts, they love her.'

 

 

 


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