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An Experiment

Novel By: Perry Fowler
Romance


In the 1950's sex is taboo, but two women who are living together are in a relationship that is even more taboo. Then Franklin steps into their lives. Will things ever be the same?

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Submitted: Sep 7, 2008    Reads: 158    Comments: 4    Likes: 4   


            “Hi.”
            Litta looked up from her book. “Good morning, Frank.”
            “You have already finished the reading for the test on Friday?”
            “Yes.”
            “Man you read fast. Did you understand it?”
            “Some. Molly had to help me with the rest of it.”
            “Molly?”
            “She is my roommate.”
            “The literature major?”
            “Yes.” She went back to her book.
            “Can I bother you again?”
            Litta stopped and looked up at him. “Yes?”
            “Do you think we might be able to study before the exam on Friday?”
            “Sure.” She smiled at him. “Can we meet at the library about four on Thursday night?”
            “I’ll be there. Then I could take you to the diner for a burger afterwards.”
            “Maybe.” She smiled coyly at him.
            “Then I will see you on Thursday.” He whispered as the professor came into the classroom and began to teach. His plan was working, if he played dumb, he might be able to get a date with her.
           
            “Are you sure that I can’t take you to the diner for dinner? It’s kind of late and I hate to think of you not having dinner.”
            “Don’t worry about me. Molly is making dinner.”
            “You and your roommate are very close?”
            “Like soul sisters, I guess.” Litta pulled her cardigan sweater around her as they walked back to her apartment.
            “My roommates and I don’t even talk when we pass each other in the hallway.”
            “That’s the difference in men and women.” She smiled.
            “I guess so.” He put his arm around her waist. “You look lovely tonight.”
            “Thank you, Frank.” He could tell that she was blushing.
            “You don’t think so?”
            “It’s not that. It’s just that we don’t know each other that well. I…” Litta side stepped his arm some.
            He raised his hands in defense. “Litta, I am not asking anything more than friendship right now.”
            She nodded her head and stopped at the bottom of the staircase to her apartment. “Thank you for walking me home.” She took her books. “Good luck on the test tomorrow.”
            “Good luck to you too, Molly.” He watched her go up the steps and into her apartment. As he started to walk away, Frank realized that she had not gotten all of her books. He turned to run up the staircase and was about to knock on the door when he saw her through the curtains. Or he could see them. They were kissing each other. Litta and the blond were embracing. Both of the women were kissing each other very passionately. Frank’s mouth fell open. He was so shocked and surprised. But at the same time he was very aroused. Watching the two women kiss and caress each other was making him hard.
            He shook his head, pulled his jacket over him, stepped away from the window and knocked on the door. It took them a minute before someone answered the door. When they did, it was Litta who answered. “Frank?”    
            “You left your book on top of mine.”
            “Oh, thanks. I’ll see you tomorrow.”
            “Good-bye.”
            She shut the door on him and then turned back to Molly, who was standing in the little kitchen. Litta shook her head and Molly seemed much more relaxed. The two women decided to head to the bedroom to continue their activities.


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Comments:

eeeeeeek! Are you gonna tell us about the activities they are continuing in the other room? *please**pouty eyes**

I got theeee hugest grin ever reading this chapter for some reason. It's comforting, or something, not sure. Especially as Frank spied. Oh, silly Frank.

Hey Perry Fowler, maybe a bit of self fantasy in this story? (i'm giggling)(still giggling).

Awesome writing. Your appearance into the land of erotica is a sensual flight for you and, as it seems, effortless on your behalf.

Can't wait for more.

Posted: Sep 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. Hum...Maybe I will have to add a small chapter. The only problem is that I have no personal experinece in that area. Maybe I will have to just let my little imaginaion :) *tapping finger*

I so love your effortless style, use of dialogue is fabulous (me, I keep wanting to whack in description!) I am attempting a novel write and it is not easy-peasy. So I have so much admiration for your efforts - nothing is pretentious, it is all "out there" as is life. Well yes, the story tantalises too! (personal experience not always necessary, imagine, imagine...!!)

Posted: Sep 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Well, thank you. I appreciate the advice about the personal experience. That's what my husband actually told me last night when I was telling him what I told Peaches. I have to catch myself with the time period and the language. I can't have them saying something that would not have been used in the 50's. I will have to go over and look at some of your work:)

eeeeeeep! [=

Posted: Oct 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Is that good or bad?

Uh-oh! Do I sense a change of heart? guess there's only one way to find out what happens next!! Great writing btw, loving it! ~ Nixie

Posted: Oct 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Okay, how lame is it that I had to go back and read chapter 2 to remember what is in it???? DUH! And you will just have to keep reading to find out:)



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