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The Forbidden Love

Novel By: prepPRINCESS
Romance


Forbidden Love describes the forbidden love between a vampire and a human. Fourteen-year-old Jasmine has everything a teenage girl wants: a perfect family, lots of friends, and awesome grades. There's only one thing missing: a boyfriend. But when she meets the mysterious and cute Jordan, everything changes. She gets adventure, excitement, and a boyfriend, but Jordan has a dark secret to hide. Jasmine is determined to find out what it is, but will his secret cost her her life? Forbidden Love is filled with action, excitement, and romance that will keep you reading until the last page. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Jul 17, 2008    Reads: 256    Comments: 11    Likes: 6   


I know this chapter is kinda short, too, but as the novel continues, they get longer.

Chapter 3

POV: Jasmine

Oh my gosh! Jordan just asked me out on a date! My dreams have come true! Hopefully it goes well tonight. We’re going to dinner and a movie, but he wants to talk afterwards at the park, alone. Maybe that means he’s going to ask me to be his girlfriend! I know it’s wishful thinking, but it would be awesome if it happened! This school year is turning out better then I thought it would: now all I need is some adventure and excitement. Hopefully they’ll come soon. But what I least expected was that they’d come sooner than I had hoped.

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It’s almost time for our date! I’ve picked out the absolutely cutest outfit ever! It’s ajean mini skirt, but not too short, and a white blouse that is gorgeous! I’ve got silver hoop earrings and a pretty charm bracelet and necklace to match. I let my hair just stay straight, it always looked the best like that. Oh my gosh! It’s 7:00! He should be here any minute! *Ding Dong* I heard the doorbell ring, told my parents goodbye, and rushed to open the door. He looked amazing! He had an a casual pair of jeans and a black button-up shirt. Well, here goes nothing!

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POV: Jordan

Well, I got to her house and rang the doorbell. She opened it and looked gorgeous! What I’d give to have her as my girlfriend, but I don’t wanna put her in danger, being around me does that, I thought to myself as I escorted her outside to my parents' black Hummer Limo.They let me ride in that since I can't have a car yet, even though I'm technically way old enough to drive. It was more of a special occasion car then anything else, though. She gasped when she saw it, and said that it was beautiful. Wow, I’m glad I’ve already impressed her, I thought.

“WOW! But wait... who's gonna drive us?” she exclaimed in disbelief.

"I have a chauffeur,” I said, motioning to the front seat where my chauffeur, Danny,(who also happened to be a vampire and my bodyguard) was sitting. Well, we went to a pretty nice Italian restaurant inside of town called Carrabba’s. It looked pretty good, plus, since I could read her mind, I knew she loved Italian food. The food looked pretty good, even though I couldn’t have any. It made me wish that for at least tonight, I was still mortal and not immortal. She wondered why I didn’t eat and I lied to her saying,

“I had a big lunch, so I’m not very hungry.” Surprisingly, she believed me, I guess I have a kind of charm that can make people believe whatever I say. Well, after eating, I took her to see a new romance/action movie out, That Dangerous 1st Kiss. It was pretty good, and I held her tight and shielded her eyes when there were scary parts. After that, I read her mind. This has been the best date ever, so far, ohhhhh, I hope he asks me to be his girlfriend soon, because I feel like I’ve found my perfect guy, she thought. Just then, we arrived at the park. Well, she’s not gonna feel that way in a few minutes after I tell her the truth about me, I thought to myself and sighed as we entered the park and sat down on a bench, all alone on this peaceful, quiet night.

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Comments:

NEED MORE!!!!!!!

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do, I'm posting the 4th and 5th chapter, but then I'm leaving on Saturday for a two week vacation and won't be able to update until I get back, so sorry! Thanks for commenting, though!♥

great chap! :) now i wish Jordan's not a vamp at all...

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha, thanks, but he needs to be one later on, for certain reasons, you'll find out when I post...

MORE MORE!! =3

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

There's 2 more chapters up, so you can read those. Thanks for commenting!

awesome writing! :)

Posted: Aug 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for commenting!♥

Kathy
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Love it!!!!!!!!!

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Yay! I'm so glad you do! Thanks for reading!♥

mandy
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awesome! i love it! i just hope what he says doesn't ruin it.

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

You'll just have to read the next chapter and find out...

He can read minds to...you read twilight didn't you? lol

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Nope, I haven't read Twilight, but I probably will soon.

this is a great chapter, i love it

Posted: Aug 23, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for commenting!

love it , love it, love it!!!!!

Posted: Oct 10, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL, yay! It's fans like you that keep me writing!♥

good so far

Posted: Oct 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I'm glad it is!♥

lol its unlucky he can read her mind *cringe*

Posted: Nov 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, it is tough.... neways, enjoy the next chap!♥



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