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The Forbidden Love

Novel By: prepPRINCESS
Romance


Forbidden Love describes the forbidden love between a vampire and a human. Fourteen-year-old Jasmine has everything a teenage girl wants: a perfect family, lots of friends, and awesome grades. There's only one thing missing: a boyfriend. But when she meets the mysterious and cute Jordan, everything changes. She gets adventure, excitement, and a boyfriend, but Jordan has a dark secret to hide. Jasmine is determined to find out what it is, but will his secret cost her her life? Forbidden Love is filled with action, excitement, and romance that will keep you reading until the last page. View table of contents...

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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30

Submitted: Aug 10, 2008    Reads: 216    Comments: 10    Likes: 4   


 

Chapter 9

POV: Jordan

Oh no! I thought to myself as my dad walked closer.

“Son, what are you doing with that human?” he asked.

“She was eavesdropping, so I thought I’d finish her off, so give us some privacy,” I responded quickly.

“I don’t believe you,” my dad said, then gasping as he said with disgust,

“You’re in love with that pathetic human???!!!!” I sighed, realizing he had read my mind. My dad raced over and pushed us apart, grabbing Jasmine’s wrist and lifting her up and throwing her over his shoulder.

“Son, you’re a disgrace! I can’t believe you! Well, you need to rest up for tomorrow, meanwhile, I’m thirsty,” he said evilly, glaring wickedly at Jasmine.

“No, Dad!” I yelled, but it was too late: he had already disappeared. I started to sniff out Jasmine, and eventually it led me down to the dark basement, where I heard a commotion going on. Using my special see-in-the-dark vampire vision, I saw my dad restraining Jasmine, fangs out. He grabbed some old chains and chained her to a rusty old bed. I saw him come closer to her, sniffing her neck. I knew if I did anything, he would hurt Jasmine even more, so I kept my mouth shut. He finally found a good spot, covered her mouth with one hand, and lifted her chin up with the other. He said,

“Now, I’m sorry that things didn’t work out with you and Jordan, but you should’ve known better then to come to a house full of vampires.” He then bit into her neck, and she screamed as best as she could with his hand over her mouth.

POV: Jasmine

I screamed as best as I could as the 2 razor sharp fangs sank into my neck. I fidgeted, but it did me no good, since he had super strength and all. I felt blood running down my neck and covering my body, but it comforted me a little that it was so dark that I couldn’t see it. I could feel myself becoming weaker and weaker as he drained me, and finally, I closed my eyes, hoping for death to come soon so I would suffer no more pain. All of a sudden, the fangs withdrew, and I could hear a loud commotion going on, but of course, I couldn’t see anything. A minute or two later, I felt myself being unchained and lifted into gentle and familiar arms. I heard a familiar voice say,

“It’s ok, Jasmine, it’s Jordan, you’re safe now.” After I heard this, I blacked out.

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Comments:

Aww good.
I'm glad that's resolved. :)

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for reading and commenting!♥

Tell Me Wen Yhuu Update Plez

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

I defintely will, I'm glad you loved it!♥

I LOVED IT! KOOL! so she gonna become a vampire they gonna kiss and hug and other things i cant say incase there is children around. and they gonna have little vampire babies and THE END! pleaz dont do that. haha! make it more suspenseful and a bit gory. hehe! nvm its okay if u dont though!

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha, it's not over yet. And no, that's not what's going to happen, you'll just have to wait and find out. It gets pretty suspenseful in the upcoming chapters, I promise. I love to add suspense, I don't like doing what you explained, because it would make me fall asleep writing it! Haha, anyways, thanks for commenting!

AWWEEEE!!!!! =D that's sweet...the last part at least. =D

+Hecate+

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad you liked it!♥

awwhh
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loveed it

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad you did! Thanks for commenting!♥

Kathy
(not registered user)

I loved this chapter .. I'm still waiting for more! :)

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad you loved it! I'll update ASAP!♥

CUTE I Love it Please tell me when you update!

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do. I'm glad you ♥ed it! Thanks for commenting!

oh i don't like his dad

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, I don't like his dad either....

oh my gosh!!! i loved this chapter!!!!!!!!

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Yay! I'm glad you did!♥

hehehe!!! i still loving it! i'm off to the next chappie once again.

Posted: Oct 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Yay! I'm glad you still do... Keep on reading!



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