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The Forbidden Love

Novel By: prepPRINCESS
Romance


Forbidden Love describes the forbidden love between a vampire and a human. Fourteen-year-old Jasmine has everything a teenage girl wants: a perfect family, lots of friends, and awesome grades. There's only one thing missing: a boyfriend. But when she meets the mysterious and cute Jordan, everything changes. She gets adventure, excitement, and a boyfriend, but Jordan has a dark secret to hide. Jasmine is determined to find out what it is, but will his secret cost her her life? Forbidden Love is filled with action, excitement, and romance that will keep you reading until the last page. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 17, 2008    Reads: 209    Comments: 13    Likes: 4   


Chapter 11

POV: Jordan

I froze when my dad said that. I saw that he was becoming impatient waiting for my response so I said quickly,

“Of course she is, dad, I mean, she was almost dead by the time I got down there, so I couldn’t have saved her anyways.”

“Okay,” my dad said suspiciously,

“I believe you, for now, now get some rest for tomorrow, you’re making one of the biggest decisions of your life and need to be refreshed so you can think clearly.”

“Okay, dad, good night,” I said as my dad walked out the door, switching off my light. I stayed up for a while that night, however, nervous about how our plan would work out.

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POV: Jasmine

I woke up early the next morning when I heard a soft tap on my window. Since my room was on the second story of our house, I kinda figured who it would be. I pulled back my curtain and opened my window, where I saw Jordan sitting in the tree next to my window. I rubbed my eyes sleepily as I said,

“Okay, okay, I’m up, let me get my clothes on and get freshened up, meanwhile, all my stuff is next to bed, so you can take it down to the car, ok?”

“Wow, you look beautiful even when you’re just waking up,” he said, smiling at me. I pushed him playfully and then stepped back so he could crawl in my window. I walked into my bathroom after I grabbed some clothes and then started getting ready as I reminisced over what happened last night when I got home. My parents were furious that I hadn’t called. I told them that I had went over to Natalie’s and forgot to call(I even called Natalie on my way home when I was making up a story so she could back me up-my parents would kill me if they knew I had gone to Jordan’s house, and they wouldn’t believe half of the events that happened there). They eventually calmed down, and then I grabbed my plate of food out of the microwave and went up to my room to pack. I spent the rest of the time I was up(which was until at least 2:00) packing. I finished getting ready and then walked out my bathroom to find that Jordan had disappeared, along with all of my luggage. Good, now I can tell my parents I’m riding with him to school, grab a quick breakfast, and wait for him to drive back around the block to pick me up, I thought to myself as I walked downstairs. My parents were in their normal positions: my dad reading the newspaper, my mom eating breakfast and reading a book at the same time.

“Hey mom, hey dad, Jordan’s taking me to school today, is that okay?” I asked. My mom and dad looked up and then glanced at each other.

“I guess so, as long as he’s not driving, since he’s 14,” my dad said.

“Oh, he’s not, his…, uhm, older brother is driving us,” I made up a quick lie.

“Okay, well, eat some breakfast while you wait on him, sweetie,” my mom said. I fixed myself some toast and munched on it while I waited on Jordan. Just as I finished the last bite, the doorbell rang. I shoved the last bite in my mouth and ran to answer the door. I opened it and had to swallow before I could talk.

“Hey, Jordan,” I said, then called to my parents,

“MOM, DAD! Jordan’s here! Bye!” As I walked out the house and shut the door, I could hear them saying,

“Bye sweetie!”

“So, you ready?” Jordan asked as we walked towards his realcar, a red Corvette. Jordan had parked a block away from my house so my parents wouldn’t know he was driving and get suspicious.

“Uh, yeah, I guess so, but one question, where are we gonna go? I asked.

“Well, the main goal is to put as many miles between us and my dad as possible, so who knows where we’ll end up,” Jordan answered as he opened the passenger door to his Corvette for me.

“Okay,”I responded as he cranked up the car and began to pull away from the curb. I watched sadly as my house disappeared. Jordan noticed my sadness and put his arm around my shoulder and pulled me to him in a hug.

“It’s okay, this is a new beginning for the both of us, just you and me, with no one in our way to hinder us from being together,” Jordan reassured me. I wrapped my arms around Jordan and hugged him while he continued to drive. His arm that was wrapped around me squeezed tighter and I leaned over and buried my face in his chest and began to cry as he continued to drive. I was really going to miss my parents, my friends, and my life.

Jordan's Car

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Comments:

Aweee....well, that is sweet.=)

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Sweet!

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad you liked it!

Kathy
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Awwww ~~~ so sweet !! Update more please!!!! :P

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Awww.... I'm glad you like it. I will update ASAP, but since school starts for me tomorrow, the chapters won't be coming out as often now, so be patient with me. Thanks for commenting!

MORE MORE!!

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do. I'm glad that you like it so much!♥

Niiiice can't wait for more. And if this Jordan guy turns out to be a jerk, I will be very very mad. lol.

Update soon!

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL~ I promise that Jordan won't turn out to be a jerk, he's actually really sweet, caring, and protective. Hope you like the next few chapters!

Cuteness :)

Total Luvage :D

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Awww..., I'm glad you liked it!♥

this was really worth reading!

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, thank you, I'm so glad it was!♥

so CUTE!!!!!!!!!! please tell me when the next ch. is

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

I promise I will, but since school started today for me, chapters won't be posted as fast since I'll have other things on my mind. I'll do my best to post at least once a week, but it just depends on what's happening. I'm glad you liked it, though!

Aww too bad she has to leave.
Jordan's dad really sucks.
But at least their together!

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, that's the most important part. It is kinda sad, but that's the only way they can be together. I'm glad you liked it!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No pressure :P Let me know when you do~!

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

I will ASAP, but since I'm in school now, I'm a lot busier, so I don't have as much time to write the chapters, but I'll do my best to get at least one chapter out a week.♥

hmph! i REALLY don't like that dad of HIS!!!
grrrrrrrrrrrrr'th

Posted: Oct 9, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL, yeah, nobody does....♥ Thanks for commenting girlie!♥

awwwwww!!!

Posted: Oct 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for commenting!♥

holy crap she didnt even tell her parents that she loved them!

Posted: Oct 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, it's really bad and sad...*tear rolls down cheek*♥



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