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The Forbidden Love

Novel By: prepPRINCESS
Romance


Forbidden Love describes the forbidden love between a vampire and a human. Fourteen-year-old Jasmine has everything a teenage girl wants: a perfect family, lots of friends, and awesome grades. There's only one thing missing: a boyfriend. But when she meets the mysterious and cute Jordan, everything changes. She gets adventure, excitement, and a boyfriend, but Jordan has a dark secret to hide. Jasmine is determined to find out what it is, but will his secret cost her her life? Forbidden Love is filled with action, excitement, and romance that will keep you reading until the last page. View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30

Submitted: Sep 5, 2008    Reads: 128    Comments: 12    Likes: 3   


Chapter 14

POV: Jasmine

I woke up to find myself in a damp, dark jail cell. I was laying on a hard wood table that served as a bed. I groaned as I sat up because I was really sore from lying the uncomfortable surface. I walked over to the bars at the front of my cell and peeked out to find a guard sitting in a chair next to my cell. As I looked out, he glanced up at me and then turned away. I walked back over to the bench and sat down. I began to cry, knowing now that my life was over. I was a prisoner to a merciless monster, and I knew I probably wouldn’t make it out of here alive. I cried until I had no more tears, then sulked for a few more hours. I wondered what time it was as I started to become very hungry. As I was just about to pass out from hunger, I heard a familiar voice whisper in the darkness,

“Jasmine, where are you?” It was Jordan. I ran over to the bars, noticing that the guard was asleep, and whispered back,

“Over here, Jordan.” A second later, I was looking into the face of my angel, my savior.

“Are you okay?” he asked as he brushed his hand across my cheek.

“I’m really hungry, but can you get me out of here?” I asked. Jordan nodded and started to pick a lock w/ a hairpin he had, because breaking the door down would awaken the guard. A minute later, he opened the door and picked me up bridal style in his arms. I laid my head against his chest as he said,

“Everything’s going to be fine, Jasmine, just relax.” I passed out soon after.

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I woke up in my bedroom, of all places I thought that I’d wake up in ever again. I looked around my room and noticed a piece of paper laying on my desk. I started to read it:

Jasmine

I’ve explained everything to your parents. I made up a story about our car breaking down and our cell phones battery dying on the way home from school the other day. I said that some nice people picked us up and took us to their house because we looked really disheveled and hungry. As soon as we got there, we were taken to bedrooms where we passed out because we were so tired. When we woke up the next day, they fed us and we cleaned up. They told us they would help fix our car and then we could go home the next day. So we drove home today. I just wanted to tell you all this in case your parents asked any questions. Anyways, I just want you to know that I love you, and always will. I love you so much, but I’m afraid if I remain near you any longer, you will be hurt, and then I could never forgive myself. So it is with a heavy heart that I tell you goodbye forever. I am running away from you, from my family, from everything that I’ve ever known, to start fresh somewhere new. You will probably never see me again. Be safe, my dear Jasmine. I love you.
Jordan

My heart started to break as I read the letter. When I had finished reading it, I crumpled it up and threw it across the room. I began to cry really hard. My mom walked in a little while later and asked,

“Sweetie, what’s wrong?” I sniffled and said,

“Jordan ran away.”

“Oh, honey,” my mom said and sat on the edge of my bed and hugged me tight.

“Mom, can I just have some time alone, now?” I asked, wanting to be alone to think. She nodded and walked out, closing my door. I cried more and more. I thought I’d never stop crying. Life without Jordan was meaningless. I couldn’t live without him. What am I going to do now?

POV: Jordan

After I wrote Jasmine a note explaining everything, I left. I had escaped from the room my brother had locked me in, and had found her and took her home. I knew there was no way we could be together: not with my dad chasing after me, angry and wanting to bring me back at all costs, including killing Jasmine so I wouldn’t have anyone in my way when I got married and became king. I would never let that happen if I could help it. I knew my dad wouldn’t go after Jasmine if he knew she wasn’t with me. I drove and drove, not really knowing where I was going. I drove for days until I reached Canada. I wanted to leave the country to make it harder for anyone to find me. I loved Jasmine, but I knew this was the only way she would be safe.

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POV: Jasmine

A few days later, on Saturday, my friends and I went to the beach because they wanted to help me forget about Jordan(though I knew that would never happen). We swam out about waist deep and started to talk, swim, and splash. All of a sudden, we were caught in a rip current. They were able to swim to shore, but I couldn’t get free of the current as it dragged me further out in the ocean. I was started to become tired as I struggled to get out of it, and by the time it dissolved, I was at least a mile away from the shore where my friends now were. I started to struggle to stay above water as the waves crashed into me. Salt water filled my mouth and I began to choke and grow weaker. My friends ran off, saying they were going to find a lifeguard. I knew it would be too late. I started to drown, and as water filled my lungs, I passed out.

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I woke up, thinking I was dead, but finding myself on the shore. To my surprise, Jordan was standing over me. When he noticed I was awake he leaned down and kissed me. He said,

“I told you I would protect you,” and then he was gone. It all seemed like a dream. All of a sudden, my friends ran up, a lifeguard with them.

“How did you get here?” Natalie asked.

“Jordan saved me,” I whispered. Of course, my friends looked at me like I was crazy, but I didn’t care. I couldn’t stay here, so I left and went back home. I went in my room and cried. I logged onto my computer later, where I had a new email. It was from Jordan. He said that he loved me and told me to stay safe, unlike earlier today. He said he cared about me. He also said that he was safe as well and was far away from his father. He missed me and wanted me to know that he’ll always be there for me and will always love me. I cried as I closed out my email box. I wanted so badly to see him, to believe him, but I felt that he would forget about me and meet some other girl, who was a vampire, and fall in love with her. I was just some human to him. Unless I was turned, I knew we could never be together anyways.


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Comments:

this is a wee bit more than a depressing love story
but good

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!♥

Awww..I Want Them To Be Together :(

update asap

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

I know, I do, too... Lol, I guess I control that since I'm the author.... Anyways, I'll do my best to update before the weekend's over.♥

Aww poor Jasmine.
Is this the end? Is it over?

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, it is sad, and no, there's still a few more chapters coming!

That was sooooo sad. I loved this chapter though! I feel bad for Jasmine! I want them to end up together so badly! you need to write more ASAP! keep me updated!

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww.. I know, it is sad. I want them to end up together, too!(Lol, I guess since I'm the author I control that...)I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. I'll update you when I post!♥

hajer
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aww i love this story i swear its so cute and romantic by why couldnt she be with him im sad lol by itw as great gurl keep going

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Yay! I'm glad you really like it! You'll just have to wait and see if they can be together.... I'm working on the next chapter as we speak, so I'm doing my best to keep it going.♥

oo! write more soon plz! =D

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm writing the next chapter as we speak, so it should be out today or tomorrow.♥

awee...poor - well poor both of them. that's so sweet and sad.

+Hecate+

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

I know... Anyways, thanks for commenting!♥

Awwww...still very good. It's a little depressing...but I've always loved a good romance story. Great job :}

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for the support! I'm glad that I haven't lost my artistic touch. I'll do my best to deliver more enticing chapters.♥

awww, that's soo sad! Poor Jasmine and Jordan... *fingers are crossed that they get back together?* (: Please update soon!

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, it is sad.... Keep your fingers crossed until I post the next chapter!♥ I'm posting the next chapter in a few minutes actually, so get ready to uncross your fingers!♥

poor Jasmine:( i hate it when it comes to this part

Posted: Sep 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, it is really sad....

i'm sad now, i really hope they get back together so i'm off to the next chappie, yay!!

Posted: Oct 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, it is really sad... Yay!

thats so SAD! ahhhhh...

Posted: Oct 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, it is...♥



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