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The Forbidden Love

Novel By: prepPRINCESS
Romance


Forbidden Love describes the forbidden love between a vampire and a human. Fourteen-year-old Jasmine has everything a teenage girl wants: a perfect family, lots of friends, and awesome grades. There's only one thing missing: a boyfriend. But when she meets the mysterious and cute Jordan, everything changes. She gets adventure, excitement, and a boyfriend, but Jordan has a dark secret to hide. Jasmine is determined to find out what it is, but will his secret cost her her life? Forbidden Love is filled with action, excitement, and romance that will keep you reading until the last page. View table of contents...

Chapters:

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30

Submitted: Jul 18, 2008    Reads: 235    Comments: 8    Likes: 4   


Chapter 5

POV: Jordan

Well, that went better then I suspected, I thought to myself as I drew back my lips from kissing her. I realized that she loved me for who I was on the inside. She started asking me questions about what vampires can do, so I said that I’d show her. I grabbed her arm and using my super strength, swung her onto my back, and told her to hang on as I flew off. I took her above the city and she liked that. I read her thoughts and she said this reminded her of those books she had read, the Twilight series. I remembered from the previews of the movie one of the lines Edward used, so I said as we slowed and came up against a tree, her grasping me and hanging on tight,

“You better hang on tight, spider monkey.” She laughed as we took off again and said,

“I will.” Well, then I took her back to the ground and I used my super fast vampire speed to show her how fast I could go. She loved it. After a few more minutes, I took her back to the car and told Danny to drive her home. As I helped her out, she said that she had a great time, and then wrapped her arms around my neck and kissed me, as I wrapped my arms around her waist. As she pulled back she said goodbye, pecked a kiss on my cheek, and ran into her house as I called back,

”Goodbye, Jasmine, see you tomorrow at school.” I jumped back in the car and rode home. I laid in my bedroom, thinking about the night’s events. I eventually dozed off to sleep, dreaming about our perfect date.

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POV: Jasmine

Oh my gosh! That was the best date ever! I thought to myself as I got ready for school the next morning. I couldn’t believe that my boyfriend was a vampire! And then he showed me all his cool powers; it was amazing! Anyways, today he said that he’s gonna sit with me at lunch; how awesome is that????!!!!!!! I guess it’s official now that we’re dating, but one thing still bothers me. I mean, I’ve always heard that, if vampires existed, a relationship between a human and one is, like, impossible. They would crave for your blood and when they were really hungry one day, they’d kill you. Maybe I should talk to Jordan about this, I thought to myself as I climbed on the school bus.

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Comments:

Great. Great. Great!! I loved it. You have to write more!!

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha, yeah, thanks, I'm glad you like it, but today is my last day I'll be able to post for a while. I'm going on vacation for 2 weeks, so you'll have to wait until I get back before the next chapter will be posted.

sweeettt its awesome i really love this story the
reaction she had was great and i cnt believe i have to wait 2 weeks for more :( (Tear) lol
~possesssed~

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm sorry, I know. I would post more, but all my stuff is on my computer, and I won't be at home, so yeah. But I'm glad you like it, though.♥ You won't regret waiting.

AWWWEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! that was amazing...but short. =( update soon!!!!!!

+Hecate+

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha, yeah, my chapters are usually short, but good. I'll update as soon as I get back from my 2 week vacation.

Update!

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Ok, but I'm going on vacation tomorrow for 2 weeks, so I can't update until I get back, sorry! Thanks for commenting!

plz update as soon as you can

the story is amazing

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm going to update as soon as I get back from my 2 week vacation. Thanks for commenting!

woooo

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm happy that you liked it!

Woot-HOOT! lol, that was a great chappy! I'm off to read the next one! [i won't commetn for the next couple chapters, cause i now how anoying it is, for me at least, when i have to check commetns from the same person, CHAPTER... afetr CHAPTER.. after CHAPTER! lol...

l8er chickie!.
~Sarah Rain // BreakingDawn

(More of 'Everychanging Eyes' has been posted!)

Posted: Oct 9, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL, yeah, it does get annoying sometimes, but I love the great enthusiam my fans have for it, so it doesn't bother me that much. I love seeing the new messages and new fan requests box when I sign in! I'm glad you liked it, though, and you can comment if you want, either way it doesn't bother me... And btw, thanks for the update girl!♥

i'm still loving it!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Posted: Oct 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Yay!♥



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