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The HotChikas

Novel By: MidNightSun
Romance


The HotChikas are three latina girls, going to East Land Prep, an all girl private school in EastChester, New York. Ashley Lopez (Alpha), Angela Long (Beta) and Kelly Riveras (New Member). Ashley lopez is known to have the meanest attitude in ELP, but its nawt true, she is just a gurl that doesn't like to talk about her feeling, and showing them is out of the question! Angela though, is known to be the most adventurous of them, and unlike Ashley she luvs showing her feelings, according to her if you show your feelings you're bound to get what you want, that's why she has had five boyfriends, but breaking up with the sixth is out of the question! Kelly is known to lack fashion, so being in the Hc is a big step, but the good part is that she has followed the HC since day one, so she's got a pretty good idea how things work. All in all the HC is a group of fashion, and with EastChester all boy private school next to them everyone want the HC to show them how to dress to attract boys, after all they stopped the principal from assigning uniforms, making them more popular, and thinking that nothing can go wrong. but what'll happen when Ahley sets her eyes on West Land Prep's hottest guy??? View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 5, 2008    Reads: 46    Comments: 0    Likes: 1   


LOPEZ RESIDENCE

FRONT GARDEN

SAT., AUG.18

9:30 PM

ASHLEY WAS SITTING ON THE SWING IN THE FRONT GARDEN OF HER HOUSE WAITING FOR THE BIG BARS TO OPEN and let black H3X Hummer in, with her parents and annoying twin brother in. They were late. Her cellphone rang, making a loud noice in in the darkness and allowing Alexis and Fido song Ilogico to play.

"Hello."She answered.

"Hullo." Said Angela. "Guess what."

"What?"

"I just saw, passing down my house-"

"The guy with cute eyes from tryouts?" Ashley interrupted.

"How ya know?""He's standing infront of my bars, right now."Ashley said, standing uo and walking to the bars, where the guy sat on his motorbike, one hand on the bike handle and the other on the bars. "Why you thing he's here?"

"IDK, but call me as soon as he leaves. 'k?""Okay." Ashley said and hang up.

"Hi." The guy said when Ashley reached him.

"Hi." Ashley said.

"I was at your tryouts today." He said." I'm Luis. Luis Arias." He pass his hands through the bars.

Ashley shook it. As soon as she tough it she felt an eletric shock go through her like lightning, and his hands were unpredictably warm.

"I'm Ashley, but you already know that." She said, blushing a little."So, what brings you here?"

"Oh,um, I just came to apologize for my brother's behavior today." He said.

"Your brother?"Ashley asked, shocked.

"Yeah." He said. "Why do you look like that?"

"Sorry, I'm just shocked." She said."I mean, he doesn't look like he is."

"he's my step-brother." he said."He's my mom's husband son."

"Oh," Ashley said. "That explains it."

He looked at her before laughing and letting go of her hand.

"What were you doing sitting alone there?" He asked.

"Oh, I was-I am- waiting for my parents." She said.

"They're not here?" He ask.

"No, they're finishing a movie, but they were suppose to arrive tonight." She said.

"I'm sure everything is fine." He said. "Maybe the plane is late or something."

"I hope so." She said.

He reached for her hand again.

"Don't worry." He conforted her. "They'll be fine."

"I wish I could let you in, but if my parets ar-"

"Don't worry." He interrupeted."I don't want you to get in trouble because of me."

He turn the key of his red bike.

"That didn't mean you had to go." She said.

What am I doing?,The 'Angel' Ashley said, Flirting with a guy I barley know. Well, he is cute, and sweet, and kind, and...

Okay stop!, The 'Devil' Ashley said, What if he's an BWL I mean, no boy will bother coming to a girls house to 'apologize' for their brother's behavior, they wouldn't even care.

*BWL:Boy WithOut a Life*

He looked at her and smile.

"I know," he said. "But it's neatly ten, and my house is not so close from here."Definatly a BWL.The DA said.

"Right." Ashley said to him."Bye."

"Bye." He look down and thn back up with the same sexy smile on his face."Got to sleep, you'll wake up tomorrow and find your parents waiting for you. I'll see you around."

"Okay." She said.

"You know, you're not the girl everyone talks about." He said.How rude.The DA said.It was a compliment, so be quiet. the AA said.

"I'm nawt?" She asked, a faux-confuse expresion on her face.

"No, you're not." he replied. "You're more nicer, and sweeter then what I've heard you are."

Ashley laugh and flushed. Definatly a compliment, she thought.

"This isn't your true self, is it?" He asked.

"Maybe, Maybe not." She said."Bye."

altLUISaltASHLEY


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