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Irish Curse

Novel By: Moonie
Romance


It was actually a nightmare and I was like in third person and I could here all this girls thoghts and it was like a movie! It was really scary....... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 7, 2008    Reads: 56    Comments: 7    Likes: 4   


My name is Erin McGuinnis I live in a big white house in Maine with my mother and father, Eric and Sheyna McGuinnis, and my elder brother whos 18, Adam McGuinnis. Well I'm a very odd person, I can sing just like the person who is on the song every note the same except in my voice, I cook just like my great Grandmother, who came from Ireland, the whole traditional Irish food with no recipie book or directions. My looks are totally Irish my hair is Dark Chocolate brown, I'm skinny, pale, I have big grey eyes, and I even have an accsent to some of my words even though I've grown up here in America, I'm 15 years old. I hate darkness I'm always carrying a flash light,I read a story about vampires and I was scared ever scence. I havea flash light in my room and one in my back pack and if me and my family go out on trips I never leave it behind. Well one night I was baby sitting three kids alone at my house, my brother was on a date with his girlfriend Kat and my parnts where on a 4 day buinssness trip. Well I had been uneasy all night and I didn't know why I was jumping at all noises and constantly felling like I was being wached, I had made them dinner and let the kidsplay then I had put them down to bed. Then noises seemed more current after I had cleaned up and turned the lights off and the noises seemed like shifting and walking outside while I was in the living room with just the t.v on. Finally I saw a shadow outside in the dark I quickly tunred the t.v off and ran up to my room and sat in the darkest uneasly seencorner between my bed and dresser with my hamper sealing my hiding spot I was unseeable and without my flash light, then I heard the sliding glass door open down stairsand I held my breath feeling adrenilin pump into my bloodstream I felt like screming but held it all in to listen to footsteps come into my house then I heard somone say in an Irish accsent like mine, but in a man's voice and he had much more of an accent than me, "Find 'er an' than brin' 'er to meh". "Oh my gosh are you kidding meh?! They came for meh?!" I thought hopeing they never would, I heard things being pushed over and men cooing for me to come out in meany differnt accsents like I heard German,Scottish, a little Spain, and a young person, and a couple more people with Irish. I counted about 12 guys where probly in my house I heard them begin to take stuff I'm guessin' they parked like right down the road, and then they started coming up the stairs. "Shoot they're gonna wake up the kids!!" I screamed in my head "Why didn't you grabb your cell phone you fool!" I yelled at myself through my head. I had my purple pajama pants with a lighter purple tank top and my hair was in braids so I knew it would be easy for them to vialate me if they wanted to, just then somone reached the top of the stairs so I ducked down even lower than I had before I was in the fetal position and my nose was about touching the inside of my leg and my back began to hurt then I slightly peeked out from the side of my hamper just to see what my intruders looked like. This one he looked about 20 and he was tallish mabey 6' and he had mid-night blue hair he had a clean shaved face and wore a teeshirt with jeans and boots. Then he began looking around so I put my head down and prayed he wouldn't find me "Come on love I'd 'on't lieke games" he cood in a scottish voice "And I always win at hide an seek, love, so com' on aot now, I know yer 'ere" he said "Yha right I'm gonna come out!" I wanted to say. Then he went down the hall off into my parents room, then somone elce came up the stairs it was a boy my age who was wearing a light grey tee shirt normal jeans and converse shoes and looked just like......."Wholy Shit!" very quitetly it was Dalten my friend cosin! then his brother, who I always thought was a vampire because he had really sharp teeth, came up his name is Ryan. I felt my eyes grow huge I had no doubt in my mind that it was them, but somthing was differnt Dalten looked really sad his big grey eyes looked hurt and depressed while his brother had a big evil bloodthirsty smile upon his face "I'e know where shae is" Ryan said in a German accsent "Look in heer boy" he said pushing his brother into my room. He began looking around, one part of me wanted to go out there and hug them, I haven't see them for like two years, and the other part of me wanted to stay safely in my spot, he soon found my diary in my closet where he was looking I gasped he looked surprised at where he had heard the gasp and sunck back there and our eyes met. He looked afride and scared and usure all at the same time he motiond for me to stay quite and sunck off. I heard the others down stairs talking and takeing more stuff and not once had they turned a light on I could only see that it was Dalten and Ryan because of the moonlight that was bright and shining through the windows, Dalten had gone down the hall and reported to his brother saying that he had found nothing he even had a Irish accsent that really made him seem more atracctive. So as I wached Dalten walk pass my room and I listend to him walk down the stairs. Then I haerd Ryan say to somone elce who'd came up "Ay go check the 'oom the boy didn't do good enough" so the man who came into my room was the tall one with blue hair he began digging through my closet moved my bed and rippedopen my drowrs then grabbed my hamper, which I was hideing behind, and moved it over from where I was saw me looked smug grabbed my braid and dragged me out of my room into the hallway and I screamed because it hurt he was after all pulling my hair. "I'e found the gierl" he said in a spanish accsent "Rodanphie!! come and get her!" he said shoveing me twords the stair case I saw Dalten run from a hallway and look up at me with terror in his eyes "Dude whats his problem? when did he ever start careing about me getting kiddnapped?" I thought then a man who looked about 23 had hair like mine that was short and had red in his, he seemed about 6'5.....I'm guessing he was Rodanphie........he stood up and looked at me...........


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I'm really lazy so I didn't make up name I just used people I knows names. Like if you really knew the Dalten I know you'd see no resemblence in this charactor and the real guy, but Ryan is kinda like a vampire he's got really freakin' sharp canine teeth but would never try and eat somone....as far as I know.

Posted: Sep 7, 2008

good, good...

Posted: Sep 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Okay thats one person I think it's terrible can you see the chapters?

"...wearing a light grey tee shit..."
typo much? XD

Posted: Sep 9, 2008

Author Comment:

SHUT UP!!! but thanks for reading it do you like your "BOYFRIEND"'s part?!?!

not bad.

Posted: Sep 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Try terrible. I hate it.......

It's preety good. If you don't mind I was wondering if you would read my Fazerta series.

Posted: Sep 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Sure! Thanks for reading it.

hi! shelby. i liked it. what u describe about the nighmare is true to many writers. it comes as an inspiration. i'm sure, u'll develop this into an exciting novel. carry on. lol. ;-)

Posted: Sep 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!

I wish you stars. This is fine reading.

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Um....Thank you?



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