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The Forbidden Love

Novel By: prepPRINCESS
Romance


Forbidden Love describes the forbidden love between a vampire and a human. Fourteen-year-old Jasmine has everything a teenage girl wants: a perfect family, lots of friends, and awesome grades. There's only one thing missing: a boyfriend. But when she meets the mysterious and cute Jordan, everything changes. She gets adventure, excitement, and a boyfriend, but Jordan has a dark secret to hide. Jasmine is determined to find out what it is, but will his secret cost her her life? Forbidden Love is filled with action, excitement, and romance that will keep you reading until the last page. View table of contents...

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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30

Submitted: Aug 24, 2008    Reads: 195    Comments: 14    Likes: 3   


 
 

Chapter 12
POV: Jordan

Jasmine eventually fell asleep with her head still on my chest. I could tell she would really miss her life without even reading her mind. I sighed as I drove on, knowing that my dad probably already had people out looking for me. A few hours later, we eventually crossed the border of Indiana and I drove on until we finally reached my decided stopping point, Columbus, Ohio. It would be much harder for anyone to track us down if we were among so many people without making a scene, which my dad wouldn’t want. Jasmine woke up as we pulled into the parking lot of a Holiday Inn, which was one of the nicer hotels. The sun was starting to get low in the sky, so I got us a room, toted everything upstairs, and then we went to get something to eat. We drove around until we stopped at a decent little restaurant. I, of course, had nothing, while Jasmine ordered a steak and salad. I watched her as she ate and asked her when she was done,

“How was it?” She smiled and said,

“Won’t you ever get tired of watching me eat?” I laughed and answered,

“No, I’m too busy thinking about you to worry about food.” She whispered back,

“What about blood? Where are you going to get it?”

“I brought some blood packs, but I’m not sure how long they’ll last me, but you don’t need to worry your pretty head about it,” I answered smiling as I took her hand in mine and kissed it.

“What about your dad? Do you think he’ll find us?” she asked curiously.

“I don’t know, but for now, we need to lay low, that’s why I brought cash instead of my credit card, he could trace us easily that way,” I said. I was starting to become worried that he might find us sooner then expected, but I didn’t want to worry Jasmine, so I put on a smile. I had a feeling that my dad had sent my brother after me. He was a vampire as well, but younger then me. He was turned when he was 12, therefore a lot stronger then me and more dead set in drinking human blood, like my father. My father had trained him to be a great vampire, even though he probably would never take the throne. For the next week or so, we kept on driving, stopping every night at a hotel. We eventually arrived at my permanent destination for us, New York City. My dad would have a lot more trouble finding us there, especially since over 30% of the vampire population lived there. We rented an apartment near Times Square that was really fancy, and Jasmine loved it. But one day, trouble struck. I was super thirsty one morning, so I drank all the blood I had left, unfortunately. Jasmine saw this, and knew something had to be done.

“Jordan, you can feed off of me from now on, so you won’t need the packs anymore,” Jasmine volunteered.

“No, Jasmine, I’m never going to inflict pain on you!” I shouted, frustrated and angry that she would even consider that. I survived for a whole another week until one fateful day. I was getting really weak, and Jasmine noticed. My eyes turned a black color, and I could barely move around the apartment anymore. What do you do when the one thing you need to live would make life unbearable? I thought to myself as Jasmine walked in the room.

“Oh, Jordan, you look worse, you’re dying, aren’t you?” she asked, but I didn’t respond. My eyes could only focus on her neck, where I could see her pulse and blood. I quickly shook it off, but couldn’t help but take quick glances at it every minute or so.

“Oh, Jordan, you have to do it, or you’ll die, and if you do, I could never live without you, and then your dad would come after me and kill me, anyways,” Jasmine said quickly, really worried now.

“NO I WON’T!!!” I shouted at her. She grabbed my shoulders and said,

“Look, you need my blood, so I’m willingly giving it to you.” Then I realized what must be done, but at least she was doing this willingly. I weakly went to the bathroom and grabbed some towels. She sat on the bed and waited as I spread them all around me as I sat back down on the bed. Then Jasmine crawled over to me and moved her hair behind her back. She closed her eyes and tilted up her chin, waiting for the pain.

“Jasmine, if it’s more comfortable to you, I’ll just use your wrist,” I said soothingly. She nodded and I grabbed her arm and placed it in front of me. I put both of my hands on each side of it, to hold it still. I sniffed up and down her arm, looking for a good spot, and then pulled back. I opened up my mouth and my fangs came out. I leaned forward and pierced her flawless skin with my fangs as she winced and began to cry in pain, her eyes still remaining closed.

POV: Jasmine

I winced and started to cry in pain as Jordan’s fangs pierced my skin. I instantly regretted doing this, but then I remembered my love for Jordan and shrugged off the regret. I could feel myself losing blood, which made me feel really weak, so Jordan pulled me closer to him as he still sucked my blood. I buried my face in his shoulder, now not letting the tears of pain be held back any longer. All of a sudden, I could feel his fangs pull back out of my skin. I could feel Jordan wrapping my arm in a towel to help stop the bleeding and then hug me tight and whisper in my ear soothingly,

“It’s okay, Jasmine, rest now, it’s all over.”


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Comments:

WOW!! Great job!

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!♥

Awesome! I'm totally hooked on this story. Thanks for letting me know that the chapter came out!! I love it so far!

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm so glad that you're hooked! You're welcome! It was my pleasure to tell you! I'm glad you love it!♥

Intense. =)

+hecate+

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Aw...wait how do you get turned into a vampire in ur story? In some of them, you just have to get bit...wouldn't she become one now?

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

No, in my story, it's a bit different. Haha, all the stories are different. In mine, you have to get bit and drained, then when you're dying the person who's turning you gives you their blood, and yeah. So, no, she won't become one now. Thanks for commenting!

mizoko
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In the middle of this story, it makes me hooked. But the story must have a happy ending..... Good job my dear!!!

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm so glad you're hooked! Yay! You'll just have to wait and see what the ending holds.... Thanks for the support!

Awesome AWesome please tell me when you update!

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

I will! I'm happy you think it's awesome! I'll try to update ASAP, but since school started last week, I'll be busy and won't have as much time to write.

I like it =)
Poor Jordan was killing himself :(
Lol Update soon!

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL! Hehe, I'm glad you do like it, and I'll do my best to update soon. Thanks for commenting!♥

I like it update soon

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do, but sine school has begun, I'll be busy doing homework, studying, etc., so it'll be hard for me to write a lot, though I'll try to post at least 1 chapter a week.

It's good, they fell in love a bit quick though. I'm starting to like vampire stories, so write more :)

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

I'll do my best, even though school's making me a lot busier now. Thanks for reading!♥

hOPE IT HAS HAPPY ENDING. Is it jasmine would become a vampire?

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

You'll just have to wait and find out....

*gasps*

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

I take it that you liked it? Lol, neways, thanks for commenting!

i really like your story. keep it up. ;)

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I'll do my best!♥

wow =! she must really love him to give him her blood!

Posted: Oct 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, it's like a very strong and passionate love and that's the only reason why she did, because she loved him so much.♥

AWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! lol, that was so sweet!

I really like your dialoge, especially in the last chapter i read B4 his one. Very open, and yet influential. Beautiful Job April!

~Sarah Rain // BreakingDawn

Posted: Oct 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank so much girl! I'm glad you're so enthusiastic about my novel!



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