“Yes.” She went back to her book.

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In the 1950's sex is taboo, but two women who are living together are in a relationship that is even more taboo. Then Franklin steps into their lives. Will things ever be the same?
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Submitted: Sep 7, 2008 Reads: 158 Comments: 4 Likes: 4
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eeeeeeek! Are you gonna tell us about the activities they are continuing in the other room? *please**pouty eyes**
I got theeee hugest grin ever reading this chapter for some reason. It's comforting, or something, not sure. Especially as Frank spied. Oh, silly Frank.
Hey Perry Fowler, maybe a bit of self fantasy in this story? (i'm giggling)(still giggling).
Awesome writing. Your appearance into the land of erotica is a sensual flight for you and, as it seems, effortless on your behalf.
Can't wait for more.
Posted: Sep 8, 2008
I so love your effortless style, use of dialogue is fabulous (me, I keep wanting to whack in description!) I am attempting a novel write and it is not easy-peasy. So I have so much admiration for your efforts - nothing is pretentious, it is all "out there" as is life. Well yes, the story tantalises too! (personal experience not always necessary, imagine, imagine...!!)
Posted: Sep 10, 2008
eeeeeeep! [=
Posted: Oct 2, 2008
Uh-oh! Do I sense a change of heart? guess there's only one way to find out what happens next!! Great writing btw, loving it! ~ Nixie
Posted: Oct 16, 2008
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