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The HotChikas

Novel By: MidNightSun
Romance


The HotChikas are three latina girls, going to East Land Prep, an all girl private school in EastChester, New York. Ashley Lopez (Alpha), Angela Long (Beta) and Kelly Riveras (New Member). Ashley lopez is known to have the meanest attitude in ELP, but its nawt true, she is just a gurl that doesn't like to talk about her feeling, and showing them is out of the question! Angela though, is known to be the most adventurous of them, and unlike Ashley she luvs showing her feelings, according to her if you show your feelings you're bound to get what you want, that's why she has had five boyfriends, but breaking up with the sixth is out of the question! Kelly is known to lack fashion, so being in the Hc is a big step, but the good part is that she has followed the HC since day one, so she's got a pretty good idea how things work. All in all the HC is a group of fashion, and with EastChester all boy private school next to them everyone want the HC to show them how to dress to attract boys, after all they stopped the principal from assigning uniforms, making them more popular, and thinking that nothing can go wrong. but what'll happen when Ahley sets her eyes on West Land Prep's hottest guy??? View table of contents...

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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38

Submitted: Jul 9, 2008    Reads: 45    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


LONG RESIDENCE

ANGELA'S ROOM

SUN. AUG.19

7:30 PM

ANGELA'S LYING ON HER BED LISTENING TO HIP HOP ON HER iPOD TOUCH.

knock, knock.

"Come in." She said.

"Sorry, Miss Angela, but there's a boy who wants to see you downstairs." Barbara, the house-keeper, said."His name's Carlos Ferreras."

Angela stood up in a flash, and went to the mirror. Checked for leftover in her tooth, clear. Put some cherry lipgloss, and got her hair a bit messy.

OMG!

She thought. He's actually here!

"Tell him to come up here." She said to Barbara.

Barbara got out, leaving Angela rushing to her bed, and putting her headphones back on.

There was another soft knock on the door.

"Come in." Angela said.

"Hey." Carlos said, as he close the door behind him.

He has curly black hair and dark brown eyes, he's latino, from Dominican Republic.

"Hey." Angela got off bed and went to kiss her boyfriend.

"Nice tryout yesterday." He said.

"Thanks." She said. "Are you playing fot the West Land fall baseball?"

"Well, I'm trying out." He said."I'm playing if I make it."

"Ofcourse you will." She said, going to sit on her bed.

"I'm not so sure." H said, sitting down nest to her and wrapping his arms around her. "There are new boys this year, and they're good."

"But nawt as good as you." She said." You've been playing baseball for your entire life."

"True." He said.

"So, what brings you here." She asked him.

"What?! I can't come visit my girlfriend." He exclaim.

"Ofcourse you can." She said."But, I thought you were gonna talk about something else."

"Nah." He said. "Unless, you care to know that your friend Ashley has fond herself another admirer."

"Yeah," She said."Who?"

"Luis Arias." He said."He's a new student from Massachussetts, he's parents are from Puerto Rico, and he's a friend of mine."

"Is he this guy with cute eyes.?" Angela asked, even though she already knew who he was.

"I guess." He said. "But, I know that he didn't take his eyes off her for the entire tryouts."

"Really?"

"Really." He said."Why do you think he stood up for her both times his step brother insulted her?"

"Point." She said."So, he likes her?"

"Obvious."

altaltCarlos Ferreras.


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