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Mistake, love or hate

Novel By: pitbulllover
Romance



Have you ever been in love and hated it cuase it just didnt work out. Well heres three stories of three diffrent girls whos relationships all end bad. Do they get back on there feet and get a new boyfriend or are the stuck in depression forever. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Jun 20, 2010    Reads: 237    Comments: 40    Likes: 3   


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Mistake, love or hate
Have you ever had that one chance for love but it just didn't work out. Well we have all been through it. Whether you're going through it now or already went through it. Well here is a novel of three girls, all different stories and all different lives.
Chapter 1
Winter lilies
Annabelle POV
In a standard house, once special window was left opened in the accidental darkness. The gentle wind started blowing at around one a.m. The gust swirled through the house up and down in and out then down the stairs into a darken living room. Here another skylight was open and the moon revealed itself perfectly onto Annabelle's golden hair. The dark makeup left on her face from dawn. She slept there soundly in her penguin nightgown. She slowly moved and shifted from her back to her right side.
All through the quarters there was no sound but the mice hunting for food in the silent empty kitchen and the TV left on in the main bedroom. Suddenly the breeze picked up and the girl started having nightmares. All that was in her sight was a white carousal. AT the moment she was 15 but in her dream she was six. She was riding a mermaid when she couldn't breathe.
Her sea blue eyes shot open faster than the velocity of radiance so speed of light. She started gasping for precious air. The first snowflake of winter along with some white lily petals flew in through the skylight and landed on her bulky large breast. She felt there gentleness, as she looked down she sat up.
"Great not this stupid cruel nightmare again!" She said to herself as she ran to her bedroom trying to grasp her inhaler. But it wasn't there.
I started to panic as I ran downstairs. The inhaler was nowhere to be seen and I needed that inhaler quick. I had about ten seconds to find it and I started to freak as I ran down the long twirling stairs. In my life threatening dream I started tumbling. I fell down the longest tunnel, you couldn't even believe how long and cold it was.
I thought it was dark as I hit the ground with a thud. I woke up and I looked up. I guess my math teacher, the evil Mrs. Maugham didn't like that I fell asleep in her ridiculously boring class. She glared at me as she pointed her long witch like manicured finger out the tall door but I had no fear of her flying monkeys.
I stood up and blew a bubble with my gum but it was right in her face. We were not even allowed to have gum so this made her furious. I slowly turned on my new black heels and stomped away as all the eyes of my fellow classmates followed me. I pounded my pumps all the way to the office and just sat down without saying anything, like I had anything to say to these people.
I was bearing a black miniskirt with ruffles and a skull on the right side, also a black tee with slits on the backside and on the wrists. The blouse had a little bit of emerald and sapphire designs on the front. My fair locks had a dark cobalt two inch strip in the front, so it fell over the edge of my eye. For my hands I had fish legging gloves. I also had thigh high towering converse heel, boots
The freak walked out the entrance and tried yelling at me. You know all the Blah…Blah…Blah bull crap. I have never listened to this female. So honestly I don't know what the agony she said.
As she was chatting I sat there picking the nail buff off my nails. I blew another bubble with my bubble gum and stood up. I could tell that she was still talking so I just left. As I left I pulled out my cellular phone and called my boyfriend. He knew what I meant so he met me outside. We both got in his navy blue Chevy truck and we drove off.
"Dean where are you taking me?" I said in an amused voice.
"You will see my worship!" He yelled over the wind from the unexposed hidden windows.
Half an hour afterwards we arrived at the seaside inn. Named "love from the shore." We pulled up and I got out of the means of transportation. I looked at Dean's pale light-colored hair and sapphire eyes. I blew a kiss to him, and he imitated catching it.
We step closer and he kissed me on my temple. We then started interlocking our fingers. We walked towards the front desk and the old wrinkly woman held some keys out to him.
"Whoa, how long have you had this planned Dean?" I said gradually and pretty much wordlessly.
He grabbed my hand and without answering my question with words. He answered it with a sweet amazing smile.
We walked up to our room and he already had our stuff there. I went to sit on the double bed and there were azure roses everywhere.
"Oh, my favorite roses, oh yeah!" I squealed as I pulled out my cellular phone and started taking photos.
"Can I put these on Face book baby?" I asked as I prayed inaudibly.
"Yeah!" He said while nodding his attractive face. He told me after that to get into a bathing suit. So we could go take a stroll on the beach while the sun was setting.
I quickly changed into my scorching bathing suit. I strolled out of the restroom and Dean started panting and I kissed his soft, smooth, silky lips to somewhat calm him down.
We went to the coast and we entertained ourselves with tag and attack. I would pursuit him and he would hoist me up and start ambulatory deeper into the Deep Sea. We kissed and hugged and then caressed some more. This whole period, I had a distinctive feeling in my abdomen.
We get out of the sea and Dean pulled a blanket and some blue roses out of the shrub. He wrapped the cover around me and located the roses opposite of me. After we observed the nightfall we decided to walk back to the bed and breakfast.
We get back, stripped, and got ready for bed. Dean was lying down and I laid down well ahead of him. We turned out the light and started debating life.
"Hey I love you Annabelle!" He said with a smirk.
"I adore you more than you will ever know!" I said as I wandered off to a sweet slumber.
Authors note: The above is the edited version and the one below is the unedited version. I want you to tell me which one you like better. The one that gets the most votes I will continue to post. I will post it like this for three chapters. But I need you guys to comment and vote! Vote! Vote! Vote! Comment! Comment! Comment! Come on I know you can!
In a normal house, one special window was left open on a random night. The breeze started blowing at around one a.m. The breeze swirled through the house up and down in and out then down the stairs into a darken front room. Here another window was opened and the moon shown through perfectly onto Annabelle's golden hair. The dark makeup left on her face from this morning. She slept there soundly in her penguin pajamas. She slowly moved and shifted from her back to her right side.
Throughout the house there was no sound but the mouse hunting for food in the empty kitchen and the TV left on in the bedroom. Suddenly, the wind picked up and the girl started dreaming. All she could see was a white carousal. At the moment she was 15. In her dream she was six. She was riding a mermaid when she couldn't breathe.
Her ocean blue eyes shot open faster than the speed of light. She started hyper venal ting. The first snowflake of winter as long with some white lily petals flew in through the window and landed on her large breast. She felt there softness, as she looked down she sat up.
"Great not this dream again!" She said to herself as she ran to her room trying to grab her inhaler. But it wasn't there.
I started to panic as I ran down stairs. The inhaler was no were to be seen. I started to freak out as I ran down the stairs. I started tumbling. I fell down the longest tunnel.
It was dark as I heard a thud. I woke up as I looked up. I guess my math teacher, Mrs. Maugham didn't like that I fell asleep in her ridiculously boring class. She glared at me as she pointed her long witch like manicured finger out the tall door.
I stood up and blew a bubble with my pink gum right in her face. We were not allowed to have gum so this made her mad. I slowly turned on my new black heels and stomped away as all eyes fallowed me. I stomped all the way to the office and just sat down without saying anything.
I was wearing a black mini skirt with ruffles and a skull on the right side. Also a black t-shirt with slits in the back and on the wrists. The shirt had a little bit of neon green and blue designs on the front. My golden locks had a dark blue two inch strip in the front, so it fell over the corner of my eye. For my hands I had fish legging gloves. I also had thigh high converse heel boots.
The freak walked out the door and tried yelling at me. You know all the Blah…Blah…Blah bull crap. I have never listened to this woman. So honestly I don't know what the hell she said.
Ad she was talking I sat there picking the nail polish off my nails. I blew another bubble with my gum and stood up. I could tell that she was still talking so I just left. As I left I pulled out my phone and called my boyfriend. He knew what I meant so he met me outside. We both got in his blue Chevy Truck and we drove off.
"Dean where are you taking me?" I said in a giggly voice.
"You will see my love!" He yelled over the wind from the open windows.
Half an hour later we arrived at the seaside hotel. Named "love from the shore." We pulled up and I got out of the truck. I looked at Dean's blond hair and blue eyes. I blew a kiss to him and he pretended to catch it.
We stepped closer and he kissed me on my forehead as he hugged me. We then started holding hands. We walked towards the front desk and the woman held some keys out to him.
"Whoa, how long have you had this planned Dean?" I said slowly and pretty much silently.
He grabbed my hand and without answering my question with words. He answered it with a smile.
We walked up to our room and he already had our stuff there. I went to sit on the bed and there were blue roses everywhere.
"Oh, my favorite roses, oh yeah!" I squealed as I pulled out my phone and started taking pictures.
"Can I put these on Face book baby?" I asked as I prayed silently.
"Yeah!" He said while nodding his beautiful face. HE told me after that to get into a swimming suit. So we could go take a walk on the beach while the sun was setting.
I hurried and changed into my super hot bathing suit. I walked out of the bathroom and Dean started gasping and I kissed his soft lips to kind of calm him down.
We went to the beach and we played tag and tackled each other. I would chase him and he would pick me up and start walking deeper into the ocean. We kissed and hugged and then kissed some more. All this time, I had a special feeling in my abdomen.
We got out of the water and Dean pulled a blanket and some blue roses out of the same bush. He wrapped the blanket around me and placed the roses in front of me. After we watch the sunset we walked back to the hotel.
We got back, undressed, and got ready for bed. Dean was lying down and I laid down after him. We turned out the light and started talking.
"Hey I love you Annabelle!" He said with a smile.
"I love you more than you will ever know!" I said as I drifted off to the sleep.
Authors note: Thank you for reading my story. Please comment and please vote. Tell all your friends to read my story to. Tell me if you liked it. Also if you don't know what to write in the comment then answer these questions in your comment.
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