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The Forbidden Love

Novel By: prepPRINCESS
Romance


Forbidden Love describes the forbidden love between a vampire and a human. Fourteen-year-old Jasmine has everything a teenage girl wants: a perfect family, lots of friends, and awesome grades. There's only one thing missing: a boyfriend. But when she meets the mysterious and cute Jordan, everything changes. She gets adventure, excitement, and a boyfriend, but Jordan has a dark secret to hide. Jasmine is determined to find out what it is, but will his secret cost her her life? Forbidden Love is filled with action, excitement, and romance that will keep you reading until the last page. View table of contents...

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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30

Submitted: Sep 6, 2008    Reads: 143    Comments: 9    Likes: 3   


Chapter 15

POV: Jordan

I found myself a pretty decent apartment in Quebec. It has been 3 weeks since I ran away, and I’m really starting to miss Jasmine. I can’t live without her. I can’t be near her, but I can’t be away from her. I don’t know what I’m gonna do. If I go back, my dad will find us and we’ll both be in danger. If I stay here, I’ll be alone forever, and lose my only true love. If I lost her, I could never live with myself. I’m so confused right now that I have no clue what I’ll do.

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About a week later, I had made up my mind. I couldn’t like without her here, so I’m going back. And no matter what happens, I’m going to protect her. I won’t let my dad do anything to her. I booked a flight for the next morning directly to Indianapolis. I would surprise Jasmine on her way home from school.

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POV: Jasmine

I was on my way home from school a month after Jordan had left, feeling depressed, as usual, without him. I was about 2 blocks from the school, when all of a sudden, my dreams came true. Jordan pulled up next to me in his sports car and said,

“Need a ride?” I instantly smiled and ran around to the passenger’s side. I jumped in the front seat and turned to him as he drove off.

“So, does this mean you’re back for good?” I asked curiously.

“Yes, it does, but 1st, I have some unfinished business with my father, so I need you to stay with me at all times, never walk home alone,” he said.

“Okay,” I said. He drove me to my house and said,

“See you in you’re bedroom.” I walked into my house, greeted my parents, and ran upstairs to my room. As I shut my door, Jordan appeared on my bed. We talked for a long time, and when it was time for me to go to bed, he cradled me in his arms and rocked me to sleep. Little did I know that tragedy would ruin my life the next day.

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I woke up in Jordan’s arms. He smiled down at me and said,

“Good morning, sleepyhead.” I laughed softly as he planted a kiss on my forehead. I jumped up and starting getting ready for school as he stayed in my room and waited. I walked downstairs about 30 minutes later as Jordan disappeared, saying he’d pick me up around the corner, since my parents still thought he was gone, which was for the best. I fixed myself 2 pieces of toast really quick and ate them. I kissed and hugged my parents goodbye, telling them I loved them.

“Bye!” they shouted as I ran out the door and down the street where Jordan was waiting. I jumped in the car and we headed off to school.

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POV: Jordan

I knew I couldn’t go back to school, not after I disappeared like I had, so I spent most of the day driving around town, avoiding alleys and any other shortcuts that might lead to danger, because I knew my dad was combing the city for me. I got really bored, but finally my car clock read 3:10, so I raced back to the school to pick up Jasmine. She jumped in the car when I pulled up, and then we drove back to her house. I looked at her nervously and said,

“Jasmine?”

“Hmmm…?” she asked.

“Well, I was wondering, since I need a queen for me to become king, when this is all over, will you marry me? Well, at least when we get older, I mean,” I said nervously.

“Of course, but doesn’t that mean I have to been turned into a vampire?” she answered.

“Well…, yes; is that something you’d be okay with?” I asked nervously.

“Jordan, I love you, and I want to be with you forever, so…, yes, that’s what I want, as long as it means I’ll be with you forever,” she said seriously.

“Are you sure, Jasmine? I mean, you’ll be giving up your mortality and any chance you have of a normal life,” I said, worried about what her answer would be.

“I’m sure, Jordan, I love you more then I’ve ever loved anyone,” she said, and with that, she leaned over and kissed me on the cheek as I parked a block away from her house. I walked Jasmine up to her front door, then started to walk away as she unlocked her house door and went in. As I jumped in my car and started the engine, a scream came from Jasmine’s house. I use my super fast vampire speed to race up to her door. I broke the door down and rushed inside to see a gruesome scene in the living room. Jasmine was standing in the doorway of the living room, eyes wide with fear, horror, and sadness. Her mom and dad lay dead on the living room floor, with blood splattered everywhere. Jasmine turned towards me and wrapped her arms around my waist, burying her face in my chest as she began to cry. I wrapped my arms around her to comfort her, but it was just a façade of how I really felt. I was angry and furious. I knew who had actually done this, which made me even more furious. My dad wanted to hurt Jasmine, so it would make me come back here, so he could find me. So my dad hired a trained killer that was a vampire to kill Jasmine’s parents. Something had to be done, but right now I didn’t know what. But there was one thing I knew for sure: I was going to confront my dad about what had happened to Jasmine’s parents.


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Comments:

chiLL
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damn! i need the continuation of d story real bad... nice one you got there. ;0]

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! I'll do my best to try to post another chapter tomorrow... I'm glad you really like it!♥


Aww that was sad how Jordan had to leave. But it was sweet because he did it to protect Jasmine. Atleast he came back because he couldnt live without her. Geez why cant there be (more) boys in rl that are like that. The world would be a little bit better place to live in.... Oh well I guess thats wishful thinking.

Omg. Thats not cool. His dad is stopping at nothing to get to him. Man thats just horrible.... that butt...

I caught one mistake in the beginning when he said "I couldn’t like without her here," like should be live. Yeah then I got really into the story and didnt notice if there were any more lol.

Cant wait for the next update :)

Posted: Sep 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah it is sad, I made me wanna cry when I was writing it, but that's the way my characters were leading me to write... I do wish that boys were like that in real life as well, but what girl doesn't?(LOl) OOPS! Yeah, that's what I meant, and thanks for pointing out that typo, so now I'll go back and fix it. LOL, it's okay, hopefully there weren't any other big typos. I'll do my best to the post the next chapter soon, hopefully today, but I don't know if I'll be able to.♥

O.o
SusPENSE>
Update!

Posted: Sep 7, 2008

Author Comment:

I'll do my best to update by the end of today...If not, sometime this week, though probably Friday since I have school...♥

chapter 13, 14, 15 made me exited for the next scene. . . oh, very sad.....

Posted: Sep 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Yay! I'm so glad that I've got you in suspense, on the edge of your seat, anticipating what's to come.... so then you keep on reading!♥

Thats so sad! I feel bad now...but there's a good and a bad to this chapter....

GOOD- Jordan Purposed!!!!!!!

Bad- Jasmines parents are gone....

Keep me posted please

+Hecate+

Posted: Sep 12, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm so happy that you liked it so much! I like having a good and bad to every chapter to keep things balanced, but I can't always do that, so I do my best. I'll update as soon as I post chapter 16!♥

3DW@RD$_GURL**
(not registered user)

oh man dude!! you have to continue righting this story....i cryed my eyes out when jordan left her that note telling her that he was leaving....and then came back to save her, but then left again....the suspence is KILLING me!! i cant wait to see what jordan does about jasmine's parents being killed....this story is so emotional....it hits at every angle..thats what i think makes it good..

Posted: Sep 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh my gosh! Thank you so much! I'm glad that it is hit at every angle... I'm glad you love it! I'll do my best to write more soon.♥

i'm soooo hating the way Jordan's father handle things- oh wait, i believe i hate Jordan's father a LOT!! update soon:)

Posted: Sep 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, he doesn't handle anything really well... Anyways, I'm updating right now as we speak.♥

that's a bad dad Jordin's got there!

Posted: Oct 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, he's really mean sometimes....

aww thats so sad:[

Posted: Oct 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, it is....♥



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